74 Reviews Found

Review #26, by HP maniac eIgHt

13th June 2010:
oooh i love this chapter too! :L can't wait for the rest :) x

Author's Response: hey,
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and i hope you enjoy the next chapter too as it's the last
tahnk you so much for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #27, by Sweets-Caandy eIgHt

8th June 2010:
Aw!
That is SO sweet!
I LOVE the chap!
No really I really do! It was just so funny and sweet and well all good things together!
And Lily is jealous *lol*
That is funny and a bit strange because she told him her true feelings...well a bit ...
And I'm anxious about the next chap!
I realy do hope that he kisses her or she him...well they are in a hallway aren't they*gg*

Lots of Love Sweets-Caandy

Author's Response: hey there, so glad you liked it... just one chapter left, are you excited?
let me know what you think and thanks for reading and reviewing
Lots of love
melody


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Review #28, by Sweets-Caandy SeVeN

8th June 2010:
Hey soo sorry that I'm reviewing only now but I was so buisy...
Well anyways, teh chapter was so nice!
And he nearly kissed her!
Awww that would be soo sweet!
I hope they get in such a situation again!
Well to the eighth chap I'll leave a review immediatly!
Greets, S-C

Author's Response: hey darling,
thanks for reviewing, I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter and i can't wait to hear what you think of the last one
lots of love
Melody


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Review #29, by agmalfoy eIgHt

7th June 2010:
that was a great chapter, especially the end. XD

I love it.

Next pls!!!

Author's Response: the next and last one is on its way
thanks so much for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #30, by Prongs and Lils eIgHt

6th June 2010:
lol omg he's so funny! i love your story! hurry and update!

Author's Response: i like that he makes her crazy, the last chapter is on its way. thank you so much for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #31, by Prongs and Lils SeVeN

6th June 2010:
your story is so cute!

Author's Response: thank you! and thank you for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #32, by xXxMissGinnyPotterxXx eIgHt

6th June 2010:
:O you just left it here how could you!! i loved it absolutely loved it and cant wait for the next chapter :) even though i despise to admit it that was a brilliant way to end the chapter :) its James all over :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]

Author's Response: hahaha, sorry for the suspense but the story will be ending in the next chapter and i hope you like it... thank you so much for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #33, by LOLhaily eIgHt

5th June 2010:
I love this.. and the tea thing is just so amazing.. until Lily ended it. Update!

Author's Response: aw, thanks so much... i'm pretty sure i've said it before but the tea thing is inspired by my husband, he will always come and drink my tea, I'll offer to make him one and he will always so no then drink my tea but i do love that he does that and i feel it's something that James would do...
thank you for reading and reviewing and i hope you like the end of the story and feel free to check out my other stories
lots of love
Melody


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Review #34, by HP maniac SeVeN

5th June 2010:
this chapter was just as good as the last :L
can't wait for the rest
xx

Author's Response: the last chapter should be up shortly... thank you so much for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #35, by agmalfoy SeVeN

29th May 2010:
Kind of a filler chapter, but it was good. Looking forward to the next one! :)

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing, the next one should be up within the week
lots of love
Melody


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Review #36, by alexis0599 SeVeN

28th May 2010:
another chapter fast

Author's Response: it's coming soon!!
thanks for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #37, by ginnywinny SeVeN

28th May 2010:
i love this story!

Author's Response: thanks ginnywinny
i love getting reviews, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review
Lots of Love
Melody


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Review #38, by emeraldeyes77 SeVeN

27th May 2010:
omg i love this story... but this chapter was a tease! i wanted them to kiss so badly! hurry and get to the chapter that the summery takes place im dying to read it!

Author's Response: hahah I'm getting to it, I'm getting to it... i think the bit in the summery might surprise you though...
thank you so much for reading and reviewing
Lots of Love
Melody


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Review #39, by Sas FiVe

27th May 2010:
This is such a good story, i can believe it as well! my faverate line is 'merlin he smelt good'
please write more :)

Author's Response: oh thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and i hope you keep enjoying it, thank you for reading and reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #40, by quibblerfan135 SeVeN

27th May 2010:
good chapter mainly-it seems like maybe-possibly?-lily might be ready to admit she likes james-to herself anyway =)
oh but the conversation with the marauders kind of confused me-ive copied and pasted below the bit that i couldn't actually make sense of
I know, Lily said now stepping away from James

