so...has this story been abandoned? Report Review
Please respond as to why we haven't heard from you in so long. Do you think you will finish this story?Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I got discouraged on this story even though the chapters were written and decided to give it up. I swear it'll be back soon, though! Next chapter posted some time this week if you still care! Report Review
I have loved the story so far! But why haven't you updated? Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next!Author's Response: I'll update sometime this week! Sorry for the wait and thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Another chapter! I really like this story, but the only thing happening is people moping around being angsty. It is getting slightly repetitive, honestly. I love love love the story however. Btw, how many chapters will this be, I would love to know how long untill it's. doneAuthor's Response: I haven't finished it yet and sorry about the repetitiveness. It's one of my weaknesses when it comes to stories. Report Review
Really good! I can't wait till next week! Can I take a guess and say the chapters going to be on Harry?Author's Response: I know it's been months, but I'll post the next chapter this week! So sorry! Report Review
Great Chapter! Can't wait until the next one!Author's Response: Thanks! It will be up on Monday, no classes so I haven't got an excuse not to post haha. Glad you're liking it! Report Review
Did you get the name Aria from pretty little liars?
Loved it BTW!Author's Response: Haha no I haven't ever watched Pretty Little Liars. I think I got the name from a naming website, or came up with it through Ariana. It just sounded like a good wizarding name.
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Where is the next chapter, it's Tuesday! I'm sorry if that sounded mean but it's such a great story and I am so eager!Author's Response: Sorry about that! It's posted now and I'll have the next one up on Monday as per usual. Don't worry about it, wasn't mean at all. I'll try to keep up better this time! Enjoy! Report Review
i really like this chappy james is one of my fav characters :) cant wait for more :D xAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks! I really like him too. Next chapter will update on Monday! Report Review
I love the story I like it when you write about the grown ups because I am more familer with them and you make the situations seem so real for the characters. I love the story it's so um what's a big word that will make me sound smart intriging. Have no clue if that's how you spell it. Oh well Well just keep writing and update please put the next chapter up soon it's okay if it's not tonight I have an account on this www . quotev .com I always am late on updating stories sometimes I forget other times I am too lazy and sometimes I just get writers block.I review alot so I am sorry if you have more than 1 of mine! You know what do you write alot you should join quotev it's this website where you can have an account you can write stories read stories you can make quizzes on just about anything maybe you have heard of the website it's used to be called quizzazz? If vyou do join then follow me and I'll follow you just tell me like comment on my profile my name on there is Syd) It's a awesome website!Author's Response: Aw thanks. I'm glad you're interested in the adults because I've never really written them as major characters in a story before. It's good to know that I'm not doing too badly!
Yeah, I'll try to post early on Mondays from now on. Just got a bit distracted and stuff. But it's up now!
I'll check out the website a little later, but it sounds cool! And don't ever apologize for too many reviews haha. I appreciate all of them! Report Review
It's Monday where's the next chapter? Please have it up by tommorow or soon I love the story I am so eager!Author's Response: I'm actually just about to post it! Still Monday where I am haha. Got busy with college- soccer practice tonight and a paper due tomorrow. But I haven't forgotten you guys, don't worry. :) I love your eagerness! Report Review
Gah, update sooner, please! Love this story xAuthor's Response: I'll update faster when I finish the story, I promise! I just haven't had much time to work on it since I started college.
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keep on writing!
Love the story. I could just imagine Harry gettting all mad like that!Author's Response: Thanks! Your comments mean a lot! Report Review
Hey great story! It's getting a bit long though so maybe could you like write a chapter about Lily like don't tell what happened to her or tell where she is but just a bit of information on Lily. And then how about a chapter about Harry I mean after all he is Lily's father. And if Lily is say dead then just like make something like maybe hinting towards it. But those were just suggestions do whatever you want with the story I will read it anyway! Keep up with the good work!Author's Response: The next chapter will have a bit more of Harry in it. :) And I can't really say what happened to Lily at this point...but I promise you'll find out more about her character soon! I'm trying to write it in slowly, although I guess it may be a little too slow sometimes.
Thanks for the suggestions, Sydney! I really appreciate hearing thoughts from my readers! Report Review
another great chappy, i feel sorry for Al having to deal with everything :( looking forward to reading more good work! :D
hufflepuff_pie xAuthor's Response: Yes, it is very hard on all of them, but especially Al. I'm glad you're still liking it! The next chapter has just been posted! Thank you for all the reviews! Report Review
yes post faster please!Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Report Review
This was an amazing chappy :) my joint fav with the one where James was drunk ;P I would love to see more of how Molly is dealing with Lily's disappearance.
