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Review #1, by LovlyRita_StaffPaper Hearts: Ink Stains

5th August 2011:
The review below this one was left on behalf of the glorious house of Slytherin. :)

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Review #2, by LovlyRita_StaffI Am the Walrus: Coming to Take You Away

7th September 2010:
(for some reason my review got cut off so I'm going to cheat and continue it here haha)
I wasn't sure if this had any parallels at all to the time when the Beatles spent all that time in India with the Mahareshi Mahesh Yogi (Did I spell that right? I don't even know). But if that is indeed what you are going for...I am blown away! This rocks!!!

Beautiful job, this is going in a story seekers recommendation. And you know what's awesome about me recommending things for story seekers? It's my show and I make the decisions!! MUAHAHAHAHA! :)

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Review #3, by LovlyRita_StaffMy Angel: The Power The Dark Lord Knows Not

3rd July 2010:
I loved this!! Oh Sev and lily. It should have been!! I loved your descriptions, I could definitely close my eyes and feel as though I was there. But, you know, then I had to open them because I had to finish the story. But what ev.

I think the dialogue was believable enough, and I definitely think that Severus would have fought Dumbledore on being needed elsewhere. Lily was his, and he would protect her at all costs. That's the number 1 thing I got from the HP series. Lily should have been his. Instead of James's. Who I hate.

But anyway, I loved how simple this was, and though I don't know what is going on with her illness, I think this story works, and you did a marvelous job, my dear!

Author's Response: Aww LR THANKS!!! Yes I hate James too. Sev and Lily all the way!!! I'm glad you liked it seeing as Sev is your BFF and everything. THANKS SO MUCH!

Oh and I have to add this ;) (ah staff wo!!!) hehehehe

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Review #4, by LovlyRita_StaffWhen You Bring a Pancake to Life...: When Pancakes come to life... (It's a talking pancake! Ah!!)

2nd June 2010:
Thank you so much for accepting the challenge that was given out in the podcast! (I can't remember if it was the story seekers or a staff chat, they are all starting to run together).

I loved this story! I don't think I've ever read anything concerning Luna and Draco before outside of the queue, so that was definitely a different turn for me.

I thought it was cute that she charmed the pancakes to sing to Draco. I hope she undid the spell before he ate them though, because I imagine that would painful. But I also like the differences between the pancakes- the first one was all kinda like...dude, what's going on? And the second one was "HOLY CRAP I'M HOT!!!" So that was a nice touch!

I also like that it was something that Luna's mother did for her father on Father's day. It totally fit with the Lovegood style and I liked it a lot!

I can't believe you were able to take my silly little thought and turn it into masterpiece!!! Thanks so much, this will definitely be talked about in some form on a future podcast, that I can promise you! :)

Author's Response: It was story seekers, and I got so excited when I heard it. I just had to do it.

I got so excited when I decided I was writing this. I came up with the idea when I was suppose to be listening in class (like that ever happens), and I literally got so excited about it that by the next period my best friend knew the whole story. It was definitely the one my favorites to write.

I knew I had to use Luna because it was just a Luna thing. It was definitely a blast to write from her perspective. It came easily with her, and I just fell in love with her character. I'm so glad you put it out there as a challenge because I would've never done it otherwise. This is definitely my favorite story by me and my favorite comment ever. Thanks for commenting and inspiring the idea.
Am. Ginny

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Review #5, by LovlyRita_StaffThis fic is crap, don't read it: Crap

9th July 2007: not the worst story I've ever read. But there's problems, oh yes. Learn to spell, and get a beta, you know the kind that read your story and say "hey this sucks?"


I take full credit for the name "Tiara Rastafa" LOL.

Author's Response: *sniff* I said no flames! I'm so going to report this.

lol. I'll have to credit you next chapter.

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