I like this, it seems like a good start to me. Your writing is pretty solid and I like the basic plot you laid down so far. I'm definitely going to keep reading, and I'll tell you what I think later today. Hope it stays good!Author's Response: If you liked the first chapter, I think you'll like the story. The first chapter is one of the weakest ones, in my view. Let me know what you think as you make your way through the story. G. Report Review
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