Again I'm grinning like a maniac. Loving it! 10/10! Report Review
I was smiling throughout the whole of this first chapter. It is everything I would love to happen in the 19 year gap. Seriously, I am loving it! 10/10! Just try not to torture Ron and Hermione too much lol!
~wired2damoon~ X Report Review
Ok, usually I don't say this, but I know instantly but just reading the summary and the first chapter whether I am going to love a story or not! And I have to say...
I am LOVING this!!
First of all, your imagery.
"she was just a tiny white speck on the twilight sky", I love people who are descriptive, I urge you to keep this up as I believe it holds attention.
Secondly, you have Harry completely in canon when it comes to his personality. Reading Sirius' letter I got that impression and of course when Harry says "wish I could go with you..." So I'm liking that you're making the characters be in character if you know what I mean.
Lastly, overall I am just loving the plot. Its just so different, unique and I am very excited in reading what happens next.
Again, hope you got enough sleep to continue lol! ;)
Keep up the excellent work.
~wired2damoon~ xAuthor's Response: OMG thank you! ::blush::
I swear I finished the second chapter the sme night as the first but now I can't find my laptop cable and thats the only thing its on... =(
I'm about to go see if you've updated, as it's been two weeks I'm sure you have, thank you again soooooo much! ^_^
Sleep? What is this sleep you speak of??? lol Report Review
Wow...that was truly amazing! Brilliant story, just enough love and just enough angst, truly beautiful, well done! 10! Report Review
That was beautiful! Truly beautiful! I love it! 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks :D Report Review
I loved it! It was beautifully written and I love the concept. I rate it 10/10 for its sheer brilliance and I'm adding it to my faves and you to my fave authors! Again, wow!
~wired2damoon~Author's Response: Wow, it's such an honor to have you reviewing a story of mine; you're a Sirius/Remus legend! *bows* Anyway, I'm really happy you liked it this much. Thank you very much for the review and favourites!
Diandra Report Review
How the hell are you? Lol, sorry I'm in a weird mood, as per usual!!
OMG I haven't reviewed this fic in forever! I apologise deeply, I've just been so busy, you know college stuff! Anywayz hun I just wanna say what a fab job (lol) you are doing with this fic! Lily/James-ness is absolutelyeffinbriltastic--there I go making up words again haha! Okay, my fave line : "I don’t want to feel anymore of your ‘happy feelings’.”
“That’s fine. I love floors. Oh and you loved it, really.” -- Are you trying to kill me? Ha! I nearly died of laughter, then again I could be just easily amused? Nope...not sure that's it, I just think I love your sense of humour!
Anywayz update soon, I need more *cough*mature*cough* chapters 'cause I'm lovin' it! Lol!
Keep up the always amazing work!!!
~Lyndz~ XxAuthor's Response: Aww hehe I'm good thanks, and you? It's fine dw, I've only ever been on HPFF lately to post my chapters and haven't been reading other people's either! So I really need to catch up on yours too! Brilliant word I must say 'absolutelyeffinbriltastic' a mixture of very complimentary words :D Hehehe yeah my humour is weird to get butttt I'm glad some people do share it :D Yeah yeah, theres some more mature bits coming up don't you worry! hehe yeah I shall be updating when the block is off!! Thanks for the review, they're always great :) xxx Report Review
Loving it! Its fricking (lol) amazing! Keep up the good work! Adding it to my faves and you to my fave authors because its just damn hilarious!! 10!! ~wired2damoon~ XxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! It's nice to know that people like my oh so slightly insane sense of humor. Report Review
Amazing as per usual hun!! Lovin it! lol! Hehe mongrel=hilarious!! =] UPDATE SOON!!
~Lyndz~ XxAuthor's Response: Aww thanks Lyndz.
Yup he should be a pedigree. lol.
btw i'm sorry i didnt show any remorse for your friend in my review. i had just found out that a family friend had died that night and i wasn't exactly thinking about anyone else. sorry.
Thanks for the review hun. Jess xx Report Review
Haha! Very funny! Well done I enjoyed it! 10/10!
~wired2damoon~XxAuthor's Response: that was the object! thank you! Report Review
Ooh don't re-write!! I think its perfect the way it is!! The way you captured Draco's inner most fear about his abilities as a father and how he's actually affectionate towards Colette is amazing!! I love the fact that you didn't make his girlfriend Pansy (so many people are doing that) but after her little outburst in DH you'd think people wouldn't pair her with Draco anymore, but they still are!! Not saying its a bad thing or anything I just prefer Draco/OCs!! =] *Sorry that was complete ramblings* lol!
Anywayz on with the review:
"Scorpius looked up, screwed up his minute, pink face, filled his lungs with air and screamed a terrible, heart breaking scream. Draco hardly had a peaceful moment in the ensuing years."
