This is awesome. I really love it. :) You write very well, and your portrayal of Severus is very realistic.
I'd love it if you wrote a sequel. Maybe, after they graduate Camilla can become pregnant. That is, after all, a very important reason for their union. If you do end up doing something like that it would be a joy to see how you write Severus as an expectant father. I'm certain it would be spot on. ;)
Anyway, I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's soon. ^_^Author's Response: This review was so inspiring. You really got the plot bunnies running around in my head so thanks for that!
And I'm certainly glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and leaving a fab review! Report Review
YAY! I love it! Finally, no more ruined potions. :)
I loved this chapter. I can't wait until the next one.Author's Response: THANKS! Report Review
This is absolutely brilliant. I could NOT stop reading. It was like the final book all over again. Okay, so that was only like a week ago, but still, I can tell that the suspense of this is going to be the death of me. This is one of the best stories I've read. The plot is super incredible and I just cannot wait until the next update. I'm hoping that it's really, really soon. :)
Seriously, please don't leave me hanging for long. I honestly might die.Author's Response: WOW, I'm glad you like it so much. I've never really had anybody be this enthusiatic about this story, but I'm so glad you are. And it might be a week or so before I can find time to start writing the next chapter, but, if your name is the same here as it is on the forums, I'll be sure to send you a PM when it's up on the forums. Report Review
Ooh, I really love this. You did an awesome job at describing the action during the Quidditch game. That had to have been tough, but you pulled it off really well. :)
Anyway, keep up the good work. I hope you update soon.Author's Response: oh, thank you! yeah, i didn't want to make the game too boring/long, but im glad you liked it! Report Review
I absolutely love this. Seriously, don't stop. At least, not until you get to the end. :D
Anyway, I hope you update soon. Just so you know, I'm not adverse to the idea of a sequel. However, should it be your choice, I'll be more than content with just the completion of this.Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you like it! trying to find time to write the next chapter - I hope it's soon too. ;) Report Review
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