this is a weird chapter! Dont worry its good weird but still very odd haha. I like James winning for once its funny.Author's Response: thankk youu :) Report Review
ahahaha James is such a mess when it comes to Lily its hilarious he doesnt have a clue. I love this im going to favourite it :)Author's Response: yay!! thank you :) xoxo Report Review
Hmm i seem to relate to this story too much! Especially as im Lily in it! Really entertaining :)Author's Response: thank youu :D Report Review
Ahahahahaha Eee god James as Lily this was such a good idea!Author's Response: thank you my love :D Report Review
Dont worry i struggle writing long chapters too i prefer to get straight into the story! Are you annoyed yet by my reviews because it will be very anonying when i read the next 20 chapters because if they're as good as this one there will be another review! sorry!Author's Response: hahah no your reviews don't annoy me :P
i love knowing what people think!
xoxo Report Review
wow i make this mistake everytime im on then! sometimes i forget im talking to my guy friends and they look a bit sick and im like what? then OH! its pretty funny actually. Good chapter though this is really entertaining.Author's Response: hahahah so do i :$
thanks :) Report Review
ahaha i love their confusion at the end of this chapter it made me smile :)Author's Response: good! i'm glad :) Report Review
ahahaha i knew from the chapter title this was going to be interesting. I really liked it and you'll probably hate me when you get loads of reviews in a row :) Great opening chapterAuthor's Response: thank youuu :) Report Review
I don't think it needs to be funny. I like that it's serious and sweet.
I will be sorry when this story is over, but it was one hilarious go.
Bravo to you.Author's Response: thank you veryy much :) Report Review
In a supermarket? That is by far the weirdest fantasy I've ever heard of.Author's Response: hey, i agree with you :P
weirdly enough, it's actually a fantasy of a friend of mines to go grocery shopping with his girlfriend... Report Review
It is funny how slow he can be sometimes.Author's Response: hahha oh i know. most boys are Report Review
Poor James. Well, he should know better.Author's Response: shouldn't they all? :P
xoxo Report Review
This is really amazing!!
I love the stories!
I hope you can get to writting the last chapters soon!
:)Author's Response: thanks :D
i'll update soon
im just soo busy at the moment Report Review
oh my god, I love every piece of this story so far. its utterly priceless. I find myself laughing out loud twenty times and whenever 'what-eva' comes up I see james poking his hips out and moving his head in a circle. hahahahaha. I love this! :DAuthor's Response: hahahahha thanks :D Report Review
Well its not quite as funny, but its still good.Author's Response: thanks and i agree about the not funny part :D
i think when i finish the story im gonna go back and edit all the chapters Report Review
Thats so gross. I think Lily and James are WAY to comfortable with each other lol. Still loving this story!!!Author's Response: ahahhaha thanks Report Review
Oh, James just can't say the right thing. Hahaha, this is so funny!!Author's Response: lol thanks :D Report Review
Oh god, Lily is insane!! But Jmaes still loves her...ahh how sweet, I love this story alot.Author's Response: hahaha yupp. awee thanks :D Report Review
Aww this is so wonderful, I love it, James is just so in love with Lily and that really shines through.Author's Response: lol thanks :D Report Review
Haha its so funny. James is the jealous type, woohoo. Makes him more sexy and sweet.Author's Response: hahahha true dat :D Report Review
Oh my god...too much detail Lily!!! lol!!!
Wonderful story, its like a breath of fresh air its so funny anf joyful!!Author's Response: ahhahahhaha
thanks so much :D Report Review
Hahaha. Love it. Its actually genuinely funny.Author's Response: thank you. I'm glad you like it :D Report Review
This is so funny!! I especially like how James kind of just does whatever Lily says lol. He loves her, its sweet.Author's Response: ahahha i know me too! if only every guy was like that... Report Review
This is pretty good!Author's Response: thank you :) Report Review
Aw! This is so cute! It definitely wasn't boring. I was melting inside as I read how James tried so hard to get her attention. You make it seem so romantic :)
It's like, aw, he'd do these stupid things just for her to look at him. It's cute. :D I have to admit: I didn't read the four chapters in between this and chapter 4. When I read the title of this chapter, I couldn't wait... I had to skip ahead, and... Yeah =)
It was definitely not disappointing, don't worry! :DAuthor's Response: ahahah thanks :D
awee thank you. i'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
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