sequel! AHH I love you. This chapter is gorgeous, you are an uber duber talented writer. for sure.Author's Response: I love you too :D, and thank you very much. And yes, EE, sequel! :) Report Review
"And death had my legs, and was pulling me down, and Sirius hands were on my waist and he cried with our foreheads pressed together, my emotions dropped away and I was left with tiredness, and my heart was much too weak to break anymore, and Sirius's lips tasted salty in that last proper kiss, and then I draw back to breath - with such a limited number of breaths left, and that was it. Another part of me died."
These two sentences are why I love your writing style so much. Seriously, those are the best two sentences I have read in awhile in a fanfiction story. This story has been with me for two years and its sad that it's coming to an end.Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so very much! I loved writing that bit (still remember it) and thannnk youuu! Report Review
I cried during this chapter, then laughed, then cried again and finally some more crying. I can't imagine what it will be like in the coming chapters, I'll probably be sobbing. But I guess thats all due to your incredible writing! Lovely chapter, in so many ways :)Author's Response: Hey there lifewrittendown! I've had a lot of fun writing this story and I'm so glad you're so emotionally involved :)
AWWW. I'm very satisfied that James finally gave that witch Allison the boot! Now things can start to go more Effy's way, maybe? Anyways, thanks for the update, can't wait to read more! Report Review
AH! I haven't had enough of this story in my life! Glad to see you back to writing it! Great little teaser chapter, I'll have to go backvand reread since I've forgotten so much!Author's Response: :D Sorry it's a teaser. I will be updating soon though, I swear! December 16th. Keep an eye out on that day!
-Greta Report Review
I really love how much this story has improved over the chapters. It has really developed into a great one! keep on writing!Author's Response: :D thank you so much! Report Review
I love this story so much! Keep on writing! Report Review
1. I predict that James will dump the chick and then Artemis will be all crying and vulnerable in the Astronomy Tower, she let loose that she loves him and he won't believe her at first ( after all she broke his heart) and they will slowly build up trust with each other and then snog like maniacs
2. tooo many favorite quotes!
3. Al's absolutely adorable. but I honestly thought he was gay at first.
4. meh. rose and scorpy can do their thing. i don't mind.
5. James = favorite character
6. Artemis, the dumb bitch.
7. I think it really advertises the style of the story well :)
8. NOOO I think the author notes are mucho funny... keep writing them. KEEP WRITING THIS STORY, Report Review
WHY DID YOU MAKE JAMES HAVE A GIRLFRIEND. I'm all for a complex and sexual tension filled plot.but.wow...you like to pack in the drama...hahaha but thats what makes the story so addicting, so you're forgiven :) Report Review
awww I absolutely love your extremely lengthy chapters and boo about no fun in the dark :( haha keep on writing, this story is awesome.Author's Response: Heehee, I know, I had that scene in the dark planned for a while, but then when I actually wrote it I realised I could've done so much more but...it was too late, I guess! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks so much for the review :D Report Review
saldsdjads I love this story sooo much. Keep on writing! Aye, I sense a love triangle in the future. ( I guess that was my sad attempt at pirate talk.) :P well anyways. this story is great! Report Review
yay! I love reading this so much. It reminds me so much of J.K's writing in the Harry Potter Books...which is strange...but this story is so entertaining and mysterious you can't stop :) Report Review
Oh wow. I can't believe I just have stumbled upon this story. Its really great and your Minerva character is not unbearably uptight like a majority of them are! well.10/10Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you are liking it! I tried to humanise Min as much as I could, she's a good 50 years younger here, after all!'
Thanks for the review - it's always lovely to hear from people! Report Review
:( That was so heartbreaking. I hope its not a final goodbye.Author's Response: It isn't, thankfully - way too early in the story for that. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
oh boy, I hope that you continue writing this story because its rather entertaining. I have no idea where you will take the plot past this point.!!! thanks for returning to the story!! Report Review
woohoo! An update! I liked this chapter a bunch and am looking forward to the Christmas thing. I wonder what Albus will tell her.Author's Response: Yeah, and the good thing is that I'm almost done the next chapter! Aw, I'm glad that you did :)
Yeah, the Christmas thing will be very... fun. You'll find that out in the next two chapters.
Thankyous for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Teddy's an interesting character. While reading this story I haven't found enough reasons to think rose and scorp should be together. So whenever some guy comes in to the story I latch onto him. Like I was convinved that random bloke Nate was something.but anyways please keep writing, this is a wonderful story!Author's Response: Perhaps pairing Rose up with the random guy would make for the best ending. XD But it's true that Rose and Scorpius do not make an ideal couple, or even a half-decent one - they've gone beyond the "opposites attract" phase, and there's really no hope for them now.
Anyway, before I give away too much of the story, I'll thank you very much for taking the time to read and review. It means a lot that you've enjoyed the story so far! ^_^ Report Review
her eggos preggo thats all. Report Review
I really like this, but not the fact they are only in 3rd year. I thought the opening bit with Draco was a little inappropriate for 13/14 year olds...Author's Response: Yeah, I am aware ^^ I wrote it imagining they were older, then remembered she only had the Turner in Year Three. I changed some stuff to make it more appropriate, actually, but couldnt change it all without ruining its essence, so thats the reason ^^
~~Chelsea Report Review
I really like how this story is so out of character. Well you created your own Hermione and I think you did a fantastic job. keep writing! Report Review
oh gosh. this story is so heartbreaking. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review! Report Review
psh rings...just hunks of metal really, easily replaced.Author's Response: I guess it depends.. They signify a love that's bonded.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
epic win indeed! this was a very heart warming chapter! :p i can't pick a favorite ATC clouds...thats too dificult.Author's Response: Epic win for sure! :) Haha, aw, thanks anyway!
- Cathy Report Review
“I PICK DARE BECAUSE I’M FROM AMERICA AND THAT OBVIOUSLY MAKES ME OUTGOING,” Melanie pulled her emergency spangled banner from Beth’s bosom and waved it vigorously, staring at Sirius with a patriotically crazed expression.
THAT made MY life! Report Review
that was really, really sad. omigosh. awesome story you have here.Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
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