Okay great story and everything but I'm just saying. I don't think the chapter images really fit the description of some of the characters. For instance, the one of Draco. Although older, I would have been sure that he kept his pale skin and that his eyes did not change colour so drastically. His hair remained the same colour and just receded. Sorry, but I felt like I should point all this out. I have no idea whether this has been said to you before. Oh, and I'm pretty sure that Draco's middle name is Lucius.
However, your story is good. Really rather captivating.

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I really loved this story!!! usually the scorose pairings tend to be a little typical but this was sooo original and i loved it i truely did. i hope u continue writing other stories!! i really liked how u explained everything in vast detail, because i know other stories dont and then you get confused haha :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

The story was a long time coming and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you again. :)

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Yay I love this story

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks so much for reviewing :)

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I loved the great detail you used to describe the rest of their marriage with children, that was a wonderful ending. I loved every chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

It's always nice to hear that a reader has enjoyed a work from start to finish!

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

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AHHH I LOVED IT! Please write more soon, I love your writing style!

Author's Response: One chapter left, and it's finally up! Let me know what you think!

Thanks again for your review. I really appreciate it :)

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That awkward moment when you can't even read the authors note because your eyes are wayyy too blurry from tears. Amazing as always, if extremely sad.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I'm glad you enjoyed it, but saddened to hear how much the plot moved you to tears!

Thank you so much for your review! :)`

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I loved it! By far one of the best stories I have read! Great job!

Author's Response: So glad you loved it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing - I truly appreciate it. :)

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Okay im going to be blunt... this story is annoying.
There is no raw emotion in it. it just sounds like "OH! Scorpious!" and "Oh! Rose, i love you." No offense but im not into it :/ sorry although you are a very good writer!

Author's Response: The first few chapters I admit are a little cheesy; blame it on my age when I was writing them.

I believe that the later chapter get a little more in-depth and heavier, so keep reading a little bit more and let me know what you think! Regardless, I appreciate your commentary and look forward to see what else you have to say!

Thanks again :)

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Nice work! :) I like it so far! But honestly, I was expecting some punches or something. And a grudge with Cecelia and Rose. I mean, they are girls...

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!

However, in response to being girls and holding grudges, Rose and Cecelia are best friends...Just keep that in mind.

Thanks again for reviewing!

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Hmm. I like it. It's turning out to be like a lot of Scorose stories I've read, but this is only the 1st chapter :) I'm going to try and to read and review as I finish chapters. Normally I'm horrible at it...

Author's Response: Thanks for your review - even if this is your only one! Thanks again!

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you are a brilliant writer,and putting in the miscarriage was very brave of you,but you wrote it brilliantly i cried when she miscarried and when scorpius ended up in hospital,smiled at when they got back together at the end of chapter 25 and laughed at at cece and al and their lovelife (and rose and scorpius), i cried happy tears when their parents finally approved and they were officially back together (yay) and then engaged, i am so glad they got a happy ending and i am completely hooked i started reading at about 8:30pm and finished at 11:30pm i cannot wait for the 3rd installment of the epilouge and i really hope that it will be updated relly really soon 10/10
-potterfan310
p.s not to be picky or anything but isn't noah a boy's name?

Author's Response: Thank you :) I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

This story was my baby for a really long time, and unfortunately it hasn't been officially finished, but it's almost there! I put a lot of careful thinking into it, and clearly you think it's paid off!

As for the name Noah for a girl, I just thought it was really adorable. Traditionally, it is a boy's name, but I thought I'd change it up. And for some reason, I really like girls having traditionally-boys names...

Thanks again!

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Amazing story! :) Is there going to be another chapter though?

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Yes, eventually there will be another chapter, although I am not certain when.

Thanks for your review. :)

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BEST SCOROSE STORY EVER!

Author's Response: I'm so thrilled you've enjoyed it so far! :)

Keep an eye out for the third instalment of the epilogue - it may be a while, but it will come eventually!

Thanks so much for the review.

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i really dont like the way everything turned out.. The misccarraige made this whole story sad and i can't imagine how things will get better. I want to know how its going to end, but im afraid of being dissapointed. Just my thought.. Great story up till the miscaraige part hopefully it will get better :)

Author's Response: Just keep reading and let me know what you think! I know the decision to have Rose miscarry was huge for me, but it really changed up the cliche pregnant-at-Hogwarts storyline. In reality, the characters are still really young and still have a lot of growing up to do.

Regardless, I really appreciate your review! :)

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Absolutely Amazing! I love it!! and I love how it took a fight!! You are a very good author!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you loved reading it! I truly appreciate you taking the time to review. :)

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You did a good job on this fan fiction. I love it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Awww I feel soo bad for Scorpius. Great story by the way, I can't stop reading it!

Author's Response: I know. Scorpius is just getting knocked down repeatedly.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Great chapter, I like the way you've given everyone's reactions, especially Ron's. I love how the sections flow together, the only thing I noticed is the date on the last section - 'March 2028' should that be '2038'? because the one before is 'December 2037'. Can't wait to read the last chapter! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)

And thanks for catching the typo. I'll fix that as soon as possible!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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YAY! I'm so glad you're doing a third part :)

Author's Response: Haha yes. :)

Thanks for the review!

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yay!! another chapter that excites me alot!! yay keep up the good work! update soon!! :)

Author's Response: It's so good to hear from excited readers! Thanks for the review! :)

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That surprised me I didn't expect the baby to die!Good job its sad but I really like this story

Author's Response: That was the point - surprise. And it's not what pretty much anyone expected to happen. But it's less cliche and more realistic that things don't go the way you expect them to.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue. :)

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yay! i absolutely love it! update soon! can't wait :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you love it! Thank you for reviewing. I truly appreciate. And I promise that I'm hard at work on the final part of Whispering!

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Eep! I'm going to be so sad after this is over.

Author's Response: I know! So am I.

Thanks so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. :)

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i think its good that you didnt make scorpius the head boy too. that would have made everything too easy, you know?

good job with the lily thing, that made me laugh a little.

-question slightly irrelevant to this chapter that i thought of two seconds ago: in the first chapter when rose and scorpius did it on the astronomy tower, was rose still a virgin before hand? (and scorpius' too, i guess.)

if so, what an awkward place to lose said V-card. less cliche than a broom cupboard, and better than a car (or a broom closet) but still weird.

good job! i've read to here today and i plan in continuing :D

Author's Response: I also felt it would have been strange to have them both be the Heads. Too convenient and cliche. Lily was honestly one of my favourite characters to write, so I'm glad you liked her characterisation. :)

As for your question, no, she wasn't a virgin. When the story gets completely finished then edited, that will be more clear.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

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i opened this story because of the banner, not gonna lie. and honestly, it has a really good start. i can obviously see why it is mature, way to bring THAT out in the first chapter. (; that was...INTENSE man.

though you did do a good job of walking them through the clothes-removal. I hate it when the clothes just magically (no pun intended) come off.

Author's Response: That's alright that you opened it because of the banner. I do that too sometimes. :)

I'm glad you thought the progression of the scene wasn't abrupt and/or awkward.

Thanks so much for your review!

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