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Review #1, by Inside_the_mind_ofMe and Emily: Me and Emily: The escape

3rd August 2004:
this one was too short... i mean it worked with the song... but what would be really cool is if you used this as a prologue for a story... SIDE NOTE: another song that would go good here would be "Good-bye Earl" i love that song... and it is fitting... THIS REVIEW IS BROUGHT TO YOU BY A PROUD MEMBER OF THE OOTA!!

Author's Response: Dixie Chicks!!!! I love the dixie chicks! I could make a second chapter or a prologue...I'll think about it...

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Review #2, by Inside_the_mind_ofForever and For Always: *~*~*Forever and For Always*~*~*

3rd August 2004:
wow... i usually don't like songfics... but this one was good.... i like how your reflections on the past were fabricated... but based on the past we know from the cannon and believeable... great work!!! THIS REVIEW IS BROUGHT TO YOU BY A PROUD MEMBER OF THE OOTA!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Go OOTA!!! lol

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Review #3, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: The First Day

2nd August 2004:
i didn't really like this chapter as much... i find it hard to believe that dumbledore would be that short and curt with her... i mean he knows her background.... that just didn't seem realistic... OH and what was up with the missing letters or will that be explained later

Author's Response: Sorry, then.

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Review #4, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: The Trial

2nd August 2004:
tsk tsk tsk... ginny's full name is not virgina... fix it ... it is Ginevra... shame on you... i still like the chapter though...

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'll fix it later.

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Review #5, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: Invite to Charlie's

2nd August 2004:
love it love it love it... it is cute that there are so many different little relationships going on... kinda funny...

Author's Response: Thanks.

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Review #6, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: View of the Past

2nd August 2004:
i like this... i like how the thing with the malfoys was short and to the point.... and i really liked the photos and the newspaper clippings.... keep it up...

Author's Response: Thanks.

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Review #7, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: Ventures to Diagon Alley

2nd August 2004:
i like this story... it just makes me wanna keep reading and reading... but once again i have a question... wouldn't harry and hermione have read the paper... they would have known about anita right??

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #8, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: Battles with Ron

2nd August 2004:
just a quick question before i go to read the next chapter... i am assuming that ron and draco's birthdays aren't the same... if Annie was living in the Malfoy house she would have had to be told that she was Draco's twin... b/c he and ron are in the same year... which would mean that Annie wouldn't know her own birthday right???

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #9, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: Home with the Weasley's

2nd August 2004:
hey... once again... i like this story... and i like the fact that her coming back wasn't completely worry free... but i have a question... if she went to beauxbaxtons wouldn't she have at least a little bit of a french accent... and why did she not suspect something when she was made to go to a different school than draco

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Review #10, by Inside_the_mind_ofA Missing Weasley: The Meeting

2nd August 2004:
hey i like this story... there are a few cosmetic things but small typos aren't that big of a deal... even though i know this isn't possible... i like the idea... if it hadn't been for JKR saying that Ginny was the first female Weasley for many generations i would believe it... keep it up...

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Review #11, by Inside_the_mind_ofDear Harry, Dear Ginny: Opening the Lines of Communication

29th July 2004:
okay wow... why in the heck did you not continue this story??? it is fantastic...

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Review #12, by Inside_the_mind_ofHermione Pre-Hogwarts: A New Day

15th July 2004:
i have finally found the most insanely brilliant beta reader on the planet... so i am going to be updating the chapters... she suggested some things that will make it more british... and many other things that need to be fixed... so just wanted to let everyone know.. also if you see anything that needs to be fixed... don't hesitate to let me know... !! thanks!!

Author's Response: I HAVE NOW FINISHED MAKING THE CORRECTIONS... THEY ARE MOSTLY GRAMATICAL... BUT ONE THING KINDA IMPORTANT DID CHANGE AFTER I REREAD THE 1ST BOOK... TO SEE WHAT I MEAN YOU MAY WANNA RE-READ THE LETTER FROM ESTELLA IN THE NEW DREAM CHAPTER... SORRY IF YOU MISSED MY ERROR...

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