{reviewid: 1942748, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
5th June 2008:
Its amazing! Write more and let me know wen u do! 10/10
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much; I really enjoyed writing something like this. I've gotten some of the first part of the sequel written, but I'm trying to get the sequel to my other story written first. I'll let you know when I post it (as long as I remember).~Jen
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{reviewid: 1942711, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
5th June 2008:
damn. Very good. What's the song btw? Are u writing a sequel? I think you shud. LOL. All in all very good story.
Author's Response: Your so damn hot by OKGO
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{reviewid: 1941696, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
3rd June 2008:
that means that she said yes right? Lol. It didn't make a lot of sense... Haha
Author's Response: yes, it's why i said that her voice began to waver
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{reviewid: 1871253, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
21st March 2008:
aw tht ending was sad and rele sucked emotionally. but all in all the story was PRETTY good... i rele luv nethng to do wiht lily and james and harry and ginny so its one o the best ones ive read. and i hope u grow up to b/become and author...
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{reviewid: 1817684, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
3rd February 2008:
im 13 to ill give u my email address... email me sometime...
Italiangrl10196@aim.com
Id luv to get to kno u... ha
good story btw... ;)
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{reviewid: 1816118, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
2nd February 2008:
who is that hes HOTT! im gonna give u my email... email me sometime i love ur writting and do u mind if for one of my stories i take the song idea?? i think its reely good! anyway here... pookie4396@aol.com or italiangrl10196@aim.com email me sometime.
Author's Response: okay i will if i have time in my life, cuz i'm in a really hectic time. i 'm so busy lol. but i will if i can. and sure you can use the song idea i mean its not patoned or something. its just something i wanted to put into mine =] so sure if you want, you can use it. thanks for liking my story, and for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1781450, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
6th January 2008:
wow omg omj omhp omd holy crap im speechless that was good and i luvvv tht song
Author's Response: wow thank you!!!!
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{reviewid: 1773414, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
1st January 2008:
this story is very confusing for two reasons
#1- you have a lot of spelling mistakes
#2- the stroyline is just hard to follow
but im gonna continue to read it anyway cuzz its good!!
~
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{reviewid: 1770835, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
30th December 2007:
that story was like driping in fluffiness it was so adorable
Author's Response: haha yeah thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 1770699, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
29th December 2007:
its a good story but u make a lot of spelling errors and forget a lot of letters
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{reviewid: 1762222, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
22nd December 2007:
aw! so sweeet!!! They are such a cute coupple!
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{reviewid: 1762209, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
22nd December 2007:
nice work! its really good story!
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{reviewid: 1762204, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
22nd December 2007:
nice so of the weasly temper!! haha!
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{reviewid: 1758076, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
18th December 2007:
I just have one word for you.
NICE!
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{reviewid: 1758048, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
18th December 2007:
I laughed so hard at thatit was littlerly(not spelled rite) 5 or 10 minutes before i commented. haha! Any way nice, very nice!
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{reviewid: 1757715, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
18th December 2007:
niccce!!! Cant wait to read the next chappie!
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{reviewid: 1756711, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
17th December 2007:
That was a really good story kep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it! Glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 1755331, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
16th December 2007:
NOT ANOTHER CLIFFIE! IM GETTING ANGRY! no im kidding i love the story just hurry and update!
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{reviewid: 1755327, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
16th December 2007:
no not a cliffie!! thats so mean!!! But the stories good!
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{reviewid: 1755325, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
16th December 2007:
nice touch with the lipstickkk!!
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{reviewid: 1755265, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
16th December 2007:
you are so mean you better hurry up and write the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: lol. i just submitted it. don't worry, child. all in good time ;]
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{reviewid: 1660242, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
8th October 2007:
HURRY UP WITH THE UPDATES UR KILLIN ME HERE THIS STORY IS AWESOME!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm trying to be good now :)
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{reviewid: 1627937, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
13th September 2007:
nice pic chap 9 almost done i can't wait!!!
Author's Response: ahh! lol its not almost done, maybe a couple pages away from half way being done.. = ] i am currently reading a 700 page book and its my top priority. so its kind of consumed me. i started the series on 3 or 4 days ago and i'm already on the third one. hahahah =P i dont know if you 've heard of it but its the
twilight" series by stephenie meyers, you should go to stepheniemyeres[dot]com if you've read the books or heard of it. they are excellent! = ] thanks for the review, and your patience for reading my response thats completely irrelelvant to HPFF =P
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{reviewid: 1598983, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
26th August 2007:
i forgot to review a coupple chps ago james had RAVEN BLACK HAIR LIKE HARRY NOT BROWN
srry i just get a little testy sometimes and ya kno but besides that i love this story
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{reviewid: 1592598, reviewer: 'MonaPotter230'}
23rd August 2007:
why the hell did you do that i like sisiur and james being friends
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