{reviewid: 38231, reviewer: 'LMK'}
19th February 2003:
Hey. This is M!
Good! Interesting! I like it! It\'s different, from the discription I never would have guessed it would be like this. But it was good!
Nice job!
Keep up the good work!
~M
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{reviewid: 38254, reviewer: 'Magnolia'}
19th February 2003:
Hi!
This is really good! The names make it alittle confusing. but it\'s a great story and it has a lot of potential. I can\'t wait to see what happens!
~Magnolia
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{reviewid: 38061, reviewer: 'Meg'}
16th February 2003:
I love it!! Make sure u post more!! :O) i give it 5 stars!!
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{reviewid: 37647, reviewer: 'Aathiel'}
9th February 2003:
Muahaha, Marjo Blanco... Every time I hear that name, I think, \"Ricky Martin\" lol.
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{reviewid: 37641, reviewer: 'Chantal'}
8th February 2003:
Its cool. That\'s all I can say. I haven\'t posted a review before... first experience....
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{reviewid: 37489, reviewer: 'Anne'}
6th February 2003:
SUUUUUPER!!! really good.. Alexa, you never seice(how the heck do you write that, whatever) to amaze me.. I love it! I luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuve Marjo... he sounds like SUCH a hottie! I can\'t wait for more! Sorry about the lame review.... but then again.. you know I\'m hyper right now..:)
-Anne-(\",)
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{reviewid: 37383, reviewer: 'AngelGurl'}
3rd February 2003:
Hey I like this story it will be a hit please keep writing. :)
My story Love Can Hurt could use a review Thanx I need somemore pointers.
:)
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{reviewid: 36696, reviewer: 'Craig'}
2nd February 2003:
sorry about taking so long to review, but i\'ve been real busy beating harry up and having people bother me with hair care questions, this really is a great story, ur a really good writer. and i must say great acter to! phew
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{reviewid: 37261, reviewer: 'IrmaFuchs'}
1st February 2003:
Wow-this is a very good and well-written story.
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{reviewid: 37222, reviewer: 'Jeighs'}
31st January 2003:
Wow!!I love this!!Really,really good!!!hehe!Update soon!!!Like your interview in Revealed!!
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{reviewid: 37037, reviewer: 'Kayla'}
28th January 2003:
Told you I'd read it. It's very good so far, So please do me and everyone else who reviewed a favor by WRITTING ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 37031, reviewer: 'jenniferj'}
27th January 2003:
i can't believe that siris is being so mean to clisk, though he does have a good reason, it's alittle confusing but i suspect that it will get much better, i hope you get the next chapter up asap, and btw ron the best aurour? thats different, but i like the udea, harry shouldn't get al the spotlight
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{reviewid: 37030, reviewer: 'Peppercat'}
27th January 2003:
Hey! I'm liking it so far! BUT, HOW DARE YOU KILL DRACO??? (tears tears) you've broken my heart, I'll cut my veins if you don't make him come back from death! Grrr!!! Keep going! =)
-Z>Pepper
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{reviewid: 37026, reviewer: 'Liz'}
27th January 2003:
THAT IS SUCH A GOOD START! I like how everyone has kids. Who did everyone marry? Ron and Hermione obviously. Anyway I really liked it so far. KEEP WRITING!
PS> What classes do Remus and Sirius teach?
~LIZ
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{reviewid: 37021, reviewer: 'lilsweetie'}
27th January 2003:
DONT TAKE MY HEAD!! but thats not why im revewing... well that was a good chapter i would love to find out who are their mothers ALSO black seems a little unfair and hateful towards him or maybe im just not use to the strictness well i love this idea of your and update soon!!
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{reviewid: 37010, reviewer: 'Anon'}
27th January 2003:
I loved you idea about "The second generation", but could you explain who the mothers to all the kids are???? Just wondering....
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{reviewid: 37009, reviewer: 'Anon'}
27th January 2003:
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'd love to hear more!!!!
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{reviewid: 36987, reviewer: 'Anne'}
27th January 2003:
Awsome chapter Lt.. Even though it's highly unlikely that all of them got married and had children around the same age, I still love your story.. I really like the way you portray Ron as not only harry's best friend.. keep writing.. Really great!
-Anne-(",)
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{reviewid: 36979, reviewer: 'Aathiel'}
26th January 2003:
Okay, wait, I'm confused. So, it's Jordyn Weasley, and James Potter, and Remus Lupin, and Jeremy Black? Right? This is great so far, I'm just confused about the names. Could you clarify a little bit? Thanks! :) KEEP WRITING OR I'LL HAVE YOUR HEAD!! Lol...
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{reviewid: 36955, reviewer: 'lilsweetie'}
26th January 2003:
oOOoO second chapter was just as good as the first!! so where's chapter 3?
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{reviewid: 36904, reviewer: 'Jennica'}
26th January 2003:
Hey i like your story it is very gripping.PLEASE write more !!! :)
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{reviewid: 36899, reviewer: 'JKButcher'}
26th January 2003:
Great beginning Alexa. I really think that you have something here with this story. In the first chapter you did an excellent job of portraying Clisk's uncertainty and fear in his meeting with Voldemort. It was an excellent example of showing the reader something rather than telling them something. I myself have a problem with that all the time. Great beginning, and I'm looking forward to seeing if the second generation can live up to the first.
-Butch
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{reviewid: 36892, reviewer: 'Anne'}
25th January 2003:
Totally, absolutely ultracool! I love it! Awsome! Really good.. extremely good idea! Wow... the next generation... I like it
-Anne-(",)
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{reviewid: 36861, reviewer: 'Pidget'}
25th January 2003:
ooh this is really good! I really like how you made Ron into a first class Auror. I always thought he needed to be something other than 'Harry's best friend.' :o) I look forward to reading more of this story in the future!! Keep it up, your idea is excellent!
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{reviewid: 36856, reviewer: 'HermioneGranger'}
25th January 2003:
Whoa-That is very good! i have only read 1 chapter and it already has a good start.
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