{reviewid: 1513847, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
14th July 2007:
Very Very good. Unbelieveable heh heh :] Good luck in the swim meet! :]
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{reviewid: 1513832, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
14th July 2007:
I love this story!!! 10/10!
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{reviewid: 1503374, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
8th July 2007:
You need to spell-check this a couple of times through. That would really help because it is a fabulous story.
Author's Response: yeah i know :( my friend was supposed to help me w/ that
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{reviewid: 1501410, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
7th July 2007:
Great story! I can't wait for the update!
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{reviewid: 1486444, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
28th June 2007:
Very good. You just need to re-read it a couple of times.
Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry if it was sort of hard to follow. I did kind of rush it didn't I.
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{reviewid: 1486436, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
28th June 2007:
Gasp! lol good job.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
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{reviewid: 1480847, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
25th June 2007:
yay! you've updated! good luck in getting in your university, im sure u will!
Author's Response: Well, I've still got another two years before that but thanks anyway. :)
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{reviewid: 1458823, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
11th June 2007:
please keep going :] i love this story
Author's Response: I will don't worry.
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{reviewid: 1458821, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
11th June 2007:
please keep going...i love this story :]
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{reviewid: 1458384, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
11th June 2007:
I like it :] continue on
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so sorry, but it's a one-shot, so it is technically 'done'. But if you have any ideas, I'd be happy to hear them!
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{reviewid: 1455398, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
9th June 2007:
aww, darn. This is where it ends. Poo. Keep going please :]]
Author's Response: Don't worry it'll keep going. I enjoy writing it too much to just stop now. Thanks for all your reviews! Glad you've enjoyed it thus far! :)
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{reviewid: 1455388, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
9th June 2007:
Good, good! :]]
Author's Response: Thanks!:)
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{reviewid: 1455347, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
9th June 2007:
In the summary you said that this was in Lily and James' generation. You might wanna change that...keep it up :]
Author's Response: I looked to see about fixing the other problem you pointed out. But I wasn't quite getting what you were saying. The era is Hogwarts. Thanks for reviewing though! :)
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{reviewid: 1455333, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
9th June 2007:
You mispelled Slytherin hehe :] Good so far, like it.
Don't mind my ratings...I never bother to do those
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I fixed it. I always add an e for some reason. Oh well thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1455321, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
9th June 2007:
Mmm...Good. Got me hooked :]
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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{reviewid: 1454261, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
8th June 2007:
Do continue... :]]
Author's Response: Will do.
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{reviewid: 1454242, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
8th June 2007:
Well...I honestly thought that it would turn out to be a lot better than it is...erm...it's a complete copy of Harry Potter...Really your just changing the character's name. My suggestion: add new adventures...be unique.
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{reviewid: 1454064, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
8th June 2007:
hmm..a little short you can do better lyss
Author's Response: It's my story, and I had no idea what to write. Thanks Eme
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{reviewid: 1453412, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
8th June 2007:
Umm..was that the whole story? O.o
Author's Response: Its a one shot....... did you not see that??
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{reviewid: 1452841, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
7th June 2007:
great story! just work on the length...i can't even believe i'm saying this..my own story's chapter's aren't that long either. Well keep it up!
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{reviewid: 1374870, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
11th April 2007:
It's off to a good start :]
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{reviewid: 1373620, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
10th April 2007:
How did Harry get the idea of Dobby? (Although after I read this chapter I'm starting to think that it's kind of all fake or somethin...)
Author's Response: Debby!
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{reviewid: 1373586, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
10th April 2007:
Is Rita Skeeter's lawyer supposed to be Snape?
Author's Response: No
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{reviewid: 1373407, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
10th April 2007:
How did Harry get the idea of a scar?
Author's Response: Because Harry has a scar
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{reviewid: 1371953, reviewer: 'marie%20radcliff'}
9th April 2007:
I think I understand this so far (I just read the 1st chapter). Is everything like the opposite of the way it really is? Actually I don't want to know the answer now. I'll just read and find out :D
Author's Response: Lol
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