omg.
i was soo excited to see the update
amazing amazing story

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WO!

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Ah good ending! Well except for the beginning, that sucks ahaha, and the last chapter :O

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Sweet action! I was so excited to have seen you had updated (I love this story, you've done a fantastic job writing it!) It never occured to me that Lily could not have known about the Order, I always assumed her and James joined together, so I like the little twist you put in. Sirius sarcasm seems to still be there... I love reading about James and his view on everything. Great job and please update sooner then a year? Maybe six months or so? lol---kidding. bloomin' fantastic job.

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OMG! HORRIBLE how can you make that many twists? i feel awfull for lily this is awesomely written props to you!

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THAT IS THE CUTEST THING EVER! I LOVE IT! AMAZINGLY SWEET!

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I got sooo excited when I saw you updated, lol. This story is brilliant. What a cliffehanger. I hope you update soon! :)

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Cute story, but you seem to be missing sentences at the end of this chapter.

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Last chapter was probably one of the worst cliffies in fanfic history (and trust me I have occupied my time with many) and you would not believe how excited I was to realize that you had updated...I had given up on this story...and I hate to say this but I was disappointed, not in the writing because its still great but in the plot...but then as I thought about it, I remembered that the greatness of a story is the sum of all its parts...I guess I wanted to find out what happened with the whole Remus/Lily/James ordeal and forgot that there were still other issues that needed to be resolved and addressed...so basically I'm glad that you've decided to update because that last chapter was a hell of a chapter and it left me wanting more...cheers!

Author's Response: Lily/Remus/James isn't necessarily over. Obviously it is for now, but what will other future chapters hold? Well, I can't really tell you that because I don't really know myself. But thank you for the wonderful review!

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This one of the strangest stories I have ever read. But, it's very unique and I like it. Great job. :D

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hey welcome back! long time no see . . .
thank you so much for the chapter. btw, hopefully we'll get some more soon.. *hint hint* lol
great chapter.. bad james though - keeping lily out of the dark. i've never read one like that, and i like the way you did it. very nice! :-P

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This was an excellent chapter. The transitions were what really stood out to me- actually, they didn't stand out, which means that they are actually really good. I also really like this story, although it almost seems more and more that we aren't seeing the scene from Harry's POV, when we should. But I'm just a nitpicker!

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Wow, great comeback chapter! I'm so glad to see that you're going to finish it. I only get on here every now and then to check your story and one more because they're the only stories that I have on my favorites that aren't finished yet. I've even neglected my own story for two years, so I know how it is. You get busy with school, and you don't have time to write when you want to. Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait for more!

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im gonna cry its to sad!

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super good chapter update soon 10/10

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ITS SO CUTE I LOVE IT!

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OMG, OMG, OMFG! I'm SOOO glad that you finally updated! And what did you end it with? - a cliffhanger, of course! Absolutely loved the chapter...just please don't make me wait another year and a half for an update

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Oh my! I didn't think that would happen! Great chapter even though it took forever to come out. I like your writing skills! Update as soon as you can! ~Dobby

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great story, keep up the good work

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thats really good!!!

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I'm not signed in right now, but I just wanted to let you know I love your story! I can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10!

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Aww...Finish soon!

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Yay! You're back! *cough*finally*cough* I didn't have as long to wait as the others, seeing as I read this only about a year ago. I really like the story line you've crafted here and the intricities of the plot. You've made the story come to life and I can't wait to see what happens. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! There will be an update soon!

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GREAT! once agian a great story written by u! post the new chptr soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful reviews! I'm glad you like my stories. I will update soon.

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