Hehe I loved that line!! =]
It's just so typical of a new born baby to disrupt such peace and tranquility lol!! xD
Well I have to say I loved it and think you shouldn't change a single word! Its amazing I rate it 19043909594--ii5q9ji ondlfn28985938/10 (Yes I threw letters in there too xD) Well done!!
Ooh and I give out free virtual hugs too!! *Virtual hug* See? Lol!!
Loving the story hun, keep up the good work, its so going in my faves and you are already in my fave authors lol!! :P
~Lyndz~ (wired2damoon) Xx =]
Author's Response: omg your my new favorite person!!!
that was the best review ive ever gotten!!!!
thanx so much for reading and im glad that you liked it. well i didnt want to put it as draco/pansy cuz in the epilogue of DH harry just says 'draco was there with his wife and son." if it was pansy i think JK would have said something.
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Amazing! Wonderful! Fantastic! I could go on lol!! 10/10!! Adding it to my faves and you to my fave authors!! Well done!!
~wired2damoon~ Xx Report Review
Amazing I love it! Izzy reminds me of myself in a way lol! I love it because its so different! Please continue and keep up the good work!!
~Lyndz~ XxAuthor's Response: Hey there Lyndz!!!
Thanks for the review. I'm so glad you love it!!
I'm starting to really love her character and can't wait to write more about her.
I don't know how much I'll be updating because The Boy, The Man, The Beast is my pride and joy so I tend to work on that more.
Thanks so much Lyndz coming from you it means sooo much!!
Karen Report Review
OMG!!! AHHH!!! YOU DEDICATED IT TO ME AND CAZ!! Omg!! Thankies so much!! No one has ever dedicated anything to me before in my entire life, EVER!! And now you have ahh!!! I'm so happy!! *squeals and jumps up and down!*
Okay...I'll try calm down and give you a proper review lol!!
Okay firstly I LOVED it!! It was just so sweet and cute and amazingly written and oh hell it was just brilliant!!
“Well you know what this means, don’t you Sirius?”
“Either Lily’s pregnant… or Prongs is pissed.”
I bloody loved that bit!! What can I say I just love Sirius and Remus no matter what situation they're in lol!!
And James was so adorable when Lily told him, he took it fantastically!! She's a very lucky girl! ^^That was exactly how I imagined James taking the news so an extra well done on that! lol!
Oooh and just to let you know I should have another chapter up by the end of today and um...well...you should keep an eye out for certain bits of it, if ya know what I mean!! lol!!
Well thankies for such an amazing read hun, I throughly enjoyed that fic!
I rate it 109048697958095790945723862857925890850/10!
*Hugs, kisses and squeals*
Ur BIGGEST fan
Oooh and I can't wait to read Caz's reaction to this aswell lol!! :PAuthor's Response: You deserve to have something dedicated to you hun!
Yep I love that bit too. (I used that from the actual episode but shhh).
He was, wasn't he. She is a lucky girl. He definately shows that when he dies protecting her -sniff- okay enough with the sadness.
New chappie!!! Yay!
How on earth do I get these ratings? lol.
Thankies for the amazing review Lyndz.
Love Ya, Jess xx
(I can't wait for Caz's reaction either but I'm not so sure she knows about this). Report Review
Omg! Simply amazing! You combined my two favourite things in the world! Harry Potter and My Chemical Romance! Thankies for that!
I rate it 10/10 for its sheer brilliance and its going in my faves with you in my fave authors! Well done again!! ~wired2damoon~ Xx Report Review
OMG UPDATE NOW!! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!!
*oops soz didn't mean to sound demanding lol*
Siriusly (lol) its the best Sirius/OC story I've read EVER! And I've been on this site for 4 years lmao!! I'm proud of you mawhahahaha! soz...still hyper...*clears throat*
Anywayz "but Sirius always considered any form of kiss as crossing boundaries" NO NO NO! Sirius don't you realise a proper kiss would be like amazing!! Let them snog! Please??? For me?? Let them snog and I promise I'll give you one wish that I promise I'll write in my story somehow and dedicate it to you!! PLEASE!!!
I feel his arms wrap around my waist, pulling me backwards into his chest. I rested my head back as he whispered sweetly in my ear.
Humph! and you call me a tease!! EEEKKK!!! NO FAIR!
A+ hun!! TOP OF THE CLASS LOL!!
~Your BIGGEST fan~
XxX Author's Response: okay firstly... CHILL OUT GIRL! lol. i'll update possibly tonight. my one-shot is still being validated (remember to look out for that). p.s. you dont sound demanding.
best sirius/OC ever?! In four years?! omg i'm touched -sniffs-
darn it girl! as tempting as that offer sounds... i can't have them snog, even if it is for you. (just do me one favour and get to the Christmas chapter in Hidden Pain, btw we both have a thing for Christmas in our stories -winknudge-
-hehe- i guess we're both teases. (might be Irish blood, considering i've got a little Irish blood in me)
A+?! ooh i'll add that to my exam results that i just got. lol.
