Okay, I must say when I read your summary I was a bit skeptical about this story. But the article part about Piper`s family was well written and thought out, also I like the fact that Piper and Oliver don`t hate each other. It truly is a breath of fresh air. Don`t worry about it not being humorous yet because sometimes if you have to much humor in the beginning you could end up falling short on the humor aspect later on. But all in all this was a good chapter and your writting is very good. Looking forward to the next chapter. 10/10
Saryn

Author's Response: I like that you liked it! I planned out this story...and originally PJ did hate Oliver...but there are tons of those stories on this site...so I made some alterations. Thanks for the kind words and the review!

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Okay first of all I absolutly love Severus/OC fics, and this one is just brilliant. I was not expecting Nancy to know it was Sev. Also there were some funny quotes like the one about Peter eatting and the one with James saying "Roses are red..." and then Sirius replying that James acctually thought it would work. Keep up the good work.

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I'm intrigued so far, but I must say the chapters are kind of short. By the time I get to the end I feel... empty. The chapters have a nice flow and I like the way you word things. Nicely done. Other than the short chapters, keep up the good work...

Saryn

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

I understand about the chapters :) Slowly they're getting longer, I just need to work out how long they need to be! I'm getting there!

Thanks for leaving a review.

Jess Xx

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Okay I normally do not read Draco/Hermione stories, let alone any story with the trio&company as main characters, but when I read your story I was completely captivated. It does not even feel like I am reading about Hermione. I do not know if it weird to say this, but I would have rathered that Harry and Ron did not know, since it is a Draco/Hermione fic. But none the less your story is still fantastic and I can not wait until the next chapter.

Saryn

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I'm not usually into the stories where the OC is vampire or werewolf but this one has captivated me in a way I can not explain. Keep up the good work and update pronto.

Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm glad that I was exception. I just didn't want to write about a normal witch. The story would seem so 'normal'.
I'll try to post another chapter up as fast as I can.


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Ah! Matthew is such a jerk. But I think the reason he hates Claire and Sirius being friends is because Matthew likes Claire. All the signs are there: jealousy, hating Sirius, being angry at Claire for "ditching him". But I maybe wrong.

Anyways it was a good chapter. And the length of the chapter doesn't matter as long as it is a good chapter. Which you happened to do with this one. And when I read about Claire in the end I was like. OMFG!

Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Maybe you aren't wrong... hehe :P

Thanks so muuchh ^_^ and how do you think I handled that? I'm not sure... Hmm

Thanks so much, yet again!! x

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OMG! I've been reading this story for a while and I must say it truly is a very excellent story. All the chapters are amazing but this chapter went over the top. The ending was possibly the best thing I have read on this site. It was intense, and very well written. I hope you update soon. Keep up the fabulous work.

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Awww this is going good. Hope you update soon (no pressure).

Author's Response: thank you ery much for your review :) i live for reviews :)
i'll update as soon as possible but it might be slow over the next few months... it's exam season again ay :(
x

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OMG this is so good . update soon!


Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to get it out soon

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AH! I love it. Its amazing!!! Only two words - Update Soon!

Author's Response: thank you!

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I love your story. I don't know how to explain it but I am falling in love with your characters. The only thing I don't like is the fact that you changed the names. But otherwise its is absolutly brilliant. :)

Author's Response: Aw, Yay! Thanks!

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I love you story keep going.

Author's Response: thanks!

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This is really good. I love it, keep up the good work.

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