I like it a lot :) My nerd-ness is annoyed that you changed the canon (not the years, I don't care about that, but the positions), but I think it'll work out :)
8/10Author's Response: Don't worry - it will all work out haha. Report Review
i like your main character especially how she gets so flustered about breaking the rulesAuthor's Response: Haha, that's my favorite thing about her! I've never written a character like her before. That mouse-y side of me is the one I have to tap into when I write this story. Report Review
How awesome is this story! Please update soon!Author's Response: Ah! November, sweetheart. It'll be on its way :D Report Review
Please, update soon..
I really can't wait... :D
10/10Author's Response: Ah, I'm sorry it's taking so long :[ Give me until the end of August! Report Review
Fun, light hearted fic! I like how all the characters are approachable and realistic. Not like gods and goddesses with super powers and millionaire parents. Lol.
UPdate soonAuthor's Response: Haha, that's what you get when you're part of the quidditch team ;P everyone feels like your best friend. that's the way I've always seen the twins, especially! Thanks for the great review :) an update is in the works it's just taking me forever to wrap it up :X Report Review
LMAO. i have a roger davis too! hahaha two years below me and everything. bahahaha. this is hilarious.Author's Response: Everyone has a dumb little Roger Davies T_T hahah. They get on my nervous to be honest. But they mean well so I can't kick them hahah :P Report Review
“It’s not like I was the only girl, Angelina was there, too.”
Lee pummels Fred with a hug. “YOU ARE MY HERO-”
Hahaha. That was really funny. That complete scene, really.
I love all your characters. They all have a clear role in the group without it seeming stereotyped, and their interactions feel real. I find it very easy to relate to Liv.
I'm just not a big fan of all the OCs in the team, because I'm a big canon fan.
I'm betting their pyjama party plan is going to backfire on Liv and Sofia. Especially Liv, because that's just life. But hopefully Oliver will realise Katie likes him too and they'll get together.Author's Response: Hahah thanks! And maybe the pajama party doesn't end up as disasterous as we hope, who knows? ;) thanks for the review, I'm glad you like my characters! Report Review
Foreshadowing??? Well for one, the girls are going to try and get Liv and Fred together along with Katie and Oliver. At least that's what I think. ^.^Probably wrong, but whatever. =^.^=
But my oh my, this story is amazing. I have a feeling that even though it's not a common couple, it'll be picked up my lots of people soon enough.
-HaylenieAuthor's Response: Awe, I am so happy! :D thank you, I'm glad you like my story! your wondeful review just made my night. Report Review
I nearly cried at the end of this chapter. Why? cuz I wanted more and I know I won't get more for a while. I love this story so much. I was frustrated w/ all Liv's friends though when they wouldn't believe her. Actually, I found them frustrating all the time, it's like they really do ignore her a lot or don't take her seriously. This upsets me because I can relate to her position. Still really enjoyed it. Please write more soon. Hope school is going well for you too. Thanks.Author's Response: Yeah, I get what you mean. But sometimes friends are there just to give you a hard time :P That's more of what this is. I think that they do believe her but they tease her WAY too much, mainly because she's so innocent and so easily flustered. But don't worry, she'll have her own payback ;) all in good time. Report Review
I LOVED IT!! Great at catching the true characters of the Weasley Twins and I really enjoyed the little tussle between Sophia and Rogies.Author's Response: Roger Davies and the Twins are probably my favorite characters to write about in this fic! They're just so fun :) thanks for the review! Report Review
I really enjoyed it. I love how you introduced us to all the characters instead of just assuming we know who they are and what they are like. I love how you portrayed Oliver. Many of the Oliver stories I've read have him being a total jerk and womanizer for the most part. Your portrayal of him seems to be more true to the original character of Rowling's. Great read. :) thanks.Author's Response: Oh, no. This Oliver Wood is more oblivious and angry about everything hahahah. Thank you for the great review, I'm so glad you like my story! Report Review
lol i luv the boxers. 'im too sexy for my bludger...' where do you come up with this stuff? i wish i was as hilarious as u. i was reading this chapter and couldnt stop laughing my loser brother threw a tissue box at me so id shut up. and this humor of yours is so. realistic. idk how to explain it and youre prob reading this with a 'WTF???' face. btw i love how you respond to most of your reviews and i cant wait for an update! uh... meep?
