I loved this chapter, it made me laugh with all the girls hormones everywhere. I'm so glad you updated I was begining to miss Evee! How many chapters are left now?
xAuthor's Response: I was beginning to miss writing about her! This is the alst night I have internet connection until Friday! I hate moving. There are about 10 chapter left, maybe a couple more or less depending how I fit everything in. Lots of love, Elle xx Report Review
I loved that story! A brilliant read.
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Written beatifully, brought a tear to my eye. Haha sorry it was a brilliant story well done. 10/10
xAuthor's Response: Wow! thank you. I should warn people to get a box of kleenex's for this story I guess. So glad you liked it. Report Review
Brilliant use of repitition! It was very effective in this story. I enjoyed reading it. I don't think I have read anything like it, very origanal. Well done. 10/10
xAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the awesome review and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
I wonder what's going to happen next! Evil Cliffy, do they find Aiden?
Please update soon.
xAuthor's Response: Well, the next chapter is almost finished, it should be up soon, well when it is written. lol, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Great start, a few grammer mistakes but still a brilliant start to the story. Carry writing on like this and you have a perfect story in your hands. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
xAuthor's Response: Thank you, I'm going to look over the story for the mistakes. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
That is one of the best chapters you've written! And well done for that. I really love this story 10/10
xxxAuthor's Response: Cheers honey! I've done a few chapters ahead of time and this was one of them, it was a lot of fun to work up to. Hope you keep loving the story! Elle xx Report Review
Haha I loved that, It made me laugh. The most at the end where Ron was hugging his broom...it's so like Ron to do something like that =]
xAuthor's Response: I'm glad you laughed! I can actually imagine Ron doing something like that, lol. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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