Oh this is killing me...this story is so interesting! You really seem to have captured each character's personality! Keep up writing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and hope to see you again at the later chapters. Have no fear, I have no intention of stopping any time soon.

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Excellent...I wish I could read all night. I think it was in the last chapter, but that line about Ron summoning the butter cracked me up. Anyways good story. I gotta go to bed, but you can bet I'll read all weekend!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. It only takes a little thing that Ron does to send people into peels of laughter...lol...me too.

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Oh this story is so good. I'm addicted...no other way to say it. Plus this chapter gave me a lot of laughs!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm always looking to inject humor whenever possible.

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Exciting adventures! I'm glad you made Dud and Harry friends.

Author's Response: I hadn't originally intended to...it just sort of happened.

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No criticism. I am in extreme shock. UPDATE ASAP!! This is an astounding moment for me. By the way, I put a new story up. Check it out and leave reviews if you get the chance...or maybe you already read it? I don't know...it's called The Green-Eyed Orphan. Anyways...great story so far!

Author's Response: lol thnx. ill try and update as soon as i can:D

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excellent as it has been thus far. keep up the good work. I really really like your style and your story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much; it's nice to be appreciated.

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left me hangin in suspense there...great chapter though! you have really excellent talent!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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wow! just amazing! this brought me to tears! I really enjoy your writing style!

Author's Response: Aw, I usually shed a few when I read this chapter too. Thanks!

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Aww this is kind of sad! I want to know what's going to happen! Keep writing!

Author's Response: thanks(:

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This was amazing. You know that this could seriously be turned into an amazing longer story?? Very good.

Author's Response: Awwww, tahnk you soooo much! I am glad that u r my friend once again thanks!
~Ana

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Oh I love it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: haha thanks! I will =]]

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Hmm well I'm excited as to the developing relationship between Madeline and James. But I'm a bit disappointed that Madeline has no magical ability...Ah well. Still a wonderful story. Keep it up.

Author's Response: hahah everyone wants her to have magical abilities. but it's been done before and, to me, it seems like the obviouss thing to do [to make her magical] and i didn't want to make the obvious thing, so yeah. heheh
thanks again!

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OMG! I am so excited to find out how Madeline is going to take this news!

Author's Response: hhehe, you'll see =]]
thank you for replying =]]

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This story is terrific! I absolutely cannot wait to see what is going to happen! You have a knack for storytelling. You should write more stories!

Author's Response: thanks it means so much to me that you replied!

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Oh I love the suspense! I can't wait to read what will happen when she discovers their magic!!

Author's Response: heheh thanks!

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You have an excellent talent for writing. I can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: thank you!

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This was an amazing one-shot...however, I think it could turn into an awesome story if you wanted to take the time!! I loved it anyway.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm honoured you thought so highly of it :D You're the second person to mention a continuing story now ... I will consider it!! :P Thanks so much for reviewing!

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A sequel would be great. You really have a good talent. I would love to read about Rose and Scorpius.

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No worries. This chapter was excellent and left me hanging on the edge of my seat! Keep writing! I'm so excited to find out what happens next.

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oh i loved it!

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i liked the kiss, but i didn't like the fact that they're still not together! keep up the good work!

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very good plot line

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great! i love it!

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aw man why would i throw tomatoes at you? I love your story!

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the story is still amazing! again, let me know if you want a banner.

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