Wow, your characterization of Remus was very in line with the canon, very calm and collected yet with still a hint of being a former Marauder. And Teddy! He was so cool! It's nice how a single introductory chapter could show the strongest of bonds between father and son. Im sure Remus has always been proud of having Teddy, and you made it all the more realistic. Hope you update soon! ;-)Author's Response: I will try. I love you Remus and Teddy! Report Review
Ohh, this looks good. You're totally right, their deaths were unecessary. (Did I spell that right? 0-o) But then again, they were reunited with all the dead people, so that must have been cool.
Frank Lee Unimpressed. That is GENIUS. Note to self: If I ever become a juvenile delinquent, I must use that. I'll give you props of course. xDD
Can't wait till the next chapter!
Oodles of love, ZazuliAuthor's Response: I know, I'm working on it! Been facing a serious case of family needs and writer's block. (Okay, laziness too....) But thanks! Because I think they didn't need to die either. JKR needed a 'nice pill' before she wrote that chapter. Report Review
THEY'RE ALIVE! WHOOPEE! Oh I'm so happy, and I love Teddy already. 10/10Author's Response: They are alive, and I am going to keep them that way. JKR killing them off was a typo, I'm sure of it. This is my way of correcting it. *waves the DENIAL flag* Report Review
Is that it?
It was very good though!
:)Author's Response: No, there will be more, and thanks! Report Review
Of course the Lupins' deaths were unnecessary! Even if I am something of a canonite. . . I agree with you! ^.^
Frank Lee Unimpressed. . . *sniggers* Brilliant!
Oooh, can't wait to find out what happens. . . ReginaAuthor's Response: Thanks! You know how I feel about Remus and Tonks. Supremely pissed off. This is the story that in my mind, will give them the justice they were sorely ripped off from! Report Review
CONTINUE! Please!Author's Response: I plan on it. THANKS! Report Review
I loved it! More more more more! It's has the makings of being a really great story, and I can't wait for it to continue.Author's Response: Aww, aren't you a sweet boy? Who's my teddy bear, hmm? Who's my sweet sweet wittle teddy weddy bear!? Report Review
:D cant wait for more. well doneAuthor's Response: Thank you. I am writing the continuation now! Report Review
That was really goodAuthor's Response: Thank you. I hope you'll continue to read it! Report Review
aww, so cute! I'm glad SOMEONE decided to write a fic about if Lupiin and Tonks hadn't died. THANK YOU! 10/10 for so cute but it was shortAuthor's Response: YAY! They DID NOT die. It was a typo. (yes, I am in denial) But this will be the story to honour them, as they SHOULD have been honoured! Report Review
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