I love this! But Alexi needs to know. now! This shouldn't be a repeat of Snape.
keep writing, update fast and try not to kill anyone :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, repeat of Snape would not be good... for anyone xD Report Review
I seriously (no pun intended) am addicted to this story!! It is a really great piece of writing!! It saddens me though, to know that your last update was almost two years ago!! Please please please don't give up on this story!!! I beg of you!Author's Response: Haha, addiction is good :D JOIN THE LILY SIDE! ... I haz cookies and Transformers action figures. Report Review
No no no! You can't not update this story anymore! It's too good and I'm totally addicted! It makes me sad all day that you haven't updated it in.a super long time!
(No, but really, I just love this story and I really think you should, I don't know...update it? Yeah, that :D)
xCeceliaAuthor's Response: Will update... soon. Too involved with a certain Susie Q for a non-TA to update this xD Report Review
Please dont abandon this story its so good and i really want to know what happens next i cant wait! your really good at writting and i loved the last story its deffently one of the best i have ever read!Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm not abandoning anything, I'm just lazy/not a TA anymore xD Report Review
Hello again. As I said before I am obsessed with your stories! I don't mean to push you or force you, because everyone is busy. But I would very much appreciate it if you would please update soon. I'm too obsessed for my own good! I ned to know what's going to happpen! Aaaahhh!
Team Sirius Author's Response: Haha, no one can force me to do anything :D But yeah, I'm working on it. Report Review
i love this story its such a good sequal to untouchable please update it as soon as you i have to know if Sirius and Anna will be together again!!Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
YOU MUST UPDATE!!! My life literally depends on this! I know you have other stories you are concentrating on but please this will drive me mad if this story doesn't continue now I've discovered it! The Un- series MUST go on! Sounding really desperate right now but I don't care. I'll even try blackmail...if you don't update I'll turn to drugs to fill the empty hole in my life! Promise!
Right...well...think I made my point...*awkward cough*Author's Response: I respond well to blackmailing :D Report Review
so umm.not sure whats up with the story...hasnt been updated in a while?
anyways loving it so far.ugh i want her to be with sirius but i dont want her to hurt alex!
:D till next time
lOonyAuthor's Response: Ahh, I know :( I am so sorry about that... Report Review
Hey, YOU! It's kind of been a while... I'm KIND OF WAITING here! Please write this. I love it and will be fiercely angry! NOW, GO! You SERIOUSLY cannot leave me with this!Author's Response: ... well, now I'm scared xD Do not panic, I will update it soon :D Report Review
WOW! I just checked. This is WIP. Last updated LAST YEAR???!!! How could you!? Oh my Gosh. this is reminding me of when I started reading match and didn't even CHECK. geez louise!!! Breaking my heart here!Author's Response: GAAH SORRY :D I'm just... stuck, and annoyed with Anna - seriously xD Report Review
I love it. Its. Amazing. You need to update it! GAHHH i wNt more sirius/anna!Author's Response: Can't exactly say when the updates will come up - let's just say that I don't get along well with the compy -.- Report Review
I see you've been updating Susie Q. Any plans to update this too? :)Author's Response: As soon as I get a hold of her character again. See, she ran away with a hippogriff, and-- oh sod it, I'm lost with the story xD I seriously can't get a hold of her character, I've been writing Susie Q so much recently :( But I shall try, promise! Report Review
Hi, I just finished reading and I loved it! Seriously I couldn't handle seing Serius so heartbroken! I started reading Anna story recently and I also love the brotherly relashionship she has with James and Remus, could you please update soon? You are not thinking about abandoning it, are you?Author's Response: I realy need to step up right? I mean, it's unforgivable just how long it's been since I've updated, gomen gomen gomen -.- I shall get right to it, promise! Report Review
I just read this story in one night and I read Untouchable in three days...please update? I really want to know what happens next. PLeeaase?
