That was beautiful. It's a great depiction of their relationship. I like the second person narrative, but I think the third person may have been more effective here. Regardless, I really enjoyed this.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review :)
This is quite an old piece of my writing, but I'm glad you liked it. Looking back at it, it was the first time I'd tried writing in second person, so it wasn't entirely successful, obviously. I may rewrite it one day, who knows.

Thanks for the review!

-Giola

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I was right! It was Draco! I don't usually like the Draco/Hermione pairing but I really enjoyed this. It was a very original idea, and I'm glad you explained how he was getting in to the Gryffindor girls' dorms.

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I really enjoyed this. The formatting is off, and you've left out some words and punctuation, but it was a very interesting read. Once I got to the end I realized that it would make sense for collected, bookworm Hermione to be upset about these things, but try not to show it because it would seem out of character for her. I have a feeling that her companion in the night is Draco though. If I'm right, I'm curious to see how she reacts to it.

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Hahaha! That's so cute! I bet that's really what happened!

Author's Response: thank you :)
sorry VERY late reply but haven't been on for ages!

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I've enjoyed this so far, but...where are the other chapters?

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That was an awesome way to end the chapter. I hope you continue with this story.

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I hope she gets along with Hermione.

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Aw, I would love to be one of the Famous Trio--Four.

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A wonderful chapter! Christmas is such a sweet time.

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Remus! Yay! Anyway, I think Ron's gonna love that present.

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This was a very lovely chapter. The chemistry between Morgan and Ron is terrific.

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Yay, the kiss! You did a very good job writing that scene. ^_^

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Oooh, what does he need the snow to do? I have to keep reading!

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She writes to her diaries like I do, sort of. I write to pets that have passed on. I like the idea of having a whole chapter as a diary entry. It's a great opportunity to reveal more about the character.

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That diary sounded absolutely beautiful. It inspired me to actually update mine...Anyway, great chapter. I'm gonna keep reading! :]

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I love it! It's great so far. I'm just wondering, why do you put spaces like this: " [text] "?

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So very cute. I love it so far!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!

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I'm definitely loving this story. I hope you plan to write more, if not, I'll be sad. 10/10, which is what I've given you for each chapter!

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Aww! That last scene was so adorable!

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I could never turn by back on Remus! But apparently Shadow can. This was darker than the last chapter, but not by much. Another good chapter.

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Ooh, angsty roller coasters are the best. I believe my favorite is Goliath.

Anyway, awesome chapter again!

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That was an interesting chapter. I really enjoyed it.

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So far, I'm in love.

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