Yes, I would like to see you post faster, but tbh you post quite fast anyway! (compared to some) I really adore this story it's very unique and heart wrenching Author's Response: I like that one too. Molly won't exactly be a huge character, but there are snippets of her throughout the story. She's so great in this because she's lost a child too.
Aw, thanks! Heart wrenching is just what I was going for, although there will be a few lighter moments down the road.
Next chappie will be up Monday, per usual! Report Review
I totally missed the last chapter. My apologies for that. :(
Things are starting to build up. It's small, but I can sense that the plot is starting to go into motion. As for the prewrittten chapters; please don't make the mistakes I do. I started posting quicker and am now struggling to keep up. Keep it the same. :)
I really like Roxy from the last chapter, by the way. Still waiting to see more of Lily ... Great job, though! :D
EllieAuthor's Response: It's cool! You review when you can, I'm not offended when you don't. :)
Ooh, yes. The buildup is getting to be quite interesting. Everyone plays an important part in the family at some point as you'll soon find out.
Prewrittens, er, I kind of have a lot. Two NaNos and I'm almost done with it. (Chapter 60, if you can believe it!) I just want to do what you guys prefer. The next one will be up on Monday, though.
Thanks as always for your lovely review! Report Review
I quite agree with you, this is one of the best chapter so far. I liked the one where Harry raids Malfoy's house, too.
As for the prewritten chapters, I vote for a faster update, I want to know what the hell happened, but it's your choice!
Kiss kissAuthor's Response: More action and I like giving Harry something to do. He's a great character when he's not sitting around bored, haha!
Faster updates? So far it seems like that's the general consensus. I'll update the next on Monday and let you guys know by then!
Thanks for the lovely note! Reading them always makes my day! Report Review
Post faster! We all want to know what happens!Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I love the support! Report Review
Good story, but, you need to finish chapters faster otherwise you are going to lose readersAuthor's Response: I've actually got a load of them prewritten as I wrote this story for June and August NaNoWriMo. Is once a week not enough? Would twice a week be better? Let me know!
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I love this story! Although I'm so worried about Lily :( I like the way you've shown how different people deal with the situation, James getting drunk is typical to how I imagine his character. I feel so sorry for Al having to be at home during this, he feels really guilty D:
I like chapters focused on James and Al so please keep adding them :)
This story is amazing, keep going, I'll look forward to reading more! 10/10
Ps how often do you update this story, I'm new to it :DAuthor's Response: James is one of my favorite characters to write so I'm glad you like him. And Al is just so pitiable.
The next chapter will be focused a little more on the adults, but Al and James will be involved.
I post new chapters every Monday! Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you like it! Report Review
I love this story keep adding more of it. a suggestion try to add more on harry ginny and hermione and ron.Author's Response: I'm trying to keep it pretty equal between the characters, but I think I'm drawn to the kids because they're closer to my age. But the next chapter will focus a lot more on Harry! And it will be exciting! :)
Thanks for leaving a review! I always love suggestions from readers. You guys sometimes have the best ideas. The next chappie will be up Monday! Report Review
Love the story! I hope there are more chapters coming soon. You should make the story so that rose or roxy or fred or at least another kid disappaers so then everyone is so content on finding them.Author's Response: Well I can't give out spoilers of course, but I've already got a load of prewritten chapters. I'll take your suggestions into consideration, though, so thanks!
The next chapter will come out on Monday. Report Review
AAHH! I'm so sorry I forgot to review the last chapter. It's just RL, and running, and writing, and modly duties on other sites caught up with me.
I'm really intrigued. I can see the beginnings of foreshadow, and really, really want to know where all this is going. (and I'm frankly shocked by the lack of response this story has gotten. Remind me to mention you when I next post something, lol, though I don't know how much help I'd be :/. )
What I really want to see is more of James and Al. I'd also like to see Lily start to become a person, you know? I know you said that it would happen, and I can't wait to see who she really is.
Thanks a mil for the update, and I promise to be a better reader/reviewer! :D
EllieAuthor's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far! It's the first time I've ever tried something like this and I'm not too sure how I'm pulling it off sometimes.
There will be more Al and James as they're easier to write than the adults, but the adults will begin to get their own plots as well. I'm trying to keep it kind of equal. As for Lily becoming a true character, I've been working hard on that, but it's one of the more difficult aspects of this story.
I hope you like where it goes in the next few chapters. And it's no problem, haha. RL is always more important than anything else. Don't worry about it. You're the best reader/reviewer I have! :)
The next chapter will, as always, be up on Monday. Thanks for leaving such a lovely review! Report Review
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