" - again, how on earth do i deserve that?!
Love ya Lyndz!!
Jess xx Report Review
Now tears are falling from my eyes as he wraps his arms around my waist, his head buried in my shoulder. I lift my own arms and place them around his neck and pull him close as I rest my chin on his shoulder. As I pull him close his grip around me tightens and I hear a few stifled sobs as his head remains on my shoulder.
Sniff!! *cries hysterically*
You certainly have a way with words hun and I love that! *clap clap*
I silence him with my lips. Or that was the way it played in my head. Instead I choose the less romantic way of simply placing my finger on his lips and smiling.
My heart stopped! I really thought she kissed him!! You got my hopes up...*pouts*
Hehe!! 1283802-3-50q3583049q=3i9qufespm/10!! lol!!
Author's Response: i cried too as i wrote it. lol. we're slightly sad really aren't we?
"*clap clap*" - (bows) thank you, thank you.
aww sorry for giving you false hope hun.
"1283802-3-50q3583049q=3i9qufespm/10!!" - again, wow! Report Review
Hey Jess!! *waves*
Sorry I've been really tied up lately (lol) and didn't get a chance to review but here goes:
“Duh! What do you think I do while I’m lazing around at the Potters? Mrs. P has got a bit of a fascination with muggle lifestyles and to tell you the truth I like it too, ‘specially the V. T. part.”
Loved that line! I like spat out my drink at that bit! Hehe V.T!!
Okie you're like an amazing writer to you know that? You're discriptions are spot on and very easy to visualise!
Omg I love the word GAH! Hehe soz *RANDOM* lol!! soz for my behaviour i'm hyper ek! =}
"Ella has just barged passed me and flung her arms around Sirius’ neck."
*Folds arms* I'm sooo jealous!! lmao! Wow...I'm pathetic...jealous of a fictional character...Lyndz you've hit a new low...oh great now you're talking to yourself...excellent! *Wayne's World Moment!!*
Okie I'm just being stupie now!! Gonna go on and read the next chappie! 22898398508054069w3y8y780904895/10! (yes I threw letters in there too lol)
Author's Response: it's fine. i havent realy had much time to write chapters (just got a job so life's been a bit hectic).
glad you liked the 'v.t' line. (so proud, i came up with it myself -hehe-)
thanks!! i wasn't sure whether this style of writing was any good but i thought i'd try something different.
Lol. i'm jealous too and i'm the author.
You're not being stupid. you're just being special in your own way. lol.
"22898398508054069w3y8y780904895/10! (yes I threw letters in there too lol)" - really?! Thanks love!
Amazingly clever!! Hehe!! That definitely sounds like Ron to me!! Well done! I loved it! 10/10 going into my faves and you into my fave authors!
~wired2damoon~ xxAuthor's Response: Squee! Oi, thank youse... Ron is a cunning man... :] Report Review
Great start! Can't wait to read more!! ~wired2damoon~Author's Response: thanks for your review, ill update the next chapter (chapter 17) soon, im jst waitin for a diferent story to update and im writing it Report Review
Wow! I really loved this! I can't wait to see where you're going with it! First reviewer! Yay go me! lol! There should be waaay more reviews for this because the writing is amazing, the plot is intriging and the suspense, is killing me lol!
Okay I'm rambling now so I'll cut this review short but don't worry there'll be plenty more on the way when you update so PLEASE UPDATE! lol! Great job yet again its going in my faves and you in my fave authors! 10/10!
luv ~wired2damoon~ XxX Report Review
I loved it! Simply wonderful! Really ironic! I love Irony! Great idea, quite unlike anything I've ever read but I love uniqueness so well done! I rate it 1000/10! lol! well done! ~wired2damoon~ XxXAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
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I think it was cute! Well done!! ~wired2damoon~Author's Response: well thank you =] Report Review
Beautiful! Wonderful plot and excellent writing! I'm highly surprised by the lack of reviews, shame on people! lol! Seriously I loved it! You should be really proud! I rate it 10/10 for its sheer uniqueness and excellence!! ~wired2damoon~Author's Response: thanking you very very much and i know shame on people, just kidding glad you enjoyed it Report Review
Awww now this chapter really made me cry!! God I'm so emotional lol!! I loved it! Its written wonderfully and the plot is marvelous!! 10/10! I can't wait for the update! ~wired2damoon~Author's Response: *Hands over hankie* Thank you for your review, I hope you keep reading. Report Review
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