I like it :)!
Though i was hoping he would secretly slip it to her in person some how.. oh well this way was good too! Please do update as soon as you can i would love to read more! 9/10

Author's Response: I cannot believe this! I haven't reviewed for you in forever! But you can certainly expect something soon, however. I've just been so busy, but this summer there will certainly be a lot of writing and reviewing coming from me to you!
fredlovesme18 :)

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thats cute ;) I like how you started it, and then changed the way you were writing very good technique :)! 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't been on in forever, but as soon as I saw your review I thought to myself, "I need to go on and respond!" I will update soon and I really look forward to this third book in your Heaven series.
Keep reading and reviewing,
fredlovesme18 :)

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That was really good :) I like how she told him finally, just let it go, it seemed natural for him to get mad and then get very quiet, and it was very nicely put at the end So good job! Cant wait to read the rest! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your words, sorry it's taken so long to update one is currently in validation. Thanks for reviewing :)

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That was a really well written chapter :) Good Job! 8/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much and for reviewing :)

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Of course its been ages, but please dont make it ages more! I cant wait to see what happens next! very enjoyable chapter :) LOVELY JOB! 10/10

Author's Response: It HAS been ages, and I'm sorry about that! I will hopefully be better about updating now that it's summer, haha. Thank you so much for reviewing and enjoying!

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that was good :) I liked it :) Cant wait to keep reading :) 8/10

Author's Response: Oh thanks!! Hope to see you back here soon!

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Its excellent how you portrayed how jealous Hermione felt towards Lottie, good job :) 9/10

Author's Response: Ohhh, I'm really glad that's coming through alright. I wasn't sure I was going about that in a very good way. Thank you! XD

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Aww that was cute :) Hermione finally admits to her feelings! YAY! lol :) Nicely done :) 10/10

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Thats a cute chapter, very well done :)

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That was wonderful, and I like how you left it without anything else to cloud it over, very nicely done! 9/10!

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That was nicely written .. though some little mistakes i think
you wrote here instead of hear, but thats ok, its the plot tht counts lol :) Good Job 8/10

Author's Response: Oh dear... There are sooo many mistakes in this story, I almost dread going back to look at it =P. Iwrote most of it when I was very young and my english skills were not what they are today. But thank you for leving a review, it's very appreciated! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story =)

LS

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Noel and Tony now I wanna see where that goes... lol. maybe along the lines of draco and hermione except like surprise preganancy or something ahaha no it was amazing I love you're stories fantastic job :) 10/10

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I'm sorry I couldn't finish this chapter I actually got about halfway through but it was very good so I will definately come back and finish later on! Good Job so far very very good chapter

Author's Response: thankz. sorry we couldn't stop. :) but thankz anyway. :)

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That was a good chapter... a little diffrent from first chapters I normally read... this one was really intense. but it was good

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that was good... I cannot wait to see the rest of it 8/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating :)

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Well then I can't wait for the epilogue I'm very excited to see what happens next :) 10/10

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Don't worry about not updating. I understand what ur going through (I have the same problem) lol but yes it was good I can't wait to read more and when you do find time please update 10/10

Author's Response: thank you ^_^ :hugs:

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It was very good, I can't wait to read more plz update soon 10/10

Author's Response: I will try very, very hard to update faster, thanks for reading, rating and reviewing :)


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That was very cute and I don't care if the chapter was short (I'll tell u a secret, a short chapter is a good chapter because it leaves the reader wanting more) lol anyways very nicely written good job 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks!

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That was good can;t wait to see what happens next 10/10

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That was good lol :) I've read this story before though so I remember most of it. But I still think it's very well written 10/10

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That was good, very well written 10/10

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That was good :) 10/10

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It was wonderfully confusing lol :) No it was good just Hermione, well I'm kinda getting tired of her disapearing when things get though (not only in your stories just in general) because she's supposed to be the sensible one, and Harry can't be dead that's too wierd of a way to die, death by window sorry if I'm being harsh just like you said Harry doesn't seem like Harry and it may be purposeful but it was just a strange chapter so I can't wait to read more and see what happens next 9/10

Author's Response: In this story, that's part of Hermione's character; it's simple for her to up and leave, so that's what she does.

As for Harry, I know that it's far fetched, but I haven't quite gotten in his last word yet. Read on and things (should) make more sense. ^_^

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It's very good and you've written another chapter as well Can't wait to read it 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

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