{reviewid: 1839811, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
22nd February 2008:
Lol, I didn’t imagine that when I saw the title, but it was definitely brilliant. Poor Remus, but his little adventure really made me laugh. Great work!
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{reviewid: 1816859, reviewer: 'PureSlytherinSpite'}
3rd February 2008:
GREAT introduction, i should say!!
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{reviewid: 1801050, reviewer: 'Timechild'}
21st January 2008:
Amazing story. I had always given Pansy more credit than others normally do. This chapter is almost perfect for her.
You did really well.
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{reviewid: 1800749, reviewer: 'EvansPotter'}
21st January 2008:
i fell in love with a fictional character whose dead, but i don't care; i love him and i feel sorry he died and that he did get the chance to tell Harry the marauder adventures. Oh, i've got to say that your writting and expressing people's feeling is amazing.
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{reviewid: 1800707, reviewer: 'EvansPotter'}
21st January 2008:
amazingly written and expressed.
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{reviewid: 1788447, reviewer: 'ginwannabe'}
12th January 2008:
Oh, Elena...I love a good Ron/Hermione story. This was beautiful. LOVED that he took her up on the broom and LOVED that they fell in the lake while kissing even more ;o). Well done!
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{reviewid: 1788294, reviewer: 'ginwannabe'}
12th January 2008:
Oh...how could you kill off Harry & Ron? But you did a great job of writing Hagrid, he's another character I haven't attempted yet because I don't know I could do him well enough. I do love that Hermione is going to help him bring Hogwarts back. I can't imagine it ever being lifeless...it's a living, breathing character of its own. I liked this very much.
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{reviewid: 1785518, reviewer: 'blimey'}
9th January 2008:
This is so sad. I really want to cry. It's a great representation of what the relationship between Cedric and Cho might have been like.
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{reviewid: 1783503, reviewer: 'jointhedarksidewehavecookies'}
8th January 2008:
oooh cute! i really like it, cause it's got a little ginny & ron childhood, which i think is really cute, and it's just a really good story :D
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{reviewid: 1772137, reviewer: 'JLHufflepuff'}
31st December 2007:
I absolutely love this. It's well-written and humorous yet reflective at the same time! :) And of course, I love Remus! :)
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{reviewid: 1771667, reviewer: 'tm_14'}
30th December 2007:
This is really good. I love the way you incorperated the church and some real historical figures from the era. It made the story really believable. Just a tidbit of knowledge for you, though: Rowena said that she would only worship in a religion with a godess, therefore she would not become Catholic. However, in the Dark Ages, more specifically in the time they believe to be King Arthur's, many pagans (mostly Druids) believed that Mary of Nazareth was their own Godess in disguise and that all religions were connected. Just some random knowledge :) Wonderful job!
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{reviewid: 1751582, reviewer: 'war%20and%20peace'}
13th December 2007:
I love it! weird how he wants to be transfigured into an apple though... what genius came up with that? :P
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{reviewid: 1748294, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
10th December 2007:
Loved it! I really like how you conveyed her fear and how you opened and ended the chapter with the dream. The little Percy/Penelope moment was cute, even if it was brief. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1748288, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
10th December 2007:
That was brilliant! I love the flashbacks. It’s interesting to know that she was petrified. The little bit about her parents was nicely done too. All in all, great chapter!
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{reviewid: 1748286, reviewer: 'Potterholic'}
10th December 2007:
LOL, I love how you wrote Lockhart. It felt effortless and the story flowed nicely. The flashback was nicely done too. The ending made me giggle. I could imagine the look on McGonagall’s face when Lockhart said that. Good job!
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{reviewid: 1741954, reviewer: 'moony_wormtail_padfoot_prongs'}
6th December 2007:
great intro
Love it
10/10
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{reviewid: 1737477, reviewer: 'cjoey97'}
3rd December 2007:
Real good story, keep on writing
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{reviewid: 1725738, reviewer: 'IgnotusPeverell'}
25th November 2007:
I enjoy your writing very much! I have read up to Hermion and grow more eager every second i read. I commend you. =]
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{reviewid: 1721671, reviewer: 'Weasley_Wizard_Wheezes'}
22nd November 2007:
i expected a bit more of a story...it was really detailed but i just wanted a bit more of the meat if you know what i mean.
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{reviewid: 1712821, reviewer: 'Weasley_Wizard_Wheezes'}
16th November 2007:
wow. cant wait to get started on all of the other chapters
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{reviewid: 1692560, reviewer: 'Midwinter_wolf'}
31st October 2007:
really good, but was this written before book7?
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{reviewid: 1692483, reviewer: 'midwinter_wolf'}
31st October 2007:
v gud
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{reviewid: 1686757, reviewer: 'Aranyria'}
27th October 2007:
That was amazing! It is excactly what Riddle would have done.
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{reviewid: 1685994, reviewer: 'Kait%20Hobbit'}
27th October 2007:
Loved the last paragraph, it was simply amazing; Poor Ced, this made me feel a little more simpathly towards cho--Brilliantly done
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{reviewid: 1658048, reviewer: 'Book077'}
6th October 2007:
I love it
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