Good introduction of an OC, twin telepathic, sounds cool. Good work here snowy, bloody bellatrix.lol
Yun

Author's Response: :D Ty ty!! Bella is going to get soooooo bitchy! Love ya! I'll update asap

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OMG!! Ok Dude. Twinny of mine. This was really good. I really like the Hannah chick so far. =]

Author's Response: :) Weee! Thanks!! :D I'm currently writing chapter four now! *Grins* Hannah is very much like me. :D hehe

~Snowy~

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This sucked. You seriously can't write. Spare us all and don't continue it.



Author's Response: Well, Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. However, I have requests to continue this, so I will. Don't read it then if it sucks. It's that simple really. Ta

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The second half made this seem more like a chapter than a prologue, but the cliffhanger was great. You wrote Bella very well, loved the insane taunting, it's so her. From the little we know of Hannah so far, she seems to be the opposite to Hermione, on certain levels, and I like the potential that has.

Perhaps you've included too much information on Hannah's background, on how she ended up where she is, and all that. I think if you'd left some of that out it would have made for a lot of intrigue. But despite knowing all that, I have no idea where this story is heading, and I'm really enjoying the mystery of that. There are so many possibilities from where you've left it and I really, really look forward to see where this goes.

Job well done.

Author's Response: :D. Thanks Cj!!! I know, I er..got carried away on the description. *Shrugs* At least people can follow it. Thanks! This means a lot. Being a first time writer and all, hearing good comments makes me happy! Don't worry I'm updating as we speak. Chapter two is awaiting validation and chapter three is being written as we speak. Much Love!!

PS: Hannah is extremely diffrenent from Hermione..in a most..interesting way..

~Snowy~

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Hey! This is good so far, keep it up :D

Author's Response: ^^ Thanks for reading!! I'll update asap! I'm working on like the 3rd chapter now! Weee


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Looking good and it's just the start.

I'll be watching for more additions to the story :)

Author's Response: :D! Yay!! Aww thank you!! I'll update as asap!

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I like it. I like it a lot!

Author's Response: Wee! Thanks Tailer! :d I'll update soon! Much Love!

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dude. ZOMFG dude. Like SERIOUSLY YOUR STORY IS SO AWSOMEE!!! XD
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update REALLY sonn
if you don't, um.
i have no idea what i'll do XD
plus i can't write for crap and you write AS GREAT AS J.K ROWLINGG :D
Dude. Update soon XD

-candy

p.s: i'm going to make you your banner soon >:D

Author's Response: Thanks Candy!!! That means a lot to me. Although, I don' t think, I'm as good as J.K.R! Hehe. I'll update as soon as I can!! Chapter two is currrently awaiting validation. :D

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WE! Snowy!!! Wooho!!! AMAZING JOB! *tacklehugglez* Please update soon!!! You ish amazing!!~~Emma~~

Author's Response: Hey Emma!! ^^ Thanks! *Tacklehugglez back* You helped me a lot! Love ya hun :D. Don't worry I'm going to update soon!

~Snowy~

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sounds good can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hey illiana! :D Thanks hun!! This is my very first fic, so that means a lot to me. I'll update asap!

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