This was by far, my favorite chapter of the story. The way it was written was simply beautiful. I'm glad I stuck with this story until the end, the waiting was so worth it.

-Emily

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This chapter was great! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: :D, thank you!~Jaymee

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First of all, thank you for updating! It always makes me smile when I see that a new chapter has been added to this story, which is really great by the way :] But I liked this chapter a lot! But I have to say I'm on team Draco, Hermione can't marry Jared. He's a nice guy and all, but Hermione isn't as in love with him as she is with Draco. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see where you go with the story. Hope to see a new chapter soon!

Emily

Author's Response: I love writing this story! I just go into periods of not writing, and then writing non-stop. I'm just weird that way. Yeah, Hermione should be with Draco. But Jared was so nice to her, and looked out for her. That counts for something, right? Haha, You won't have to wait long-- I've already submitted the next chapter! And not at all, thank YOU SO MUCH for reading. It keeps me so motivated [:~Jaymee

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i LoVeD tHiS cHaPtEr! KeEp Up ThE gOoD wOrK! uPdAtE sOoN pLeAsE!

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ok, I REALLY love this story. It's so sweet. Perfect 10/10
Good job =]

Author's Response: Thank you!

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I really love this story, I think it's well written and really sweet. I hope you update soon.
=]

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I liked it, as usual. Keep up the good writing and update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and glad you liked it. The next chapter is already awaiting validation. =D

~Fire

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hahaha, that was wicked hilarious! i loved it!

Author's Response: thanks :D

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Hahaha, I loved it! I can't wait until you update. Keep up the fantabulous work :)

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Aw, I loved it. It was wicked funny how people kept coming in and finding out her "secret". Great job! I can't wait until you update. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review.

~Fire

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hahaha that was a really good chapter. I liked the ending.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.

~Fire

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awww, this was a sweet chapter. I really liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked it.

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love the ending, great job


Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!

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This story sounds like it will be very interestig. Good writing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it's not boring becasue I was worried it would be.

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I really love this story. It touches my heart eveytime I read it. It's really sweet.

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Oh I really loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

~Fire

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yay!!!*does happy dance* She finally told him! I'm so very happy now and I guess my patience was worth it. I loved this chapter and I think it's my favorite one so far. 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the amazing review! And I agree, I hope the wait was worth it.

~Fire

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ahhh, you're still testing my patience. but i did like this chapter. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the patience, I promise its nearly there, you will get the fruits of the waiting soon. Thanks again

~Fire

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I loved this chapter so much I can barely put it into words. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review

~Fire

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As usual I loved it! but when is Fallon gonna tell Oliver? I'm sorry but I'm an impatient person who can only take so much. but i'll sit here in front of my computer impatiently waiting. But whatever, I love your story and I'm sure you will have her tell him at just the right moment. Good writing, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the patience, perhaps I should put a warning on it for impatient people. Don't worry, it won't be too horribly long from now.

Cayla~Fire

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Oh, I loved this chapter. I'm so happy Harry and Hermione made up. Yay! I can't wait for you to update!

Author's Response: Yay! Rofl I am too, I missed Harry ]= thx for R/R!!!!~Jaymee

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I loved it! It was a really good ending to the story =]
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

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i loved this chapter. it was really good and even made me cry when they were in the graveyard. good job.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Ok, to start off I loved this chapter as usual. But mostly I'm just using this reveiw to tell you something about my review in the next chapter.

I found where you say that Fallon and Oliver make the team as fisrt years. It was in chapter 7. This is what you said:


"Oh. Well we ought to get started," She realized that we'd been talking a bit too long. We were her favorite students. We already knew how to fly when we came. And we made the team as first years. All of us. We just kept it quiet.

I just thought I'd help you out. Good writing though.I really do love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you, I didn't look past chapter 2, so I didn't think to look there. Well, as I said, I intended it to be second year, and I can now go correct that. I appreciate the review, and that you went through the trouble to find that.

Cayla~Fire

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I like the chapter but I have one question, in the first or second chapter( i can't remember which) you said that Oliver and Fallon made the quiddich team in their first year but in this chapter you say they made the team in their second year. which is it? I really like the story but this kinda confused me a little.

Author's Response: I'm not aware that I did that, I'll have to go check this out...Thank you for pointing this error out.

~Later

I've just re-read my first two chapters, and can't find where I said what year they made the team, though I believe you, that I said it somewhere. It was my original intention for them to have made the team in 2nd year, as Harry was the first in a long time to make it first year. Thank you for telling me and I'll attempt to find it again and fix it.

Cayla~Fire


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