This is bringing the love sick puppy out of me.Author's Response: Hehe, dunno if that means good or bad. Report Review
ah *jumps up and down excitedly*
Author's Response: Hah, glad you like it. Report Review
man this is great.
You know your retelling my life basically except I don't know if the guys like me. But he is exactly like Draco! ARGH!
I love this chapter, so beautiful.Author's Response: Aw, really? :D
Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Ah, Helen, it was great-so heart-wrenching and wonderfully romantic all together. You did a great job with a typical D/Hr and turning it out to not be cliqiush. You should be terribly proud of this-I imagine this is some of your earlier work, but you had it all-conflict, plotline, characters, drama, action, romance, and beautiful, flawless descripations. I applaude you for another great story and I continue on my quest to read every last word you've written.
Lindsey xoxAuthor's Response: Oh, this was my first ever romance, and I wanted to combine quite a few genres into it, so I'm really pleased of course that you enjoyed it.
Aw, that is so wonderful, I adore you - the whole "I continue on my quest to read every last word you've written."
Haha, hopefully my original work will be on the bookshelves one day and I'll challenge you into reading all of that. Trust me, they go on forever . . . :p Report Review
Brilliant absolutely brilliant. yes, some bit were a tad bit confusing but after a few read throughs understandable. i am a little mad that draco and hermione didn't stay together and i really want to know what his letter said, but that will hopefully become clear later on. anyways, great job and i hope to read more or your stories.Author's Response: Thank you very much for your time spent reading my story, and for your review on your thoughts and opinions. Thanks once again, much appreciated. Report Review
This was awesome but i hate a ron/hermione fic. anyway i already knew that she was pregnant once she told him of the suprise that was after the final battle and wat bout all that horcux stuff from the sixth book. doesn't harry have to destroy all of them first.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
oh god.that is so sad..I actually cried! How could she do that, and I think what is worse is the fact that even though Ron knows he will never have Hermione's heart he is still willing to stay with her and raise a child that isn't his. And he will forever have to look at their child and know that her heart never really belonged to him.oh I love a good tragedy!
thanks for a great storyAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
that was freakin intense! WHOA!Author's Response: :D Thanks for revieiwng. Report Review
Hermione actually forgave him? What!!! "so hunny, um I'm sorta kinda betrothed, oh and I am death eater, oh and I slept with my betrothed, oh and I sold your best friend to the dark lord, still love me?"
"yes of course!" what!Author's Response: Whatever, my story, my plot. There's a button that is marked as a cross at the top of your screen, and I suggest you use it. If you don't like my story, either review politely with comments I can use to help improve, or simply click that button and don't bother. Report Review
i love how descriptive your writing is...i feel like i can see, hear and feel everything that is going on. and it is so dark...i love it!Author's Response: Thank you!! I do love using emotive descriptions, and I'm glad that's poured through. Thanks, sweetie. Report Review
i liked it! thumbs up! D/H gets boring after a while but you did it very well!Author's Response: Aw, thank you!! Hmm, I do know what you mean. Draco/Hermione was an amazing pairing at the start, but I have done so much now, I am beginning to lack enthusiasm for it. *_*
Thanks anyway!! xx Report Review
i honestly have to say im a little disappointed, not in the writing, but in how it ended.i wanted them to get together!! lol, but it was an awesome story. good job! :) 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. I didn't put them together because I wanted to make it more of a reality. Thanks for reviewing. xx Report Review
“I used to obsess over living, now I only obsess over you.”
and another fob line, lol. im excited! i've been sitting here for like an hour reading this, and i cant sit still, im starting to skim it a little cuz i want to know what happens! lolAuthor's Response: Well done again!! *giggles* You're good at this game, aren't you?
Ha ha, well, I'm glad you are enjoying this. Thanks for reviewing. xx Report Review
"This has been said so many times that I’m not sure if it matters."
yep, i caught that fall out boy line in there, lol. i love it. 10/10Author's Response: He he, well done. Fall Out Boy rock!! Thanks for reviewing!! :-) Report Review
Amazing. Beautifully written, as with all of your stories. This is a wonderful example of a bittersweet ending. Although I do wish Draco and Hermione ended up together. Great job, this is an absolutely stunning story. 10/10
LostintheNight ^.^Author's Response: Wow, thanks. This was my first romace and so feedback was really useful. I had fun writing it anyway, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, some people want me to write a sequel but I can't be bothered!! I started it and it was just really boring.
Thanks for you lovely comments and takling the time to read and review. Report Review
SOOO SAD! I cant believe they parted ways!Author's Response: There's a sequel coming soon. :-) Report Review
oh no they didnt end up together thats sucks they should have ended up together they were destined to be together "snif" "sob"Author's Response: There might be a sequel. I have started one, it just depends how well it goes. Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot. xx Report Review
yay Voldemort is dead "dancing around, singing and screaming" yayayayayayayayso very coolAuthor's Response: Ha ha to old Voldy, but he was very beautiful as his younger self. Hmmmm, Tom Riddle. *drools* Report Review
something is niggling at the back of my mind telling me that all is not right damn itAuthor's Response: Nope, it's going terribly wrong. You like the word damn it,. don't you? :-) Report Review
damn it this is not good Emstilla is pregnant and if my guess is right so is Hermione damn it Author's Response: Good guess, and as you've already finished I can feel free to say that yes, you're right. Report Review
nah its cool i like that part in the film neways where she punches him in the face its funnyAuthor's Response: Yeah, although I'm sure Tom Felton didn't think so!! :-) Report Review
aw poor Hermione damn you Draco Malfoy you suckAuthor's Response: Yes, poor Hermione, but, well, Draco . . . *whipers* He's lovely, just a bit of a coward. He's burying himself deeper into trouble, certainly. Report Review
damn you Draco why are you such a coward you suck damn you Author's Response: Lol, he's not that bad . . . :-) Report Review
oh my gosh he didnt do what i think he just did, did he? bad DracoAuthor's Response: He did. He's very naughty, giving into lust. This chapter and the sixth one are the major turning points of the story. It all goes downhill from here. Report Review
aw im figuring they had sex if so thats funny right in the middle of a classroom lol Author's Response: Yes, in the use of subtle language. *grins* On a table . . . Report Review
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