God! That was awful! I cried through the whole last half of it! I raise my glass to you, or I would if I had a glass near by. Unfortunatly, the closest thing I have to me is a bottle of Mountain Dew...so I'll raise that! You will be proud to know that this is the first one-shot I have cried in. That's hard to do since I don't cry too much. Great job! I really, really enjoyed it!Author's Response: Hello tinparrot!! I love that pen name. It kind of reminds me of a cross between something out of 'Peter Pan', and 'Treasure Island!' Lol.
You even raise your glass (or bottle, lol) which reminds me of pirates. Yes I know, I'm weird.
Really? I don't know what to say!! Thank you!! I must check our your stories sometime. Your review made me giggle. xx Report Review
Oh wow. That was amazing. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up!
tinparrotAuthor's Response: Thank you so much tinparrot ^_^ Report Review
AAARGH! God!! You made me turn into the sister of Niagra Falls. GARH!!! I love this story and I can't wait to read the sequel. Keep it up. Great work. Report Review
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