it was good man, well written and a long time in waiting. cant wait for the next one, keep it up sir.Author's Response: I will do my very best to keep it up Josh, I'm glad you approve of the chapter. Chapter 18 should be along shortly and is nearly complete. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Nice battle again, hope Voldy gets hurt too when they meetAuthor's Response: Thanks alot Nakor, glad you liked it. You will find out about Voldy soon enough as the final battle comes in the next chapter, which should be complete quite soon. Report Review
thank you very much for the shout out it made my day :)
love the chapter long chapters always make me feel happy
can't wait for the next one...your doing so well at least you can stick to a story unlike others :( ANYWAY! again i must say your story IS one of my favs and im very excited for the next update keep up the great work!
xx geeAuthor's Response: The shout out was my pleasure gee, I always appreciate reviews so when people ask, I'm happy to oblige. I'm glad you like long chapters because there will be another one coming at you shortly; it's almost finished and should be ready to upload soon. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
i really like the chapter and can't wait to read what happens next.Author's Response: Thanks alot sinwillys822, it's always a pleasure to her from you. The next chapter is about two-thirds complete and should be finished quite soon. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Totally about to give up on reading this story, its been way too long since it was updated. love the story but not going to wait forever... Get the lead out.!Author's Response: I know it's been a ridiculously long time since I've updated but the next chapter is now almost complete and should be ready to post in the next few days. Report Review
Please Please Please Please etc...etc. update this story!!I have been waiting for AGES and i really want to know what will happen in the final battle!
This is my favourite hpff story and i really want to see how it ends!
OK rant over... Love this story. Please update soon.Sorry i haven't reviewed before, i didn't feel the need to...i hope you get over your writers block soon
10/10Author's Response: I'm sorry it's taken so long, but I've almost finished the next chapter and it should be ready to post in the next few days. I'm glad you like it and thanks for the review. Report Review
Love the story and have been waiting for a new chapter for quite awhile now. I would just like to make sure it still is progressing albiet slowly.Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and yes the story is still work in progress. I know it's been an absurdly long time since my last update but I'm back to writing it and the next chapter is all planned out and about half written. I hope to update in the next couple of weeks or so. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Hey, great chapter, but didn't Z Smith die in Birth of a Legend?
ShadowAuthor's Response: Thanks, as for Smith, you're probably right; I'm notoriously bad at doing that kind of thing. I'll look into it and make the necessary changes. Thanks for letting me know and thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Wow, I started reading this story today, and I think it is brilliant! Keep going, and don't let Harry be taken over by darkness!
ShadowAuthor's Response: Thanks ShadowHallows, I'm working on Elixir a Lumina now and hopefully it won't take too long to get the next chapter up. As for Harry being taken over by the darkness, you'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Great story! Are you going to finish it? I really hope so!Author's Response: Thanks Marie, yes I am going to finish it. I know I've been away for a while but I'm working on the next chapter now and hopefully It'll be uploaded soon. Thanks for the review. Report Review
i hope you havnt abandoned this story its one of my favoritesAuthor's Response: Hi ranrob, don't worry I haven't abandoned the story, I just haven't really worked on it for a long time. As for why I haven't updated for so long, there are loads of reasons; I was in America for a while, my compute broke down taking what I'd written of the next chapter with it but mainly it's because of procrastination and writers block. The strory has been planned out for over a year so I know where I want to go but I was having huge problems getting the right words on to the page and I really didn't want to mess it up on the last few chapters after years of writing. As a result, I put off writing and took a break from the story, but hopefully I'll be able to get the next chapter done and uploaded fairly soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
Spectacular just spectacularAuthor's Response: Thank you very much Jeff, I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. Report Review
You like these cliffies don't uAuthor's Response: I think most of us writers like putting in cliffies now and again, we like our readers to hate us just a little bit. Of course it doesn't really work here unless it's the latest chapter and the next one isn't up yet but the compulsion to include them is still there so expect to see some more coming up. Report Review
Ahhah very interestingAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Tsk tsk I am enjoying thisAuthor's Response: I'm glad, I'm quite fond of this chapter so it's nice to know you approve. Thanks for the review. Report Review
You did a lot of research on ancient magical creaturesAuthor's Response: I do try, though admittedly I rarely go past wikipedia, I like to get a bit of a variety in there but stay true to the world JK created. Report Review
Corruption scandal I love itAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'm pleased you like it. Report Review
I think it will play out nicelyAuthor's Response: Thanks, I hope you like what's coming up. Thank you for reviewing. Report Review
I figured thane would be the betrayer till jude came alongAuthor's Response: I thought Thane might be a suspect for some people, but I never had any intention of him going bad, he's the only real OC I have. Report Review
I am intreagued by these recent eventsAuthor's Response: I'm glad, I hope you like where I'm going. Thanks once again for reviewing. Report Review
Where are you going with thisAuthor's Response: You'll have to wait and see Report Review
A little comedy was a nice touchAuthor's Response: I like to lighten the moody occasionally, the story is quite dark but I think you can still get a bit of comedy in. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Moody's first name is spelled alastorAuthor's Response: So it is, thanks for the correction Jeff. Report Review
Hmmm can't wait for the battleAuthor's Response: I like to consider battles as my speciality so I'm hoping you'll approve of what I've done. Report Review
Great way to get around the fact that albus is in a coma but without him waking upAuthor's Response: Glad you liked it, I wanted Harry and Dumbledore to have this talk, but the story requires that Albus remain unconscious for a while yet. Report Review
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