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Review #1, by marieluzReal Ladies.: Of Longbottom and Sincerity.

15th October 2011:
Voted! Hope you win!

Honor likes... Fred? When did this happen, lol? This isn't going to be pretty.

Author's Response: I know! I amaze myself sometimes with my hooks. Have you all missed me?

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Review #2, by marieluzReal Ladies.: Of Cowards and Liars.

30th September 2011:
There are actual tears in my eyes. What was that?? :(

Lorcan better have a good explanation for this...

Author's Response: I know, I know! :( And no... he doesn't. Not yet anyway.

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Review #3, by marieluzPatchwork: Sentimental

11th July 2011:
Louis is amazing. =D Hilarious.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like him! :)

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Review #4, by marieluzSky: An Epic and Important Quest

23rd June 2011:
This was so adorable!

Now that I've read this, I've found myself in the same predicament that James was in. I don't know my favorite color! Ah!

Author's Response: awh, don't worry, my favourite colour changes with my mood, so you're not alone in not knowing it! when i read this review, my favourite colour matches James'. now i quite like the grey of the box i'm writing in (;

so pleased you liked it, and hopefully you resolve your little issue soon! thanks! ^^


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Review #5, by marieluzUnhinged: Judged

23rd June 2011:
Haha, I like Draco jealous.

Awww!! They're beating Scorpius up right in front of his parents! What kind of manners are those? Rude Weasleys!

Great chapter! I've favorited (is that a word?) this story and am looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: believe me, jealous Draco is nowhere near as much fun to read as he is to write. :')

well, the Weasleys have never really been ones for manners, especially to the Malfoys! and in all honesty, i have reason to believe that a certain Ronald Weasley would be delighted by the thought of humiliating Draco and Scorpius Malfoy in such a way (;

i'm so glad you liked the chapter, and well. it might not have been a word before, but it certainly is now! thank you for your lovely reviews, and the next chapter will be out soon! ^^


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Review #6, by marieluzUnhinged: Silenced

23rd June 2011:
DOMINIQUE??

Well that's surprising.

Author's Response: haha, it was meant to be! don't worry, if you're a Scorose fan then that will be in here too!

this is NOT a crack fic, but it's not going to be deadly serious for at least 99% of the time, so bear that in mind when reading (;


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Review #7, by marieluzUnhinged: Irritated

23rd June 2011:
Astoria and Draco are sooo adorable, regardless of what Scorpius thinks.. =D

This is great and hilariously funny!

Author's Response: adorable? don't worry, i'll keep it a secret from him, but Draco would kill you if he heard you say that. he's masculine and all that jazz, he's not adorable!

(although personally, I agree with you. he and Astoria are actually so sweet. but i know stuff no one else knows :D)

i'm so glad you like it, and funny is never a bad thing in my book! ^^


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Review #8, by marieluzUnhinged: Biased

23rd June 2011:
Hilarious! I've never read anything that centered on Astoria, but this is wonderful!

Author's Response: i'm so happy you think so! and truth be told, i've never read anything Astoria-centred either, so this is really my first foray into the Malfoy-family. which makes your judgement on it so important to me!

obviously, the fact your opinion on it is so lovely just makes me grin like an idiot (:

thanks for reviewing! ^^


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Review #9, by marieluzEnemies with Benefits : Interesting News

1st June 2011:
Eh, there's always a pregnant girl. Not that that's bad! It adds to the drama. It's kind of weird that it's Dessie's younger brother tho.. Oh, Tosh.

Amazing chapter, as always!!!

Author's Response: I love the added drama that a pregnant person makes, it makes the story so much better! (:

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Review #10, by marieluzHide and Seek: Infatuation with Ice Cream and Idiocy

2nd May 2011:
...

that was sad.

and i think i will go and cry now.

...

:(

not that it wasn't satisfying, though.

but...

:(

Author's Response: Aw, don't cry! That's going to make me sad. And when I'm sad I just can't update ;) Only joking, but for some positive chapters, there needs to be a negative one. Those two were far too happy for their own good ;) Thank you!

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Review #11, by marieluzBreathless: Mission: Get the Hell Away From Here Now

17th April 2011:
I just had a very enjoyable ten minutes.

The fact that I was reading this awesome chapter...

adding to the fact that I was eating Nutella sandwiches made it even better.

AWESOME.

I would say there's too much snogging, but there's no such thing as too much snogging... lol.

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Review #12, by marieluzEnemies with Benefits : Enemies With Benefits?

4th April 2011:
Fred's sooo hot. And there were only three o's in "so" because if you put more than three letters on anything, they erase all but one.

They're just too cute, aren't they?

Favorite quotes:

They should make tee shirts that say Dessie is a Genius. (i always say that [with my name of course] and for some strange reason, no one ever agrees w/ me :( lol)

(and that part where she mimics everything he says [that is so annoying!] and the whole chapter :D)

fantastic!!

Author's Response: Dude, Fred is banging. I love written his character (:

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Review #13, by marieluzPretty Boy: Survival of the Fittest

3rd April 2011:
I love Louis and Al. And Rose. You always make likable characters. Except for the unlikable ones. xD

Surprised at how quick you were to add a plot to this story!

awesomeness!