10/10Author's Response: Thanks for the review and prompt to update, I shall get to it! :D Report Review
so i just read this and "untouchable" over the last couple days, and they're really good! the characters are interesting and i like the plot. hope you haven't abandoned it! :)Author's Response: Not abandoned, just on a long long long hiatus :D Report Review
i supah love your story! there are some times where i wish i could jump in and shake the poo out of anna for being so oblivious and such a people pleaser.but HEY, where would the drama be if she didnt have character flaws, right?! haha
anyways, so i think you've been tending to your family for about a year now.a nd i think us sirius fans are growing mighty impatient. hahaha. :] dont forget about us, we need some lovin too!!!Author's Response: ... yes, because being a mom and wife stops after one year, that is a fact :D I shall show that to the hubby, he shall be mighty impressed xD Report Review
And where is my 12th chapter huh? :/ To be honest, i've just finished the 11th chapter, but I had already reviewed that one so i thought i'd just leave a review here :D it's 4am AGAIN. i can't believe your story is keeping me up even when it's the second time i'm reading it. and i still hope that Anna won't be as slow with Alex as she was with Severus, u know, about the whole breaking up thingy. anyways, please update soon. and Susie Q needs a new chapter too, after a good-night's-sleep i'm gonna reread Susie Q for the third time..or was it a forth? dunno, can't remember :P okay, off u go, u have a couple of chapters to write Author's Response: M'DEAR! The chapters are going through tons of work right now, but they are up and coming, trust me... and I am SO SO SO SO SORRY for the awfully long wait ^_^ Report Review
Very brilliant chapter!!! but I have to say this, you need to stop making Ann sound so bi-polar like if she loves Alex but she feels obligated to lovE him, then it's not real love! But I read untouchable and it was very very good :) I've only read like five really good fanficitons and yours was on of them! Well o hope u update with a chapter soon! :)Author's Response: Bipolar means you have this uberintense moodswings, which yes, Anna has, but that has nothing to do with how she feels about Alex. She loves him, but it's not - maybe - the same kind of love she once had for Sirius... or still has, dunno xD Report Review
I love this series! I can't wait until you update!Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^_^ Report Review
this story is fantastic!
the characters are amazing and youve done a fantastic job of making a storyline filled with drama
i cant wait for the next update (althought im happy to wait patiently because i know it will be awesome!!)
thanks for writing it for so long just for the entertainment for harry potter lovers like myself :)
lil xAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review ^_^ I'm glad you like the story! Report Review
Hi, I'm completely new to these stories, just started them last week :) I adored untouchable, so much drama and excitement, and this is shaping up to be even better. I love your oc's and the way you write Sirius, James etc. it's fantastic. I adore Anna and the girls too, you really convey their relationships well.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next update, and reading through these reviews, I wouldn't let impatient readers get to you, it's your story, and by taking your time we know you're doing it justice. I'm in the middle of writing something myself and I know how hard it can be somedays to write a few lines, never mind a whole chapter. and it must be even harder knowing you had these chapter written and now you have to re-do them all over again. you've explained and as you said, those who truly enjoy your story will be more than willing to wait.
last note, I simply DEMAND Sirius and Anna be united in wedded bliss :) I adore them, this is one of my favourite Sirius/OC stories I've read.
Keep up the good work, Rosa xAuthor's Response: I simply LOVE reviews like yours :) They really make me wanna do my best, and get my act together! I'm glad you understand, and that you liked the characters ^_^ THANK YOU! *bows* All I can say now is... well, as for your demand; let's just say that what will happen will happen :D Report Review
i read this whole story in about three days, despite the finals i should have been studying for.. oh well.
anyway! i love this story! it's so different from all the other stories i've read!
i can't wait for another chapter! i'm bored without updates..
and, i love jack sparrow. pirates of the caribbean is my second favorite story on earth. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review ^_^ Report Review
I have to say, I read all of "Untouchable" and all that's up of this withing 24 hrs and I absolutely love it!
I noticed that it hasn't been updated in quite a few months, but maybe you'll get back to it? After all, you claimed it would be a 4 part novel ;-)
I am patiently awaiting your next chapter either way...but Christmas is coming up so maybe I won't have too long lol.
I wish you and your family heath, happiness, and prosperity over the holidays Author's Response: THANK YOU! The family sends back cyberhugs xD Anyway, to the actual review; I will continue on this 4-part-story-novel-thingy... I will, I promise - as soon as I stop procrastinating xD Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR SOO LONG!! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON IT!Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^_^ Report Review
I think I might be the only one who really likes Alex and wants Anna to be with him! I really like the last story, I have very much enjoyed the storyline so I have high hope for this one too :)Author's Response: Haha, yes, I agree with you; you MUST BE the only one who wishes Anna to be with Alex xD He's not a bad guy, which just makes it difficult for anyone SANE to hate him. In all honesty, he's the right choice, ne? Report Review
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