{reviewid: 2610167, reviewer: 'the%20one%20that%20got%20away'}
31st October 2011:
no cliffhanger. wah. amazing as usual! :)
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{reviewid: 2610017, reviewer: 'Hermionniny9'}
31st October 2011:
eep, I cant wait to read on. I'm sure it will be thrilling.
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{reviewid: 2609323, reviewer: 'VioletArabella'}
29th October 2011:
I love this chapter! i cant wait till the next one! i hope its up soon :)
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{reviewid: 2609313, reviewer: 'We%20Are%20Padfoot%20and%20Prongs'}
29th October 2011:
Good, be mature people and work through it! And the line 'We obviously can’t get along because we’re still thinking of the past, Hogwarts, two different houses; Slytherin and Gryffindor.' made me think of the song Wizard Love, which if you haven't heard it you should listen to it right now!
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{reviewid: 2609306, reviewer: 'We%20Are%20Padfoot%20and%20Prongs'}
29th October 2011:
Yay, drama! I LOVE IT!!! Oh, you have some choppy sections in the writing, some grammar issues. Minor stuff really, but I'm a grammar Nazi, sooo...
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{reviewid: 2609299, reviewer: 'We%20Are%20Padfoot%20and%20Prongs'}
29th October 2011:
SURPRISE!!! Hahaha, I would have PAYED to see Ginny's face!!!
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{reviewid: 2609297, reviewer: 'We%20Are%20Padfoot%20and%20Prongs'}
29th October 2011:
Hehehehe... this looks like it's about to get VERY interesting!
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{reviewid: 2609214, reviewer: 'DIANA'}
29th October 2011:
I've been reading your story all day long and I love it. Please keep on posting. I can't wait. xx
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{reviewid: 2609191, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
29th October 2011:
My bad in my last review, I confused myself...lol
I wasnt expecting it to be Draco's father at all... great chapter :)
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{reviewid: 2609190, reviewer: 'KTMalfoy'}
29th October 2011:
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! I Must know!! imma going crazy!! I love you!!!
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{reviewid: 2609106, reviewer: 'HermionelovesRon24'}
29th October 2011:
Great chapter!! :) Recently, the Dramiones are rubbish, and no one was writing anymore, I was soo disappointed in them too. I totally needed another one, like desperately!!!
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{reviewid: 2609045, reviewer: 'StarryLaura'}
29th October 2011:
ACK NO. you haven't updated in ages and you give us this? -_- okay, no, I'm not actually mad at you, but I'm frustrated D: I want to see more of this story!!
On the other hand, I love Hermione and Draco's new relationship, and how you depicted Lucius as a cold-blooded killer even though he was very concerned for his family in the books. haha Luna and Ron being an item is interesting too, I've never seen that before...
KEEP WRITING. and longer chapters, even if you update even slower. Because I like long chapters :P
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{reviewid: 2604247, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
18th October 2011:
the story says complete, though clearly it isnt, are you going to finish it? your almost finished
Author's Response: it's not completed?
it says wip
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{reviewid: 2582252, reviewer: 'Addeline%20Gray'}
2nd September 2011:
I love it
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{reviewid: 2581213, reviewer: 'KiraPotter16'}
31st August 2011:
lose doesn't have a double 'o'. but i'm loving this story. and that preview has made me desperate for the next chapter! :)
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{reviewid: 2580423, reviewer: 'caicu'}
29th August 2011:
Outch~!~~ That teaser is to die for
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{reviewid: 2579491, reviewer: 'Rannie867'}
28th August 2011:
Still reading as long as you're still writing!!
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{reviewid: 2575835, reviewer: 'Janey994'}
22nd August 2011:
This is a fantastic story! I am really enjoying it - so much so I just had to read it all before reviewing! It took me until chapter 10 to realise that it was you who created the banner for my story - was very glad to read something by you!
Look forward to the rest!
Janey
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{reviewid: 2575422, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Felton'}
22nd August 2011:
Ah!! Teaser is a biggy!! Lol. Totally can't wait till the nxt chap is posted!! So happy you continued!
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{reviewid: 2575210, reviewer: 'Liz'}
21st August 2011:
I like your story, very much, mostly because it sounds more mature and is written well. But it could use some fine tuning as far as sentence structure and the correct usage of words or spelling. No offense to your beta but that's what beta's are for, so maybe your's should go over all your chapters again or you should get a new one.
Still good job on the story. I'll definitely keep watching out for the next chapter.
Author's Response: i actually don't have a beta at this time, which is why my sentence structure is failing. :P
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{reviewid: 2574435, reviewer: 'clairevampiress'}
20th August 2011:
Yay an update!!! so happy. anyway cant wait for the next chapter. This can't be good anyway keep up the good work.
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{reviewid: 2574207, reviewer: 'D0bbys%20s0ck'}
20th August 2011:
i thought this was one of the best ones i've read yet, and i cant wait to read more!
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{reviewid: 2574183, reviewer: 'confusedlover'}
20th August 2011:
Very lovely.
I'm still here!! (: And this was a wonderful chapter. They are really starting to make a life together. I love it!! (:
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{reviewid: 2574050, reviewer: 'Gryffindor_Princess8'}
19th August 2011:
ugh so wishing ian would just fall off the planet, he's just so.persistent -_- awe they're finally getting a place together, although I'm sure that hands off policy isn't gunna stick for long ;) lol
Author's Response: you'll just have to wait and see ;)
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{reviewid: 2574037, reviewer: 'StarryLaura'}
19th August 2011:
AHHH FINALLY AN UPDATE!!! :D
haha i read this story quite a while ago...so i have to find some time to reread it later. i've forgotten some of the details XD
but yes. i'm very satisfied by this chapter. screw ian and his thirst for status and power...the fact that all the purebloods associated with death eaters were pushed down to the lowest possible level by none other than their parents, that's very interesting :) but good.
because...that's how the dramione happened! :D i'm so happy that they're together now :) and that they're going to live together.
BUT. i hate that teaser. it's making me super nervous... D: writewritewrite your block out. and update soon :) thanks so much for the new chapter, i love your story.
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