Matthew sounds evil, but oddly hot. LOL! Great chappy. Update soon


Author's Response: I know. His evillness makes him kinda hot, but u got to remember that he is abusive ro Hermione. That takes away from the hottness. I will update as soon as possible. School is hard and demanding. LOL!!

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Oh, yeah. Hermione's bringing the beat down. That was a very good chapter. I loved it. I love the stories that you come up with. They are awesome.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. LOL!!! Yeah, Hermione's being the beatdown. Im glad you liked the chapter and my stories for that matter.

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That was too cute. I love your storys because they have some honest moments and some really sweet moments that you would think only happens in storys. Great job with all your storys so far and hopefully more in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing my story. I love writing really honest moments because a lot of those moments have happened to me personally. I am really glad that you like my storys.

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That was really cute with Draco and Hermione. I am glad that you made him more mature and not evil, but sweet. Well, he still needs to have that bad boy edge. LOL!!! Nice story so far.

Author's Response: I am glad you like my story. I know he really needs his edge but still sweet. Thank you for reviewing.

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I had to do an essay in school about Munchausen by Proxy. Its just horrible and not a lot of people know about it. Thank you for bringing that into your story. Great story.

Author's Response: I actually saw a show about this syndrome which I then I wrote an essay about it. It is sad and something that should not happen. I wrote this story with this in mind and to show people that this actually does happen and maybe they will be more aware about that. Thanks for reviewing

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YAY!! She died. Oops sorry. Why did Mouse go away? *pouts* Loved the chappie. Did not see that coming

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I am glad you liked the chapter.

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What is with Katie and her mother? The whole family is crazy...Except Mouse. He likes Rose. YAY!! Great Chappie

Author's Response: I am glad you liked the chapter. Yeah, the family is not an ordinary one. You will find out soon enough whats up with them.

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Aww. They are so in love. Scorpius is such a sweetheart in your story. I love him. I think Mouse and Rose should get together and Scorpius and Katie. That would be awesome. Another great chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, having everyone together would be awesome. Thanks for reviewin. I made Scorpius a sweetheart because I dont think Draco was all that bad,

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Wow. Great Chapter. Go Mouse. LOL!!! He has to be one of my favorite characters that you have created. He is the protector of his sister, but can also hurt her. I love that. He is not all nice nice with her. He will tell her whats what. 100/10 :)

Author's Response: Mouse is also one of my favorite characters. He is like a Greaser or a Drape but he has a great heart. He is a soft bad boy. LOL!!! I agree he will not really tip toe around anyones feelings but that is to an extent. Thank you for reviewing. I am glad you liked it.

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Mouse is awesome. Hehe. I love the name by the way. Katie seems weird though. There is something not right about her. Why doesnt Mouse want Scorpius and Katie getting married? Good chapter. I thought Scorpius liked Rose? I loved it!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I am glad you like Mouse. Scorpius does like Rose and the reason Mouse doesnt want Scorpius and Katie to get married will come in other chapters.

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That was truely horrible. How could Ron do that to poor Hermione? Grrness. I want to hurt him. It went from him being a happily married man to kissing another girl with his wife right there. I dont get it

Author's Response: Haha. Grrness? Awesome word. LOL! I am glad you liked the chapter. No one really gets this chapter, but it will be explained in later chapters. Promise. Thanks for reviewing

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Aww that was really cute. I love how Ron didnt want to go to the 'ball thingy' and it shows how Ron will do anything for Hermione to keep her happy. 10/10 baby!

Author's Response: Yea. I wanted to show how in love Ron is with Hermione. Thanks for the review. I am glad you liked the chapter.

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AWWW this is sooo cute!! Update really soon...Is Scorpius going to fall for that girl? What is she like? I have so many questions I can not take it.

Author's Response: LOL!! I can't tell you, but your questions will be answered soon. I will update soon, thanks for the review

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I really like this story. Keep it up!

Author's Response: I am soo glad you like it.. Thanks for the review!!!

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Is Freddy gay? And I dont understand why Hermione broke up with Draco. It is a great chapter, but it is a little confusing. Hermione should get with Freddy if he is not gay! He seems sweet

Author's Response: No, Freddy is not gay!! lol..Hermione broke up with Draco because...well, she is starting to have feelings for Rafael and she has to pick one. Thanks for the review and I hope in later chapters this chapter wont be as confusing.

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aw, it is cute! "Night ferret" lol. LoVe tHe StOrY

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!!!! lol that was one of my favorite things to write and i dont really know why!!!!!! ;)

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That was mean when the Dark Lord said he wished he didnt take Abby in. EWWW!! That is upsetting. Well, another awesome chapter I must say. You are really going somewhere good in this story. I dont know what it is but I will be reading

Author's Response: I am so glad that so many people like my story, in the beginning I didnt know if peple would like it!! It means a lot to me that you will still be reading and I hope other people feel the same way

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SOO WEIRD. Keep it up. It is way better than your last. Dont go down hill girl. I love your story

Author's Response: I wont go downhill, but if I do I know you will be totally honest with me. So thanks for that *hugs*

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Cute, but yeah not really good. I dont want to be mean, but yeah.

Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for being honest. I agree that it is not my best chapter.

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EWW Amelia was evil. Thats all I can say eww. UpDaTe SoOn

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I will update as soon as I can

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AWW Rafael is my favorite character. He was jealious and he stayed with Hermione. He is sweet!! Great Chapter!

Author's Response: Rafael is so sweet. He is a perfect mixture of some of my closest friends. Thanks for reviewing

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AW so cute!!! cant wait for more!!

Author's Response: WOW!! thanks so much for reading

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wow, I didnt know all that was going to happen.More!! MORE!!! hehe sorry, had fun with that

Author's Response: thats ok...lol!! I am updating as we speak!!!

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I dont really like Rafael, but I want him to get with Hermione... He seems so sweet!! I cant wait to see what the suprise could be!!!

Author's Response: LOL Not a lot of people like Rafael, but in this story he is one of my favorite characters. I dont really know if he will get with Hermione,but I will keep that in mind. Thanks for the review.

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love it...love it...love it!

Author's Response: I love that you love it!! lol. Thanks for reviewing

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