{reviewid: 2676044, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
23rd March 2012:
aww this has made my morning, i'm unwell and when i saw this had been updated it made me fell a little better :)
im so happy their keeping the baby ,another great chapter
10/10
-potterfan310 xx
Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry you're sick, but I'm glad I could help!
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{reviewid: 2672198, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
14th March 2012:
you know, you're making the story go too perfect...
you don't have a nasty twist up your sleeve, have you?
'cause i'd hate it it pads hurt mel.
oh, why do thou add troublesome last lines that make me lose my train of thought? *over dramatic sigh*
ah, just update soon, alright!
loyally,
fanna
Author's Response: Haha, I wouldn't call it a nasty twist.but happy characters are such boring characters!
I'll try and update asap ;)
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{reviewid: 2672173, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
14th March 2012:
aww yay, i let out a squeal of joy when i seen this had been updated :) can't wait for the next,this is deffinately one of my favourite stories xx
-potterfan310
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I let out a squeal of joy when I get reviews like these
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{reviewid: 2670193, reviewer: 'longlive_harrypotter'}
9th March 2012:
Thanks so much for another chapter :) it was great! loved it and can't wait to see what's coming up!
Author's Response: My pleasure! I'm glad you liked it :)
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{reviewid: 2668788, reviewer: 'justanotherhpfan'}
5th March 2012:
Good story! I liked the little "traitor" line about Peter, perhaps a look towards his future? haha, keep writing!
Author's Response: Foreshadowing is fun ;) Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 2668777, reviewer: 'JamesSiriusPotterLover'}
5th March 2012:
YES YES YES! :D :D :D :D :D :D
Okay, now I'm very very happy! She's keeping it!
Author's Response: Haha, I knew you guys would be
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{reviewid: 2668768, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
I'm so happy that you finally introduced Lily!! And I'm happy that you introduced Mary Macdonald as well.
Author's Response: Yay! I love writing both of them
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{reviewid: 2668703, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
Lol, at this part I was like HILARIOUS. PLEASE tell me they end up dating!!" Well that was horribly embarrassing,” Bea murmured.
Remus nodded. “Like being caught snogging by your parents.”
Both teens went bright red at the comparison. Can you try to get some more riddles in here. I love trying to answer them.
Author's Response: Unfortunately riddles are really hard to come up with so I sort of limited them
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{reviewid: 2668700, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
Lol,“And,” Sirius said as he walked Melora back to the Ravenclaw Dorms that night, “I didn’t get punched in the face. So I think it went great.” I was. Like what a Sirius answer. Just like him not to think of his face. I can see why you didn't like this chapter. I personally liked but it must have been hard to write a chapter about the parents. I was half expecting Sirius to be wheeled out with a black and in a wheel chair. ;)
Author's Response: Haha, it was hard because I wasn't sure how I wanted her parents to react, but I do think all the adults are rational enough not to freak out.
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{reviewid: 2668697, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
I loved this chapter. Small but quite sweet. I personally thought she would have gotten rid of it since she barely knows Sirius. Ive been thinking of it and I don't know her enough to know if she will keep it or give it for adoption
Author's Response: I think Melora's a bit morally opposed to abortion (although I personally am not) plus it was the 70's and it's not as common as today.
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{reviewid: 2668695, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
I LOVED that scene too. It was actually quite laid back unlike some people who would be freaking out if they were in that conversation. Well, I'm off to read another chapter!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much!
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{reviewid: 2668694, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
Stephen is just the biggest prat I've ever had the pleasure not to meet. If that makes any sense. Which I'm sure it doesnt. I love the dramatic exit.
Author's Response: Haha, I get it. I wouldn't want to meet him in real life
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{reviewid: 2668688, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
Bloody hormones... I love how you got the whole James/Lily thing. Lol "no one wants to hear about your 'Lily' problems right now." that was funny. I was thinking what a James thing to say
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I love writing James and Lily, although I didn't get to do it much in this fic
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{reviewid: 2668685, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
LOL!!! I know this was supposed to be a serious chapter (pun intended) but I could help laughing when he fell over.
Author's Response: Haha, I know, poor Sirius. I laughed writing it too
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{reviewid: 2668669, reviewer: 'AlbusPotter123456789123456789'}
5th March 2012:
Yeah!! I'm 100th review. I've been looking for a good sirius story since How To Tame A Marauder ended and guess what? I FOUND IT!!! NO MATTER WHAT PEOPLE SAY YOU ARE AN EPICALY AMAZING WRITER SO NEER GIVE UP!!! Off to read the chapter. Ciao
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it and I can't believe I've hit 100 reviews.
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{reviewid: 2668530, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
5th March 2012:
aww.. i always knew this would happen..
but i'm sure they wouldn't exactly go through all these changes without a hitch-- there's bound to be difficulties.. but i hope the three (yup, you too emma) make it together...
i hope you update soon!
you knw you can count on me!
smiling loyally,
fanna
Author's Response: Yeah, I had a feeling you guys would figure out my plan after the Wrights died. But there's plenty more ways for things to get messed up ;)
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{reviewid: 2668520, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
5th March 2012:
im soo glad thier keeping the baby :)
cant wait for the story to continue, i love it
-potterfan310
Author's Response: I had a feeling people would ;) I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 2667594, reviewer: 'WhySoSirius'}
3rd March 2012:
This story is beyond adorable :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it
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{reviewid: 2666428, reviewer: 'PetiteDragon'}
29th February 2012:
Aww this is such a cute chapter! I love Sirius in it :) Emma Black.. N'aww that's sweet :') Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Sirius is so fun to write when he's sappy ;)
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{reviewid: 2666303, reviewer: 'longlive_harrypotter'}
28th February 2012:
thank you so much for yet another wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 2666017, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
28th February 2012:
aww...that was quite a sweet chapter!
sorry i didn't review on all of 'em chapters..
well, i just couldn't be bothered.
i tried... but i only got ten more in you review count... sorry! :(
anyway, i love this story! and i love mel and if i didn't love pads, i wouldn't be here, reading this.
so thank my obsession with padfoot! :P
update soon!
loyally,
fanna
Author's Response: That's ok! I can't believe you reviewed as many as you did! I'm glad you like the story and I'll try to update asap :)
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{reviewid: 2665255, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
26th February 2012:
yay!now she has another girlie supported to help her at times when boys are useless!
yipee for that!
reading on before curiosity kills me..
loyally,
fanna
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 2665254, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
26th February 2012:
yay!now she has another girlie supported to help her at times when boys are useless!
yipee for that!
reading on before curiosity kills me..
loyally,
fanna
Author's Response: Haha, yes Lily will definitely be helpful when the boys are useless
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{reviewid: 2665253, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
26th February 2012:
hmmm.. this stacy doesn't sound half as bad as the venom directed towards her.. could it be that mel is being too hard on her?
i wonder...
reading on..
fanna
Author's Response: She may be a little too hard on Stacey, but her feelings were very much hurt
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{reviewid: 2665252, reviewer: 'hpfanno1'}
26th February 2012:
ok, this is quite frustrating.
i mean, come on!
how come their parents are so cool?
more people ought to have parents in the 20th century.. most parents in the 21st century would have kicked the kids outta their house straight out!
i love the jones and the potters!
:3
loyally,
fanna
Author's Response: I'm a fan of them too :) I think they care more about their kids than the mistake the kids make
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