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Review #1, by ElandiliIt Only Hurts When I'm Breathing: It Only Hurts

5th July 2004:
I think I actually shed a tear. This was so wonderful! It completely pulls in the reader and makes them feel what she is feeling. Bravo!

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Review #2, by ElandiliThese Tears are Mine to Cry: Daytimes Dangers

5th July 2004:
I have to say, there are some pretty good moments in the story. It could use a few more details and there are a few grammatical errors, but I liked it otherwise. One phrase that really got my attention was, "...were obviously outside, worshipping the sun." It was a great metaphor.

Author's Response: well, thank you. seriously. and, im not exactly sure what a metaphor is, i just had one of thos random good writing days, i guess

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