aww, the love story is SOO sweet

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I can`t stop reading! Love your story

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awesome!!! i

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AMAZING! love the slytherins

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I LOVE how you are wrighting malfoy, may sound strange but you do him perfectly.

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this is awesome!!! i love it

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Oh dear.

Well, things aren't looking good this chapter for Hermione for more than one reason, no? The fight with Theo is the most obvious; he obviously doesn't like her attachment to Draco, even when they aren't technically speaking. I can very easily see this being the downfall of their relationship, especially compounded by the fact that Hermione didn't apologize (as you know I don't think that she should).

Also though, no matter what Hermione chooses it leaves the opportunity for a serious problem as far as going back to the Burrow for the holidays. All I can see is something going wrong. She isn't at the Burrow, so tragedy can strike there and she won't be there to help. But if she leaves Draco/Hogwarts is going to be attacked, and she won't be there to help either. Not to mention that if she stays at Hogwarts that leaves the opportunity for something to go wrong while she is there and she gets caught in the crossfire.

Honestly, I just see this entire thing being one great big mess.

I see a Draco reunion in the near future though, which is good! I'm actually starting to miss him (God, did those words just actually come out of my mouth?)

Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Hey Cassie! :D

I'm so excited that you liked this chapter! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it so much. You're right that things aren't looking too good for the Theo/Hermione relationship. And Draco will be back soon, I promise! I miss him too. :] I'm glad you're starting to get a little attached to him, haha. That's good! Again, thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it more than you know.

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A great chapter please update soon.

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write more asap! :) Love your story!

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ur a really good writer =D i just spent like three hours reading the entire thing =D plz update quickly=D

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Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm really glad you like the story and I'll update ASAP. I appreciate your feedback and hope you'll read more when it's posted! :D

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Okay! So - I liked Lady Malfoy a lot, making me think that I can like this ship when it's done right. And Rule Breaker has been tempting me way to long. So I'm here!

You have these characters so perfect! I think the trio would be the hardest three to get their personalities just right, and you've done such a beautiful job that I just want to hug you.

I really like also that you've switched up the head boy, it already shows me this is going to be different. Nice choice, btw.

The shared dorm thing doesn't even matter in this instance, obviously I'm an offender myself, and because it's not even Draco she's sharing it with!!

And I really found her thoughts on Ron and their relationship easy to relate to. Could you image losing such a solid friendship if you didn't work out?

Even the foundation of why this is starting their seventh year seems believable. Even more so then JKR's, let's send a group of barely of ages to find horcruxes.

I have to say, I really am impressed with how this is starting. The story was so clear and played out so well, the flow was gorgeous and it was just one of those that is a piece of cake to lose yourself too. I'm really excited to continue, Emily!!

♥

Author's Response: Hey Jami!

I'm so, so, SO excited that you've decided to give this a shot. It's by far my favorite story that I'm working on for this site. :D I'm really happy that you think that I characterized the trio well! I always seem to have trouble with Harry and Ron...and I'm glad you like the idea of someone OTHER than Draco being Head Boy! :D I really wanted to avoid that cliche (even though I've done it before). I'm glad you think her thoughts on Ron were legitimate. And I'm glad you think this is a good beginning! I can't wait to hear what you think of the rest! Thank you so much for reviewing!

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I know that I'm absolutely horrible for taking this long to get to this review... but alas I am finally here.

I like that Hermione is working to try and save him from a horrible future of becoming a death eater. I loved your OC's especially the very crush worthy Garret Crush! The only thing I would say is that they seemed a little too trusting of Hermione right off the bat.. I think it would have added a bit more if they first asked Theo why they would be sitting with her but overall not a very big deal. I liked the chapter, I thought it was well written and very enjoyable. You asked me to also focus on description and in this chapter, I didn't really see much extra description going on. For example, when Sam is introduced, there is no description of what she looks like. But I do like how you explained how the classroom was set up so that was very well done. So altogether, I feel that there could be some more descriptions added here and there to add more to what's going on around them but the chapter isn't completely lacking in that department either. I really enjoyed the story and hope to continue on! Feel free to request another review from me when you see this one.. I'm hoping to make a huge dent in the reviews tonight so don't feel bad if you do decide to request again! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

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Thank you so much for reviewing again! I really appreciate it. I'm glad you like the OCs! I'll see if I can make their transition to friends more believable and add some more descriptions. :] I'm glad you think that I'm doing well! I really appreciate your feedback. Thanks again!

