wow that was a really pwrful story em. I LOVED IT!!! (and i love that song!) it was a great way to make the story flow without giving away too many details by adding the flaskbacks and the present tense. i really enjoyed the dialogues between the characters and the way u were able 2 be inside of their thoughts. VERY AWESOME JOB!!! keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: YAY!!! #15!! thanx melissa:D one of the bestest reviews, it made me happy!!!
deep input!! (lol)
~em~ Report Review
*sobs* that was so sad... good... but sadAuthor's Response: thanks!!! Report Review
I think it's a great story but it's really sad. Well, keep righting!Author's Response: THANKS!!! I'm glad you like it!
I'm writing the sequel now so, it should be up soon! (hope fully :D) Report Review
Great story! Listen, I'm trying to make banners for people and...can I make you one? I'll read up and start getting ideas!
lightmasterofchaosAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it!
i have a banner i just can't post it yet, but you can make one if you want to! Report Review
*is sobbing* It's a REALLY good story, I can make banners, not awsome ones though, leave me a review (doesn't actually have to review) if you want one.Author's Response: THANX!! ill leave ya a review.. any banner is better than none XD Report Review
Aww... *tear*Author's Response: sad, i know!
thanks for the review :]
~emily~ Report Review
really goodAuthor's Response: THANX!! Report Review
That's so so so sad, were you like depressed when you wrote itAuthor's Response: not really, i just was listening to this song, and had an idea for a fic, so i wrote it. and this song is depressing on its own, but i know the story was too. thanks for the review:) Report Review
As i just finished reading the 1st paragraph right after the song lyrics: oh! i'm so glad the story wasn't about her mourning and it's about her past when he was alive- the happy type of story i love, and what i love more is a good R/H story!! ok, i'll keep reading!
as i'm reading the body: ok, i just thought that the whole i love you thing was a bit sudden. i wish we could have seen what exactly brought all that on. if we go off just the books, we seem to have just enough to surmise that they each have a crush on each other... anyway, that's what i thought.
that was a unique way to have the final battle. aww, poor ronnikins had to die... i love him
Author's Response: i know the love thing was sudden, but i just needed something to move the story along. thanx for the review Report Review
*sob* That was sad...I actually got misty-eyed a couple times...how awful! Not the story...what happened...
~KatAuthor's Response: i know how you feel :]
thanks for the review!
~emily~ Report Review
wow...that was touching. are u goona write another chapter?Author's Response: i was thinking about it, but im not sure. Report Review
Ok. I'm trying not to cry. That was... wow! 10/10!Author's Response: thanx a lot... i cried writing it, so i know its sad :'( Report Review
so sad!=( but good i liked your a good writer! kepp on writingAuthor's Response: thanx a lot!! already working on new ideas... Report Review
Awww.... I loved that so much. Yeah I didn't agree with some of it. Like. They definitely wouldn't admit things out of the blue like that. Hermione and Ron take the longest for everything. And Hermione, no matter how much she lovvvesss him, wouldn't dwell on it. But I got chills reading that. That song makes me cry anyway, but that story just made me sosad, And wow. I had to go correct this whole review because I was typing it while staring intently at the tv screen. But anyway. I think you're a great writer and I loved the story. Keep it up :].Author's Response: thanks sooo much :) about the fellings thing... i couldnt figure out how to get them to admit it, so i just tried to do something quick. that part of the story bothers me a lot. I'm glad you like it!! Report Review
guess who?!?!?! i'm sorry if your mad that i'm the first person to review but i couldn't help it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yea, thanks for the shout out :) I RATE YOU A 10!!!!!!!Author's Response: its ok losomay. THANX!! Report Review
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