Hi, Quite good. I like it. It does need a beta reader go over it but there are only a few things. You might also need to explain why he is going to Hogwarts in seventh year and not before. It's a bit confusing. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapterAuthor's Response: Hi thanks for reading my story, i never said he was in the 7th year in hogwarts, i will say in the 3rd chapter that he is goint itoo 6th grade Report Review
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