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Review #14, by marieluzHide and Seek: Hostages

3rd April 2011:
Whoa. This chapter was slightly crazy and confusing.

BUT OMG YAY FOR KATIE AND GEORGE!

finally. well technically they're not back together yet, but soon, right?

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Very crazy. Totally confusing. And totally geokat.

And you're right, they're technically not back together yet. Just snogging against trees ;)

Thanks!


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Review #15, by marieluzPretty Boy: Juice-y

27th March 2011:
my god, you're Brilliant.

with a capital B.

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Review #16, by marieluzThe Perks of Being Elizabeth Goodbody: Suffocate

26th March 2011:
“STOP!” A male voice cried, the door to the compartment sliding open violently, “In the name of love!” (Ahhh! Lol. I just read a line similar to that, and that didn't make it any less funny! xD)

James is so cute, being all brotherly! Sweet.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)

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Review #17, by marieluzSeven Weddings: A Dance.

24th March 2011:
“Good to meet you, mate,” Albus grins. “I’m glad you kept my girl occupied, otherwise she might have noticed how late I was, and that would have been bad – very, very, very bad.” (My goodness, is that from Gilmore Girls?)

Omigoodness. Favorite line ever: "Stop, Albus." “In the name of love? Or just in general?”

Natalya's mean!! Now my mental picture of Al is ugly and nerdy. Which he is not. I ♥ Al.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, that is from Gilmore Girls! And Albus is adorable, something even Natalya will admit to you. He's attractive. She just hates him. :)

Thank you very much :)


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Review #18, by marieluzDear Cupid: Boys and Pumpkin Juice

23rd March 2011:
Ooh, Scorpius was jealous...

I don't like this Shawn character..

Great chapter!

Author's Response: yes, he was. thanks for the review!

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Review #19, by marieluzBreathless: Blurs and Whirlwinds.

14th March 2011:
Ohmigosh. Al... Hot! Although I wished that he had a better reason of wanting to sleep with her.. like actually liking her.

Al is so right, they have like bucketloads of passion. UST UST UST!

I love this story so much!!

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Review #20, by marieluzDéjà Vu: Agent Names, Target Barbie and War

12th March 2011:
I totally did not follow what happened in that chapter at all--all I know is that it was AWESOME!

BTW, was Artemis Gold Fox? Did she name herself that? Where did it come from? Lol..

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Review #21, by marieluzEnemies with Benefits : Mistake Number Two

12th March 2011:
That was so good. This story is so good. You are so GOOD!

Fred is not good. He is AMAZING. Ohmigosh that scene where he went to her dorm because she insulted his snogging? Hot.

Grea-a-a-a-a-t!

Author's Response: NO, YOU ARE GOOD!

Freddy is the definition of amazing. (:


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Review #22, by marieluzClash: Off-kilter

9th March 2011:
Ohmigosh. Favorite chapter ever of any chapter I have ever read of any story. Ohmigosh. Ohmigosh. Ah!!! They're so cute!

You're a-a-a-amazing. Emphasis on amazing.

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Review #23, by marieluzThings Unforeseen: Everywhere

9th March 2011:
A-a-a-a-amazing! So glad you updated! Please please keep updating because this is really really good!

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Review #24, by marieluzSeducing Teddy R. Lupin: Christmas in April (Date: Part 2)

5th March 2011:
I adore the banner; it's great!

Aww. I love Teddy. Why does he have to be so obnoxious? I guess being around Vic just changes him.

I was so sad when she just kissed him on the cheek.. he should have just planted one on her, that's what he should've done! Lol.

GREAT chapter, and I seriously hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! You're too sweet :)

A lot of people seem to be of the same opinion as you - I guess, Vick's just an oddball.

Thanks for the review! I'll try to update soon! :D


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Review #25, by marieluzThe Perks of Being Elizabeth Goodbody: Shock

1st March 2011:
Ahh! I'm so sad right now. Because I was reading this and then I got to the part about the Nutella, so I went to go make myself a Nutella sandwich (and there I know my mom bought a new can a couple days ago!) and when I checked in the pantry, IT WASN'T THERE! And what's worse is that I don't know where it went. So now I'm sad and Nutella-less. But this chapter sort-a made it better! Thanks!

Sorry for that long, irrelevant Nutella rant. Onwards with this review!

James is so funny! I loved G.A.T.H.S.W.E. and G.A.T.M.A.T.H.S.W.E!

Dom was mean though. That's so sad. Eliza is SO good enough for Al. They're like perfect for each other.

I loved that part where she was trying to get the Nutella back and then Al rolled her over.. Awkward, but cah-yute!

Great chapter!

Author's Response: I HAD THE SAME EXPERIENCE! it was like three months ago though, but still! i was seriously craving nutella like nothing else so i went to get then couldnt find it and then raided like the entire kitchen. i still couldn't find it though, it was really sad :(

it's okay, i just sort of ranted about nutella too. we should be nutella ranting buddies! :D

james is probably my favorite character i've ever made, but that's probably because he's basically me in boy form. er, yeah. haha

dom isn't really mean. she's just protective of her family. well, thats a lie. she's mean, but she has a reason to be. i would never make someone mean just to make them mean, ya know? too cliche.

i liked that part too! hehe thanks for reviewing!!


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