Good start and really good job with both Draco and Luna in this first chapter. keep up the good work. Report Review
This was wonderful, I loved it!! brilliantly written.Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D ♥ Report Review
ha! Draco having to deal with lego, love it! Genius thought and slightly evil ha ha.
Cute and fluffly little one shot. I enjoyed it.Author's Response: lol.. I could picture his bitter sulking about the evil of Legos. :p Thanks for reading, and for leaving a review :) Report Review
Lovely fluffy, sappy Draco/Luna goodness!Author's Response: XD Glad you love fluffy, sappy Draco/Luna goodness! Report Review
I really like Harry/Luna and felt that they did have a nice little friendship connection in the books. It was a shame we didn't see more of it, but JK certainly knew what she was doing writing the books lol.
I thought you did a good job with Luna, I would say that she would indeed hide any feelings she might have for Harry in order to be a good friend to both him and Ginny, friends have always been important to Luna and I think she would put them first, which is what makes her a great character.
Good job, I enjoyed reading it. Report Review
Interesting turn of events. I'm looking forward to the next chapter for all the reactions.
Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Unexpected, yeah? More drama coming up in later chapters. Which I actually have to write :D I'm glad you like it, and I hope to finish this story sometime during this summer. Report Review
Aw, that was a lovely sweet chapter. Glad they finally managed to kiss.Author's Response: Always in chapter 4 :D And thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
They're just too cute!! lolAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like :D Report Review
Nice little one shot. Good jobAuthor's Response: Thanks :D And (completely unrelated) seeing as how you're obviously a Harry fan, I think I should just tell you that Dan is a FANTASTIC singer and dancer :D I just saw him yesterday in his new musical and he got a standing ovation. He is also endearingly short :D I had second row seats. You should check it out! Report Review
Nice interaction between Draco & luna with beleivable circumstances. The plot thickens!!Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you have stayed with the story :D Chapter 4 is... sadly... still in the works and kind of on hold... it might be a while before I'm done. But thanks! Report Review
As a huge Draco fan, I'm loving this new exploration of his character. He's not far off the older Draco I would imagine (minus the problems of course). I'm really liking the dry acceptance of his problems, its different to seeing the main characters ranting and raving, not willing to accept help etc.
Another good chapter showing lots of potential for future chapters.Author's Response: Thanks again for the fantastic review :D I'm glad you still like it. Report Review
Great start to what promises to be a good story. I really loved Draco here, he was different but also kinda the same, almost a resigned version of HBP Draco when he's so desperate. He came across as much more mature which you don't always see in post Hogwarts fics.Author's Response: FINALLY!! Someone who understands my point of view :D :D :D :D I'm glad you liked it. Thanks! Report Review
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story.
Keep writing!Author's Response: glad you liked it!! = ) Report Review
Go Snape! lol. Lovely use of language and description in this chapter. I wonder where Sirius is? & i'm really looking forward to more.Author's Response: It is a really deceitful chapter, to tell the truth. Nothing is what it seems to be, this is the point from where the wheel really starts to turn! I hope you will like the rest! Thank you for your reviews! I'm endlessly grateful! wings Report Review
Another great chapter. I loved it. Another thing I like is the animosity between Sirius and Snape, I often read stories where the dislike and bullying seems a bit over the top, we know they bullied Snape but not to hex and curse him every time they saw him, it was more of a humiliation ritual, which I feel you're emphasising with the Vampire Hunter bat, I would image that would be something that the boys would do to poor Snape. & Snape is a very sneaky character & quite smart enough to take on one maurander at a time as you have shown in this chapter rather than have himself outnumbered.
You built the mystery around Michelle some more in this chapter & i'm looking forward to finding out more about her and seeing the boys & i'm guessing Snape will end up dragged along for the ride lol, find out more about her too.Author's Response: I see you caught the exact point on which I intend to base the story: Snape and the Marauders are really cunning enemies, who build their animosity on psychological ground rather than just stupid, rude pranks. Let the latter be Peeves playground.
As you very well noticed, they want to humiliate each other, rather than to cause physical pain. For me this revelation came when I read how furious James was, when Sirius put Snape in real danger, and how much Sirius regretted it, as well.
So in this story I want to build up this unique air of mutual animosity AND a sudden and unwanted dependence, which will slowly appear as the girl's role gets clearer in this thriller. I hope you will enjoy it! Thank you for your wonderful review!
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Hi there, I'm back to read your wonderful stories now that you're working on a non HG/DM agian lol. ( u know how much I hate that pairing lol)
First chapter was brilliant as usual, you really drew me into the story and I'm excited to see what happens next.
I doubt you meant to do it, but the character of Sirius really reminded me of the Just William character created by Ricard Compton, there were such similiarites and it's just the way I would picture Sirius rather than the sex-god I usually find him portrayed as.
I also loved the relationship & dynamics between the four friends, a lot of stories tend to leave Wormtail out or portray him as a bad or stupid character or have a Draco & Crabbe/ Goyle dynamic between him and the others which goes against everything we know of the four friends when they were at hogwarts.
On to the next chapter.Author's Response: Hi, it's wonderful to see you back here, again!
I'm really glad that you are one of the few, who appreciate this story. I have to admit that it's far from perfect, needs some brushing up of grammar and so on, but I hope that the special atmosphere I tried to depict comes through!
I haven't thought of the Just William character, while writing the story, but now that you mention it - yes, there are some similarities. And to tell the truth, it doesn not make me feel bad at all. lol
Thank you for your precious review, dear XharrysdarlingX! Thank you! Report Review
How did I know that happiness was not waiting around the corner? Lol. Nicely done as always!Author's Response: Haha, I love sarcasm ; ) glad you liked it!!! Report Review
Oh poor Luna! I felt so sorry for her at the end. On to the next chapter now!Author's Response: Yeah, Bad things come to good people but good things do sometimes as well!!...hopefully you weren't thinking that the good would come so soon as in the next chatper thou... ; ) Report Review
They just keep getting cuter!! I'm really glad you found time to update this story.Author's Response: More to come soon hopefully! I'm glad you like it! = ) Report Review
Cute little one-shot, fun to read. Luna was just right with her dreaminess. Report Review
Again, I really enjoyed this one shot. I especially liked the "dancing with their eyes" section, I thought that was a clever way of putting it.
Yes it was fluffy, but not pure fluff when the characters are OOC, you still managed to keep crucial elements of them in there.
I do hope you'd consider writing another Draco/Luna!! Report Review
I didn't realise that you wrote Draco/Luna as well! I'd have been by to read & review sooner if I had known.
I really enjoyed it, such suffering for Draco & then a happy ending, Luna was so lovely, "You're my favorite wollyprickle" - the idea of Luna saying something like that to Draco really made me laugh, I could imagine her all serious and then his face of confusion!! lol. Report Review
Enjoyed the first chapter. Looking forward to more!Author's Response: thanks! :) Report Review
That was really good, Harry & Luna can be so sweet together and you did a great job with capturing Luna's character.Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
Not disburbing like I thought it was going to be when I first started reading it, but a rather touching portrayal of Draco and his feelings for someone who is out of his grasp even though she's there with him.
It might sound a bit morbid, but I really liked the ending, he had suffered along with her and then he couldn't seem to live without her, appeals to the romantic in me lol.
Good job, I really enjoyed it.Author's Response: thank you so much! i really enjoyed writing this and liked the ending too. it added something, i think.
thanks! Report Review
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