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Okay, first off, I'm going to say that I'm a Romione shipper and I'm not a fan of Dramione :P BUT you're a very good writer, which made reading a Dramione (despite the fact there really was not Dramione action here) enjoyable. Your descriptions really brought me into the story, which was awesome! I'm also wondering, as this is a seventh year AU, how the war is going to come into play here. I love the characterizations in here! Oh, and Hermione's exchange with Theodore was well done and I enjoyed reading it :) Excellent job!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. This is definitely not your typical Dramione. They won't be together for a long, long time. :] But I'm glad you liked the descriptions and the introduction to this story. Thanks again for reviewing. I appreciate it!

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No no no no no! I was practically whining when I scrolled down and saw no more:( I love this story so much! I hope you update soon!! Can't wait to see what happens next:)

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Hi! *waves excitedly*

A new chapter so soon? Wow, you're good. And I was even on my way over here to review it all on my own when you requested, which was just like an added boost to getting me here. It's nice to know you wanted my review :)

But Hermione and Draco...AWKWARD, no? Maybe it's just me...

That whole scene with Theo at the end is easily what stands out in my mind about this chapter as I sit here and write my review. I'm a little frustrated with him.

I know I've said it before, but sometimes I wonder if he really is aware of ALL the consequences being a Death Eater would have for him. I mean, I know he is aware of some of the more awful ones, but does he consider that even his "influence" won't be enough to protect his friends, and definitely won't be enough to protect Hermione? I don't know I just wonder sometimes. Can you tell am anti Theo becomes a Death Eater to protect his friends.

If I was Hermione, I would have reacted the exact same way! He essentially just said he was going to join the people trying to kill her and her oldest friends. If my boyfriend said that, I'd march off too.

I loved that last line too. It was just so true. While she should have sympathy for everything they're going through with losing their friend, it still doesn't make what's happening okay though. Just my opinion.

Well on that note...this was a marvelous chapter and I loved it (even if I didn't love everything that happened in it). And congrats on being a forums Mod!

Cassie

Author's Response: Ah! Cassie! :D I'm so excited that you read this so quickly! Thank you so much for this!

Let's see...Hermione and Draco. Yeah...AWKWARD. They're not getting along right now and neither of them know how to handle it. And Theo is absolutely frustrating me right now! He's definitely being a stubborn brat. ;] He doesn't know what he's potentially getting himself into, and Hermione should speak up and tell him, but she's too annoyed to think straight. :P And I love your assessment of the end. That's exactly right. She knows that they're hurting, but it doesn't make it okay for all of this to happen to her. Again, I'm so happy you liked the chapter! I couldn't wait to see what you thought. :D

--Emily

P.S.-Thank you for your congratulations! :D I'm so excited about being a mod, especially since I love the site so much!

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she should say to Theo, " If you are a death eater, i will have to kill you at some stage" - they cant be together on a battlefeild, someone will have to die and its not Hermione!! she has to be with Draco. Hey its tragic, i love your book heaps :) keep going because your doing great.

May the magic be with you

Author's Response: Hi there!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really excited that you like the story so much! I'll write more ASAP and I hope you'll come around to read it. I really appreciate your feedback! Hermione SHOULD tell Theo that, haha. But he's a bit stubborn, so I don't know if it would help. ;] She and Draco will be together, don't worry! It just takes time. :] Thanks again for reviewing!

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Oh no, it ended far too soon! I have to know what's going to happen with Hermione and Draco!!! :O

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Don't go, Draco, it could be a trap!!! NO!

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OMG! I knew it!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

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Love, love, love it!

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o0o I love that! Awesome that Draco was in the shadows waiting for her and he SAID THAT :D *swoon*

I probably won't comment on every chapter, but I will comment on many of them :D

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Wow, I am new to HP fanfiction (mostly stuck with games and the like) but I really enjoyed this chapter!

I like your writing style, it keeps the reader engaged. Excellent last sentence, btw!

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Hmm. Great suspense. I like how Theo and
hermione get along. Malfoy is also acting
eccentric.

Author's Response: Draco's definitely annoying at this point. ;] He'll get better, I promise! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you like Hermione and Theo's relationship!

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I like how you kept the characteristics of the
characters consistent. In addition, you wrote a
very creative poem. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm really happy that you like the characters and the Sorting Hat song. It took so long to write! :] Again, I appreciate your feedback. Thank you!

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Good job. Very well written

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