10/10 and love and buttefly kisses
~~VAuthor's Response: Hahah oh gosh, it's so strange when people call me funny because sometimes I laugh at my own jokes and my friends just stare at me and I'm all like: POKER FACE. but i'm so sad by it hahaha. my friends don't ahve the same humor as me! But I'm glad you appreciate it :)
I love you! Meep :D Report Review
Hahaha I loove this story and I generally love Fred as a character and you portray him veryy well :D update soonly pleash :D (although I unfortunately understand the whole school thing blagghh) anyway keep writing :DAuthor's Response: I can't promise that I'll update within the month of May, but I can promise that my next update for this fic will be a long chappie ;D thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Your story is just aghh can't explain :D I hope you write more soon because it's got me reading continuoslyAuthor's Response: Hahah awe I will try to update quickly for you! I have another 2 stories to update before I start to work on this one :) feel free to read a one-shot or something while you wait ^_^ Report Review
Very funny!! Love this story, please continue soon XDAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll be updating in about a month or so. Report Review
This is fantastic. I loved the part where they thought she had a one night stand with Fred, it made me laugh so hard.Author's Response: hahah, they're always against her! Fred is such a git sometimes. Report Review
Love this story! Please update soon.
I know how you feel about the school thing, don't worry. Your not alone. :)Author's Response: Ugh, it sucks lol. I just wish school could get easy right when I have a surge of writing energy! but alas, all my focus is on school. and not only that; but I'm writing from my other computer because the one I have all my chapters on has a virus D: so I'm gonna try and retrieve them somehow before the weekend comes by. Report Review
I just love Fred Weasley!
Hopefully their plan works out, though I can just imagine something going wrong x]
Looking forward to the update! and, I hope school gets better :)
- JaidAuthor's Response: Oh, with Fred you can imagine the many things going wrong ;P Also, thank you for understanding about the school thing. I hope it gets better too!
♥ thanks for the review, Jaid! Report Review
Oh my gosh I LOVE this story! I love Fred and Liv, she's a very cool character. I can't wait for them to get together...well I guess I'm assuming they'll get together, that would be wonderful :) Please update as soon as you can, this is a really great story and I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: It would be wonderful, wouldn't it ;) Perhaps they will! I am so glad you like this story! I have a big appreciation for the Oliver Wood/Weasley gang and they're my favorite generation. I don't even like the golden trio all that much- It's the quidditch team and the marauders. Those are my favorite old gens (now that the real gen is next gen). I'm so happy you liked this chapter and this story, it means so much ^_^ Report Review
well 10/10 for an amazing plot! i do luv me some long chapters missy! this is an amazing story! can not wait for the next chapter! i LOVE fred to death. im really impressed with this story! update soon!!
~~VAuthor's Response: haha, I'm glad the long chapter satisfied you! Fred is my favorite character as well, and thank you for reading it and reviewing it! Your review made me smile ^_^ Report Review
lol, i love the boy who cried wolf part, very funny. I love fred here, still want them to get together, but at least she hasn't fallen for him right away, it makes things interesing :)
oxoxoAuthor's Response: Oh, it'll take a while before anything happens romantically between Fred/Liv. But don't worry, Katie Bell's future transformation is going to be a twist full of surprises for both of them ;) Report Review
Cute chapter! I love Liv's response to waking up with Fred. I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Awe thank you! That was exactly what I was going for: cute :) I feel like their connection is so adorable yet so taunting, you know? Thanks for the review! Report Review
Yay! New chapter! And it was pretty hilarious. I hope you write more soon. But what's with all the words being cut off and "eyebrow" replacing them? I don't understand that bit.Author's Response: ..Eh? Could you be mroe specific? I'm not so sure I follow - I just re-read the whole chapter and didn't catch that. Report Review
God, I frickin love this story. I really liked how they thought Liv and Fred were together and, ahem, bumped uglies. It actually made me laugh out loud. I've been waiting for this update, and I think it lived to the previous ones pretty good. I have a soft spot for Fred, so that makes me like this even more.Author's Response: :3 You are so sweet. Do you really think they beat the other previous chapters? I kind of want this updated to be a little more cutesy and humorous, focusing on Fred/Liv. But thank you! Oh god, who DOESN'T have a soft spot for Fred? Feel free to appreciate him in the fic to the fullest ;) Report Review
So while waiting for an update I started reading this story. I love it! I'm also a dancer and I can easily relate to Lyv. Her character is great and Fred is adorable :) update soon!Author's Response: Really!? Yay, I love when dancers like my dancer fics :D Thanks for the review, and I hope you like my story and the many chapters to come! Report Review
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