That was hilarious!! I love how you added in the death of Proffesor Binns(i think it was Binns). And then James fainting. lol. Great Chapter!Author's Response: Thanks >.< Report Review
OO Jamesey wamsey likesey wikesy (okay lets stop that shall we?) Lily. Gasp I never saw him likeing her! haha baby wipes for the .1% of germs!!!im so happy!! update soon!!! that will make me happy-er-er yea!!Author's Response: lol, i'll try!!! Report Review
LOl, how cool... :) Lily is like really funny in this story... and the professor being dead... ;) great chapter! As always :) Author's Response: hehe thanks, i love making Lily do incredibly weird stuff... Report Review
wow this is an awesome storyAuthor's Response: thanks! :D Report Review
Long title dont chyeah think? haha oh i feel so bad for Teely right now you have no clue. James and Mark better watch out.Author's Response: haha thanks Report Review
wow, this story is SO funny, Teely and Sirius and James all have so great comments... oh and Lily of course =) love this story! update soon! Author's Response: haha thanks :] Report Review
PUPPY I WANT ONE!! AND IT DOES MAKE SENSE. Sirius is befuzled.okay so yea great ch u say ur going to update soon so please do!! I cant wait bye
nazozinkAuthor's Response: me either. lol. :] *hand you a spotted brown puppy* awwwwwjhresjthr Report Review
whoo!!! first to review :D this is like my first time ever.
anyways...long chapter title. lol but loved it alll the same. James and Mark are PURE evil >.< they need a big helping of...uhh...gum :DAuthor's Response: YAY you. Report Review
hahah... James doesn't like gum! hahaha... but I have to agree with him on that one, chewed gum... ewww. and when Mark shot it in his hair I was laughing really hard. don't worry, I've learned from last time, and I have learned to control my breathing. lol...
Sirius has changed side?! and I thought Peter was the traitor here. well, Sirius is excused. why you might ask. because he was... ummm... young and stupid.. yay... that's the one... hahahha
Can't wait for the next chapter... will you post it before christmas? ^-^ Report Review
no! sirius has gone to the dark side? or has he? please say he hasn't betrayed teely? they work so good together! update sooon!!!Author's Response: dont' worry i'll update soon!!!! Report Review
Please tell me this is when the Mauraders meet. Please, let there be a God of fan fiction and let this be when the Mauaders meet!Author's Response: it certainly does seem that wayy...:D Report Review
SWEET SAUSE! LONG LIVE TEELY!
10/10Author's Response: lol, thank you! :D Report Review
What?!?!?!?!?! sirius? sirius? not...sirius? :D lmao, please don't let sirius actually be siding with James. update soon must know answers Author's Response: answers coming soon, i promise and yess.....sirius. :] Report Review
O BETRAYER WORMS I SAY NO I SCREAM WORMS! WORMMS FOR THEM ALL and mark well he can just get kicked in the face by a deer gr! I think we could take um if telly helped grr I hate them. They're going to regret this arent they? was Mark flirting with telly? I cant tell if so .pervy Mark if not heehehe ignor last state ment Okay hurry up write more I have to know everything 10/10Author's Response: haha mark was indeed flirting with ms. teely but of course she's oblivious to it :D
mark getting kicked in the face by a deer...lol interesting.!!!!!!!!!! :D i like it:] Report Review
i want a _insertwhateveryouwanthere_ sounds exciting
: ) Author's Response: haha :D very exciting!!!! Report Review
Spawn of Satan? you, girl, need to chill out about your teacher =P At least this long-term sub is leaving right? Oh and I get the feeling you stole the whole buttering toast is so fun from my essay I wrote for Mr. Murray last year =PPP Theif!! lol, it's still just as funny like always...so..yeah...=DAuthor's Response: i will never chill out about that teacher because where she comes from it's hot!!! -insert laughter here because that was a joke- Report Review
uh-oh ._. I didn't see that coming. will black betray teely or go through with her plan on revenge? Is Mark simply sucking up to Potter so he can retaliate with a go-teely plan, or is her annihilation at hand? Will Pettigrew ever not be... erm... chubby...? O.o
these answers and more on the next episode...!
10/10 by the way. =D This has to be one of the most twisted, hilarious, out-of whack fic I've read here. notice, those words are not in alphabetical order. ;) heh... keep it up, I look forward to more! =DAuthor's Response: :] haha i like the beginning of this, you should like the guy who announces movies...but with hp stories o.O lol
and you really should put those words in alphabetical 0rder. it's funn :D Report Review
This chapter is hilarious!!! Lily is so funny with the whole germ thing. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: hehe, thank you! you deserve a cookie or something.. Report Review
it was a funny chapter; James is so cute! With his screaming. he is a little bit girly, I've always thought so ;) and the Lily Teely friendship is cute =) but the end there I didn't get. James and Peter and SIRIUS?!?! what happened to Sirius being on Teely's side? He helped her write all those notes in class, which brought James in detention in the first place. And it was funny with Mark wearing a seashell necklace... =0) update soon then =P it's a funny story! Author's Response: haha, it's a mystery with sirius that evil laddie :D and i always thought james was...a little conceited :D Report Review
so basicallly here's the rundown:
ilovethisstory!! it's just so...funny. i don't know how you can think of all these ideas for revenge and still keep a "flow-ful" plotline. lol flowful. wth? anyway...update soon!Author's Response: hahah, thanks.
will do :] Report Review
i LOVE this its awesome
Sheri gave me the link - i love!
~Sheri's-friend-Taryn (from Halloween : P) Author's Response: :Dawesome! thank you thank you *takes bow* Report Review
*cough*cough* mild language?. you.are.still.crazy. yeah, I said it ^.^ boo and yah. You should become a writer, it's rather...interesting. see yas at schoolAuthor's Response: me crazy? psfft. and you should become a comedian. me crazy..haha hilarious. xD Report Review
Oooh, things are getting tense! Great chapter!Author's Response: i know! lol, thanks! Report Review
lmao seriously. i think i might just have to write down those yo momma jokes and use them at school. :DAuthor's Response: lol nicee! thanks for reviewing! Report Review
The stupid computer cut off my review. To summarize it for you, b/c it was SUPER long, this chapter kicked butt. I love how Sirius and James aren't best friends, Lily really does seem like a germ freak, how do you think of all those words for that note? And what is my reward? I'm really slow, so you should warn me before i get it. lol And...hmm what else.. Oh now i remember Is this story only first year? If it is, you NEED to write a sequal! Or else...or else...or else i'll throw potatos in a sock at you! 10/10!
~MirandaAuthor's Response: or else you'll throw potatoes in a sock at me? you're using my story against me?! NO!!!! :] yepp it's first year...
i might consider a sequal but it wouldn't be like 2nd year, maybe 5th. i dunno...
as for the words and the note lets just say my english teacher is to blame, she likes giving us loads of vocabulary. *nods*
your reward is a....*looks around* ps3!! playstation 3...yepp Report Review
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