Good job! I really enjoyed this story.

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I accidentally was listening to "Set Fire To The Rain" as I was reading this chapter! &it TOTALLY fits! (:

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Every author has that one word that becomes their best friend and so they end up using it a lot. The word genially has become your best friend. Just a little heads up but this story has a lot of grammatical errors in it that interrupt the flow of the story.

That's all.

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NEVERMIND! I wasn't missing anything. I just haven't read this story in a while.

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Okay, I feel like I'm missing something here myself. I feel like there is supposed to be something before this but I'm not sure.

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Absolutely lovve this story!! I hope you write more, it was amazing!!!

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love it so far!! That bitch had it coming. I actually laughed out loud when i read that :)

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hell yeah! punch her rose

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Enjoyed the story. Well thought out. Grammar and typos should be corrected though.

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I loved this so much

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I enjoy your story so far, and it's pretty well written. Just make sure you proofread because there are some slightly confusing errors in some places. And please, for the love of God, stop using the phrase "as ass" (i.e.: "This is awkward as ass."). It just kind of ruins what would otherwise be good. Like, yes, I know people say it in real life (although I would probably use "as fuck" - but you know, personal preference haha), but it just doesn't sound good in a story. Also, there was one paragraph where you said "shit" like four times. And it wasn't a particularly long paragraph, either. Obviously, this story is completed, but maybe in future projects, keep the sailor language to a minimum (: It just sounds better.

Author's Response: I understand your opinion, and with some stories I'll take it into account, but I'm not going to take it out of this story because...they're seventeen. Most seventeen year olds swear...a lot and so do adults. But I understand if you don't like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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I am horrified that it took me so long to write a final review for this story. I re-read the whole thing today from chapter 1 through 25 all over again. It was even better this way because there was no waiting for new chapters.
The story flowed so well, even with the confusing chapter when she forgot she was seeing Scorpius. I thought for a minute I missed a chapter lol.
This whole story was wonderful. I already read the next story to this one and I'm glad that all worked out in the end too :)
Keep up the good work :)

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Love the story! But what happened to Ch. 12? The story goes right from 11 to 13

Author's Response: They invalidated it so I had to go back and take out a sentence. It should be out in about a week. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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I really liked this story! It was great, had a good structure, plot and character development etc.
What I didn't like were the mistakes in spelling and grammar! Often words were missing and that really distracted me and took away from the flow of the stroy.
But in the end it still is very good and could be a real book in my opinion. I hope the sequel will be just as great!

Author's Response: I'm trying to get this story edited to avoid such issues, but we will see what happens. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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i hope ron gets hell.especially from hermione...

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Well done on completing such a brilliant novel, I love this ship and you wrote it beautifully. Thankyou

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That was honestly one of the best stories I've ever read

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I LOVE IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! Sigh i am in love with this story!! I'm getting giddy while i read it!! i can't stop giggling!

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Loved all of it

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Loved all of it

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i LOVE this story! IT'S PERFECT! I've been looking EVERYWHERE for it! Thank you so much for creating something for me to sink my teeth into!!

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Out of all the stories that i've found on this website i have to say that this one is my absolute favorite. When i read this story it gave me feelings. I was sad when they got obliviated, and happy every time they solved a problem between them. This was a great story and i thank you for writing it.

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FEBRUARY 9th is my birthday!:) Great chapter! :)

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No. No. No. No. No. No!
Why do you do this to us readers?! Why do you do this to Rose, to Scorpius? How could you!

Don't take this the wrong way. Your story is, fantastic, brilliant, funny, smart, everything a story should be, and that last twist was really clever, I never saw anything like it coming. Why did you have to do that?

Okay, I shall take myself out of the story and try to give you a useful opinion. I love your story, it is my favorite so far, and I think I'm learning a lot by just reading your writing. I love the relationship between Rose and Scorpius, how it isn't story-book perfect but realistic, and very lovable.

The plot, well, I see no faults and I can't wait to read what happens next.

I only want to point out one thing, and please don't be insulted, but there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes in the story. I know there will always be some, I always have mistakes in my writing too, but they were kind of distracting me from the incredible story.

Thank you so much for writing this.

~sunnyday2

Author's Response: Ironically, I'm going through this story right now to try and weed out as much of the mistakes as I can. I'm not insulted in the slightest! I understand how distracting those minor mistakes can get after a while. Thank you for bringing it to my attention! I'm glad you've liked it so hard. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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This is really really good. My only suggestion being if you could, put the song lyrics in the beginning as well perhaps under the CI simply because I don't go back to the story page everytime and I miss them :)

Author's Response: I'll take that into consideration! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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