I'm terribly sorry for my lack of reviews on the last chapter, I'm afraid I was simply too devasted to leave a comment. :( What happened is absolutely heartbreaking, especially to those who loved Keely as a character. *tear* Poor hermione. Hopefully Ron will help her gget through this.
Beautiful writing, probably your best chapter yet!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much. I tried to put more emotion in this chapter... somehow. I'm just glad you liked it! Thanks soooo sooo much... again. haha. Report Review
OMG, this is so sad... I'm almost crying...
This was an incredible chapter, probably your best so far. I loved your Ron-hermione action!
Oh, please let wizards have special cures against muggle diseases!!!
Thanks for the great read!
Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Wow. Thanksssss sooooo muchhh! I say that all the time but seriously I love you all for freaking reviewing. You must keep reading. xx Report Review
Wow. Great chapter! I can't wait to see Eloise kick Cho's butt! :) I love how you were able to let the reader understand the battle raging in Ginny's head, that was extremely well done.
Thanks for the great read!
Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am quite excited to write the scene between Eloise and Cho to be quite honest. I am so happy that you loved the scene with Ginny, it was really fun to write her finally admitting the truth after 14 chapters. Thanks again! Report Review
OMG, you updated! WOW! I haven't realized for a long time since I didn't really check this story anymore! I loved this chapter, although i had to reread the last one to understand what was going on. :) I love your Hermione, many authors don't get her right, but you just nailed her personality!
Thanx for the great read!
Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: yeah i know its been forever! thanks sooo much! thats a big complement! your welcome! hehe. Report Review
*sigh* this is so perfect...I can't wait for Ron and Hermione to finally talk things through! That was a great chapter, and I can't wait for more!
Lala toodles! :)
P.S. I can't believe there's only 9 days until HP7! Ah! :)Author's Response: *sighs* I'm so glad you liked it. (:
I think I'll post the next chapter... RIGHT NOW! :O haha. Report Review
Ah, wonderful! I've been waiting for this for so long and it's here! :) You wrote that perfectly, it couldn't of been better! I love your descriptions of Keely, my heart melts when I see her little face!
Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Just reading what you said about Keely makes me so happy. I'm glad you adore her as much as I do. (: Report Review
YAY! You updated! Thank you so much! You wrote this chapter beautifully; I love your descriptions, they're extremely vivid. Great Job!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you liked it! i like it when authors describe scenes well enough for me to picture it in my mind so i do it too. hopefully everyone can picture what i do when i write the chapters. thanks for the review! Report Review
Ooh, great cliffy! :) I love how Harry softened when he saw Keely, that was a perfect touch. You are incredible and I CAN'T WAIT for Ron to find out! Thank you for the wonderful read!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! i love youuuu and your reviewsssss! (((:
Thank YOU for reviewing. xxxxx Report Review
Omg, this is wonderful! Thank you so much for updating so quickly! I absolutely love Harry's reaction, and the description of how cute Keely is(as always!).
This chapter makes me want to cry. Gosh, now I'm tearing up. Beautiful writing!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Awwwwwwwwww. Thats sooo nice. :D Aww I love you! lol. Seriously, this makes me happy. Report Review
I loved it! (as usual!) :). I love Keely, she's adorable, and McGonagall, Hagrid, and Portrait Dumbledore's reactions were perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing so well! I absolutely adore your writing style!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: REALLY?! haaahaa . yayyy. i'm sorry, i'm spazzing out really. thanks so muchhh. :D Report Review
Awww. so sweet... can't wait for the next chapter!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: thank you - this is my first fanfic so I'm glad I'm not a total loser. Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
OMG, I have never read a story as well written as this one! Congratulations and WOW! :)
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I really wouldn't go as far as to say that, it isn't as great as you make it seem, but wow. What a compliment! Thank you very much, I really appreciate that. It's so nice to know that all of that hard work actually paid off.
Thank you =] Report Review
Beautiful. I have just read your story after your two reviews of mine...
I love your Ron and Hermione, as well as Hermione and Ginny's closeness. Thank you for the great read and I can't wait for the next chapter.
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: This is really sweet of you. I'm really glad you've enjoyed it as much as I've enjoyed writing it. (Okay, well there were some times when I thought I might rip my hair out, but...) As for your story: I can't wait for more on that! Report Review
I loved this chapter! :) It was even greater than chapter one! I can't wait for Sirius to find out! *squeal*
Thank You for the great story! 10/10!
~Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Thank you, squeals are certainly the best form of reviews. Report Review
Beautiful. Ginny's memory of Eloise's first time flying made me cry. It shows that you put a lot of work into this chapter and it was definitely worth the wait. Absolutely breathtaking.
Sweetfrenchy24Author's Response: Dear reader, I'm glad you enjoyed how I wrote Ginny's memory and found it touching. I think that a lot of the time, teenage mothers can feel a different bond with their children, being so close to their own childhood still, and probably some of Ginny's rememberances of her own first joyful flights on a broomstick were interwoven with her daughter's. Thank you for your compliments, I hope you enjoy the next chapter! Report Review
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