All eyes turned to her

Yes they know that (James said pointing at his friends) and we (James indicated at both of them) are trying to kept them out of detention by not telling them, James said as though he were explaining the situation to a three year old

it could just be me but i really didn't understand what he was talking about =)

Author's Response: the "I know" from Lily was a statement
she was saying that she knew what the problem was and seeing as she considers herself a friend of James he needn't tell the others.
thank you so much for reading and reviewing, sorry for any confusion
lots of love
Melody


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Review #41, by KingLeo fOuR

27th May 2010:
This story is really, really interesting and I love how you do that 'rewind and fast forward' thing then keep reminding the reader that you're fast forwarding, it makes the reader like 'OMG I just want to know what's going to happen, MUST KEEP READING,' but I really, really, really think you get a beta reader, THE BAD PUNCTUATION MAKES IT REALLY HARD TO READ.

Author's Response: I don't know what a beta reader is and I don't really care... you see, I'm a young Mum with two children and a husband that I need to care for and feed and a house that I need to tend too and bills that need to be paid and other such things that leave me with little to no time at all and I type these chapters in an hour or less and post them straight away so might I suggest if "THE BAD PUNCTUATION MAKES IT REALLY HARD TO READ" don't read my story

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Review #42, by Sweets-Caandy SiX

23rd May 2010:
Oh god, i thought, Jamses inruries would be much much worse...
Thank god it's just bruises and so on nothing really bad...
but I hope the two who did it to him get punished.
and i hope the M.P.P works!
But Autumn and Sirius?!
Are they serious ? (well no, just one of them is Sirius , not both, but anyways...)
And I'm anxious about the nexct chap and what will happen with Sirius and Autumn...I mean they cant hate each other when they were snogging...
And the Scene with the Toast and the tea was really funny i think, the picture when James smiles and takes her cup and the toast.brilliant!

Lots of love, Sweets-Caandy

Author's Response: LOL thanks darling, always glad when i get a review from you... i hope you enjoy the next chapter
lots of love
Melody


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Review #43, by LOLhaily SiX

22nd May 2010:
OMG! I cannot breath! That was so funny! I really hope you update soon! This is one of my favorite stories so far!
-LOLhaily!

Author's Response: thank you so much LOLhaily, this has to be one of if not my favourite chapter and i'm so glad you enjoyed it too.
the next chapter should be on its way, thank you so much for reviewing
lots of love
Melody


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Review #44, by samantha SiX

21st May 2010:
well hurry up and finish it i dont like waiting much

Author's Response: all good things come to those who wait...

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Review #45, by xXxMissGinnyPotterxXx SiX

20th May 2010:
oh i loved this chapter it was so funny :) i like how you have James keep nicking Lily's cup of tea and i also like how you've got all this set out. I've read many James and Lily stories but your fast forwards and certain quirks has made it unique :)
top marks :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]

Author's Response: James taking lily's tea was actually inspired by my husband; he will always drink from my cup, even if i've offered to make him one!
thank you so much for taking the time to review and i hope you enjoy the next chapter
lots of love
Melody


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Review #46, by agmalfoy SiX

20th May 2010:
I like this a lot... I cannot wait to read more.

Author's Response: hopefully you won't have to wait long, just finished posting the next chapter!
thank you so much for review, it means alot.
Lots of Love
Melody


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Review #47, by HP maniac SiX

20th May 2010:
AWW! I love this story! keep writing! xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
thanks for reviewing as well
hope you enjoy the next chapter
lots of love
melody


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Review #48, by ginnywinny FiVe

12th May 2010:
and the plot thickens...:P
the story is going really good :)
cant wait for the next chapter
x

Author's Response: should be up shortly... I've finished the story so the chapters should be coming one after the other with a short gap inbetween for validation
thanks so much for reviewing
Lots of Love
Melody


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Review #49, by ginnywinny fOuR

12th May 2010:
i love all the tension and sneakiness :P
love the story! x

Author's Response: yay! hope you keep enjoying... and keep reviewing *cough cough*
thanks again
Lots of Love
Melody


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Review #50, by ginnywinny tHrEe

12th May 2010:
omgoodness!! that broomstick joke had me laughing sooo hard!
this story is awesome :)

Author's Response: Oh i'm so glad you're enjoying it... the next chapter should be up soon
Thank you for reviewing
Lots of love
Melody


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