Well thought out, not only was the chapter an emotnioal rollercoaster it made Dumbledore seem human. I cried pretty much from when McGonagall summoned Harry, it was very well done. I have not come across one that has done that for me and given that release in a very long time. Great Work greengecko.
~Arya~Author's Response: Thanks. Post book 6, I liked that scene even more because as manipulative as Dumbledore is/was I thought he could better choose how to go. Report Review
OMG!!! Its like, THE END! Brighteyex3 how could you do this??? Its a bloody cliffie we need to know what happens lol, just messin, although we do need to know what happens. Please, please please could you write another Cara Sterling one? PRETTY PLEASE? *gets down on knees and begs* please? Author's Response: ahhh. i dont knowww. i am going to write a story about katie bell (as cara and ryans daughter. but they arent going to be big characters AT ALL. but theyll be there. ) but oh my goshh thank you so muchh =DD Report Review
Its actually lo que será, sea. It means whatever will be, will be. I'll formally review when I finish the fic.
~Arya~Author's Response: thank you!
ooh. formally review.
im exciteddd. =D Report Review
My God, MrsPotter_24, could you have written anything sadder? I've cried from about the start of the actual will and now Icontinue crying. Why did you have to kill Herione? My bed, ignore my rant. I'm just emotional at the moment. My friend of the family died the same way a few years back. Thanks for the Closure.
~Arya~ Report Review
It was well written. Congrats on the H/G from Half Blood Prince.
~Hermione Report Review
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