41 Reviews Found

Review #26, by SaliMilae Hope At Last

21st May 2003:
Ok, I\'m the author and this is for anyone who was confused about the Crabbe part in the seventh chapter. Crabbe didn\'t want to break her arm, it was all Malfoy. Crabbe is an idiot so he of course obeys Malfoy. Malfoy is mad at \"Potter\", who just turned him down, and he wants to make Harry\'s life a living hell. So he figures the best way to do it is to break Harry\'s \"girlfriend\'s\" arm, since it\'ll be just a little more permanent than a hex (also because he\'s not quite ready to kill people yet). He also wants the candy, but I\'m sure you figured that out already. ~ Sali

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Review #27, by dracoissexy Hope At Last

20th May 2003:
WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME SO! I REVIEW EVERY TIME I READ THIS STORY! WAAAAHHH!!! I\'M SOOO NEGLECTED!

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Review #28, by Bluestones Hope At Last

20th May 2003:
Ok I\'m on chapter 2! It\'s really good! REALLY REALLY GOOD! But one word of advice! The dialogue is in a blob and it\'s hard to read! You need to space it out. Other than that awesome story! now on to chapter 3........... ~Katy

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Review #29, by BlueStones Hope At Last

20th May 2003:
Ok! I finished it! I like it alot! I didn\'t really understand though why Crabbe wanted to break her arm! Little lost in that area! Like I said before it needs to be unblobbed! Don\'t you hate it when people don\'t review? You see that you have like atleast over 100 hits and yet you get no reviews? Jen and I know EXACTLY how you feel! Thank you so much for reading \"Unexpected Darkness\" I hope you enjoyed it! As for her name I suggest Valerie it\'s a french name and it means strong. I also suggest Bernadette it\'s another french name and it means Brave. (Although if you use that I suggest you get her a nick name) I loved Alaula! Jen and I are looking for exotic names, and it fits the discription perfectly! But we\'ll see what happens! Update soon! I\'m adding this to our favorites! ~Katy! Ps. I\'ll tell Jen to read it too!

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Review #30, by Magnolia Hope At Last

20th May 2003:
Great story! Wonderful! The dialogue is kinda hard to read though! Can\'t wait till you update! Could you click my name and check out something of mine? Perferably Picture? Thanks! ~Magnolia

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Review #31, by dracoissexy Hope At Last

9th May 2003:
Hey. Thanks for reviewing my stories. keep reviewing and reading and updating you stories. Thanks for adding another year as your recomended reading- Lot of luck with everythin you do! -Sal

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Review #32, by dracoissexy Hope At Last

28th April 2003:
great chapter(wizards and Wands or wands and wizards..) thanks for dedicating it to me!! i feel sooo special:) why don\'t you call her Beyanca, or Valentine? funky names but their cool! ttyl, Sal

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Review #33, by Crystal Hope At Last

28th April 2003:
er names hmmm well here are some names I like.. Jade,Ena,Tara,Alain,Rena,hmm theres more I could think of that would be good for her but my brain dosn\'t want to work at the moment....

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Review #34, by Crystal Hope At Last

28th April 2003:
www.babynamesearch.com this site might help a bit!

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Review #35, by dracoissexy Hope At Last

27th April 2003:
Thanks for reviewing my story. I\'m usually a person who will follow good advise. Thanks sooo much for a good chunk of advise..wow that\'s alot of advises.Lol. I\'m not finnished reading this story yet,but so far it is fantastic. Best of luck with everything you do, lylas-- Sal

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Review #36, by dracoissexy Hope At Last

27th April 2003:
ok i\'m done reading....that was fast... Great story and i hope you update soon. maybe i\'ll ttyl... lots a luv-Sal

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Review #37, by dracoissexy Hope At Last

22nd April 2003:
hey! VERY GOOD JOB!!!!!! keep writing it please. OH, If you get the chance, could you read and review Another Year? I\'d really appreciate it! thanx and good luck with everything you do!!!!

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Review #38, by Crystal Hope At Last

21st April 2003:
*swet drop* twenty reveiws! Ah crud I\'m going to go crazy if you stop writing!......take me now.

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Review #39, by STBT Hope At Last

21st April 2003:
Jesus! 20 reviews... we\'re all going to die. Make it 10, or something, PLEASE!

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Review #40, by Crystal Hope At Last

23rd February 2003:
really good so far.... it would have been cool if Harry was in the same orphanage with her u know....... anywho do write more.

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Review #41, by El Zarco Hope At Last

6th November 2002:
Hmmm...very...ahh...different. You should write more often, though. I think you have sheer talent. :D

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