waaahhh!

when are u thinking about updatign next??? ur stories amazing! hahaha

cant wait for the next few chapters... so hard waiting tho..!

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Aw.that was so sweet and really good! Can't wait ofr the next.Update soon1
10/10 :) !!
~emmapotter

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Aw...you have me in tears, and it's Christmas Eve. That's hard to do. I love this chapter, but I'd love a happier one, I can see Lily watching the wedding from her window when James leaves Gwen at the altar. Or is that just wishful thinking? Can't wait to see what you do next!

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Wow
That Was
'mazing
(:

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Ahh! I can't believe I've found this so late!
This is honestly one of the best stories I've found on this site.
Haven't actually read a Lily/James where they don't end up together in 7th year so this is an amazing change.
I seriously can't believe you're 14, well maybe you're older now.
Am only 12 chapters in and already predicting the rage that will happen when I finish and it isn't finished =p
Your portrayal of Lily is seriously one of the best I've ever seen. I'll review again when I get to the end, but just felt I had to say something now.
You're amazing.
Thank you for writing this =)

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OKAY! SO.you have to update so sooon because I am just dying to kow what happens?? I personally dont think it is James's baby but please please update soon so I know for sure!
You are very talented and I love your story!!

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OMG i love it
hurry up write more!
sorry i am so impatient

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i love this! i'm not usually as fan of readign lily james fics but this is great! fab plot, great characterisation and good writing style! can't wait for more. keep writing -madmoo

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awah!

that is so sad and sweet.


cant wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for the review
x

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wonderful! How sad tough -- I hope Gwen is exposed to be a FRAUD!

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gahh! its so sad!
i want them together!
NOW!!
~megan

Author's Response: lol thanks for the review
x

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omg, i am crying right now. This is so sad.
The wedding must not go on!

update soon, i wanna know what's gonna happen.

10/10

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NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOO

JAMES CAN NOT MARRY GWEN OR I WILL STOP READING THIS STORY UNLESS YOU TELL ME THAT HE WILL BE WITH LILY. JAMES HAS TO BE WITH LILY. ITS LILY AND JAMES AND THATS IT. NO JAMES AND GWEN.

you are an amazing writer. i almost cried at that last bit and im so angry and i HATE gwen. it takes a really good author to get that kind of emotion out of people.

please update soon so lily and james can be together FOREVER because i KNOW that gwens baby is nmot james's. it cant be...

update soon! thanks!
xoxo
Nikki
8976234872495/10 XD

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thats so sad!! i was like about to start crying as i read that!! its an absolutely amazing story! i cannot wait to see how you turn it aroun dso james and lily get married!!

Author's Response: aw thankyou :)
x

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NO!! That's so sad! I was sitting in the middle of my Science class reading this, trying not to start bawling my eyes out! It's so depressing. Can't something just happen to Gwen to stop the wedding?? Hell James needs an epiphany or something, I do see where he's coming from but isn't Gwen's baby not his? Or am I suffering amnesia?? Anyway great chapter, really pulls on your heartstrings when characters who are meant to be are forced to say goodbye...
lily_james_foreva_701 xx

Author's Response: its his and gwen's baby lol
well it would be pretty embarrasing if you randomly started crying in science lol
thanks for the review
x

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another brilliant chapter!!
update soon please!!

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awww that was such a sad chapter *crys*
poor james and lily
but i really liked the descriptions and his flashback memory
cant wait to see what happens next

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THIS IS SO SAD
god, i'm actually touched and on the verge of tears
GREAT STORY
Wow, what a change of mood

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That goodbye totally got me choked up. And lemme just say, I do NOT cry easily. At all. So, very well done and I can't wait to see what happens next. :D

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It's getting down to the wire, non? Goodness, I must know what happens at this wedding. Merlin knows something's bound to blow up.

“You were never in my life for just a few months, Lily,” admitted James, breathing in the scent of her sweet hair, his tears spilling onto it. “You have been my life since I was thirteen years old. It has always been about you.” But what a line, if that boy (or that girl) doesn't act on that speech, they are crazy. Because honestly, who doesn't want to hear that...? I know I do!

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AW!

james and lily are absolutely the cutest couple ever!

this is such an adorkable chapter!!

update soon please!
k thankers
kt

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Yay finally! I loved it!

Author's Response: i'm glad you did
thanks for your review
x

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great chapter

but poor lily and james : ((

I hope everything will turn out well

10/10!!

Author's Response: thankyou :)
x

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oh goodness, this wedding can only end horribly, or would it technically end well? merlin knows it's going to go down, thats for sure. you mustn't take long to update, for i only have one chapter till the end of what you've written. and i am helplessly hooked. i must learn that james and lily get together, and i must find out about this child gwen is carrying. there has to be some form of twist coming. and i am dying to know!

i am completely addicted and obsessed with this story!!

Author's Response: who knows how the wedding is going to end? ;)
hopefully it wont take me too long to update cause i wouldnt want to drive you crazy lol
thankyou for all your lovely reviews
x x x

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aww, i love the end!
xD itrs so sweeet.

Author's Response: aww thankyou :)
xxx

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