I think you should definately continue! Personally, I am a big fan of The Princess Diaries Series so it would be very interesting to see this from Lily's point of view. You could maybe improve on your chapters by making them a bit longer, adding in more detail, describing a bit more about the characters, etc. Anyway, great chapter, I hope you post another soon! *puts on favourites* =)Author's Response: I know. I hate putting too much details then it would seem boring but I'll try. I don't write long chapters but wateva the readers says goes. :) Thankx for reading and reviewing it is very apperciated. Report Review
Good chapter! Can you make them a little longer though?
Please update soon!Author's Response: I will try but I can't guarntee anything. :P Glad you liked it. :) Thankx for the review.
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