I love the writing style and the characters and even how you introduced the squib idea.
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I love your writting style it all comes together so well, and I love the story idea I cant wait to see where Harry's and Jasmine's relationship will go in terms of mother figure and son figure.
Great jobAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it enough to review, so thank you. Report Review
I really like your mention of Potter and no one liking him, its nice to see it from a diffeent point of view. I really like your writing style as well, it very clean cut.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
I loved how casual Harry is about his secret relationship with Hermione especiall the just between friends part. I think your writting style is very acuarte to the characters attitudes in the books and with how JKR writes herself.
=)Author's Response: lol i was trying to write him as being rational, and keeping a semi-calm head lol. thanks, im glad you think that! personally, i don't think its right to compare my writing style to JKR's on any level, unless you're describing it as horribe lol Report Review
I loved it and the whole idea behind the story and I am totally curious to know what memory will trigger his love for Hermione again and their child. Keep writting pls.
=)Author's Response: will a memory trigger it? or will Bonnie do something? or maybe Hermione caves in? hmm... you never know what I have up my new concert tee sleeves... Report Review
Cool, I love the love triangles going on and I can acually see it happening. I cant wait to se what happens>
=)Author's Response: haha im glad you like it, this is something new im trying, because i normally disregard book six, but im just gonna go with the flow lol Report Review
I love the turn of the story and I really believe Draco doesnt want to be bad and its just all around him and he cant help but be sucked in deeply by it. I also think he does want to escape and have a normal life, i love the portaral of angsty Harry as well.
=)Author's Response: haha, well thanks Report Review
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