472 Reviews Found

Review #26, by Jaded94 We Will Do Anything To Get You To Notice Us

6th May 2010:
"Hey," I said. She nodded. That's it. I risk my life falling out of a tree and when I say hi, all I get is a nod?! Well. This is not over.
I think that was my favourite part of the whole chapter. I can imagine him pouting adorably :)

Author's Response: hahah awee that's how i pictured it as i wrote it :$
i'm glad you liked it!!


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Review #27, by Jaded94 We may not be able to pee accurately, but at least we can stand up and go pee.

6th May 2010:
this is a weird chapter! Dont worry its good weird but still very odd haha. I like James winning for once its funny.

Author's Response: thankk youu :)

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Review #28, by Jaded94 When we tell you you're not fat...believe us.

6th May 2010:
ahahaha James is such a mess when it comes to Lily its hilarious he doesnt have a clue. I love this im going to favourite it :)

Author's Response: yay!! thank you :) xoxo

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Review #29, by Jaded94 Never kick us in the nuts ďjust to see what we would sayĒ. Thatís just mean.

6th May 2010:
Hmm i seem to relate to this story too much! Especially as im Lily in it! Really entertaining :)

Author's Response: thank youu :D

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Review #30, by Jaded94 Don't ask to put make-up on us. It's just wrong...

6th May 2010:
Ahahahahaha Eee god James as Lily this was such a good idea!

Author's Response: thank you my love :D

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Review #31, by Jaded94 No Matter What You Say, You're Ex-Boyfriend Is A Loser

6th May 2010:
Dont worry i struggle writing long chapters too i prefer to get straight into the story! Are you annoyed yet by my reviews because it will be very anonying when i read the next 20 chapters because if they're as good as this one there will be another review! sorry!

Author's Response: hahah no your reviews don't annoy me :P
i love knowing what people think!
xoxo


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Review #32, by Jaded94 Don't go into detail about your period. It scares us.

6th May 2010:
wow i make this mistake everytime im on then! sometimes i forget im talking to my guy friends and they look a bit sick and im like what? then OH! its pretty funny actually. Good chapter though this is really entertaining.

Author's Response: hahahah so do i :$
twinsies!!
thanks :)


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Review #33, by Jaded94 We're not as perverted as you think we are.

6th May 2010:
ahaha i love their confusion at the end of this chapter it made me smile :)

Author's Response: good! i'm glad :)

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Review #34, by Jaded94 If you really liked us for us, you would let us think that our mustache, beard, or sideburns looked cool (even if they donít).

6th May 2010:
ahahaha i knew from the chapter title this was going to be interesting. I really liked it and you'll probably hate me when you get loads of reviews in a row :) Great opening chapter

Author's Response: thank youuu :)

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Review #35, by girly1393 If we really like you, we don't care about your flaws

18th February 2010:
I don't think it needs to be funny. I like that it's serious and sweet.

I will be sorry when this story is over, but it was one hilarious go.

Bravo to you.

Author's Response: thank you veryy much :)

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Review #36, by girly1393 We Have Weird Fantasies

18th February 2010:
In a supermarket? That is by far the weirdest fantasy I've ever heard of.

Author's Response: hey, i agree with you :P
weirdly enough, it's actually a fantasy of a friend of mines to go grocery shopping with his girlfriend...


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Review #37, by girly1393 We can be so slow sometimes. It's not even funny.

18th February 2010:
It is funny how slow he can be sometimes.

Author's Response: hahha oh i know. most boys are

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Review #38, by girly1393 When we start talking to you seriously, listen to us.

18th February 2010:
Poor James. Well, he should know better.

Author's Response: shouldn't they all? :P
xoxo


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Review #39, by Bookworm045 If we really like you, we don't care about your flaws

16th November 2009:
Oh, wow.
This is really amazing!!
I love the stories!
I hope you can get to writting the last chapters soon!

:)

Author's Response: thanks :D
i'll update soon
im just soo busy at the moment


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Review #40, by Artist_Angie Before we call you, we try to plan out what we're going to say...

25th October 2009:
oh my god, I love every piece of this story so far. its utterly priceless. I find myself laughing out loud twenty times and whenever 'what-eva' comes up I see james poking his hips out and moving his head in a circle. hahahahaha. I love this! :D

Author's Response: hahahahha thanks :D

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Review #41, by evanlyn We Will Do Anything To Get You To Notice Us

16th September 2009:
Well its not quite as funny, but its still good.

Author's Response: thanks and i agree about the not funny part :D
i think when i finish the story im gonna go back and edit all the chapters


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Review #42, by evanlyn We may not be able to pee accurately, but at least we can stand up and go pee.

16th September 2009:
Thats so gross. I think Lily and James are WAY to comfortable with each other lol. Still loving this story!!!

Author's Response: ahahhaha thanks

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Review #43, by evanlyn When we tell you you're not fat...believe us.

16th September 2009:
Oh, James just can't say the right thing. Hahaha, this is so funny!!

Author's Response: lol thanks :D

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Review #44, by evanlyn Never kick us in the nuts ďjust to see what we would sayĒ. Thatís just mean.

16th September 2009:
Oh god, Lily is insane!! But Jmaes still loves her...ahh how sweet, I love this story alot.

Author's Response: hahaha yupp. awee thanks :D

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Review #45, by evanlyn Don't ask to put make-up on us. It's just wrong...

16th September 2009:
Aww this is so wonderful, I love it, James is just so in love with Lily and that really shines through.

Author's Response: lol thanks :D

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Review #46, by evanlyn No Matter What You Say, You're Ex-Boyfriend Is A Loser

16th September 2009:
Haha its so funny. James is the jealous type, woohoo. Makes him more sexy and sweet.

Author's Response: hahahha true dat :D

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Review #47, by evanlyn Don't go into detail about your period. It scares us.

16th September 2009:
Oh my god...too much detail Lily!!! lol!!!
Wonderful story, its like a breath of fresh air its so funny anf joyful!!

Author's Response: ahhahahhaha
thanks so much :D


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Review #48, by evanlyn We're not as perverted as you think we are.

16th September 2009:
Hahaha. Love it. Its actually genuinely funny.

Author's Response: thank you. I'm glad you like it :D

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Review #49, by evanlyn If you really liked us for us, you would let us think that our mustache, beard, or sideburns looked cool (even if they donít).

16th September 2009:
This is so funny!! I especially like how James kind of just does whatever Lily says lol. He loves her, its sweet.

Author's Response: ahahha i know me too! if only every guy was like that...

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Review #50, by redtatis If you really liked us for us, you would let us think that our mustache, beard, or sideburns looked cool (even if they donít).

15th September 2009:
This is pretty good!

Author's Response: thank you :)

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