This story keeps getting better and better. I feel like I know Elizabeth now. I love your writing and how you portray Harry's emotions. Saw one mistake: "Like, you're favorite color." It should be "Like, your favorite color." As I can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm going to leave it with this - don't worry, the next review will be longer. :P

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Hi, this is maraudersmap from the forum. :)

Wow. That's all I've got to say. This was an amazing first chapter! Your writing is spectacular. I loved the descriptions and dialogue between Harry and Elizabeth.

This chapter left me wanting more, curious of what will happen next, but while reading, I was never tempted to just skim through it all. Every word seemed important. It was the perfect mix of romance, mystery and action. I need to know what happens next! Was Harry a death eater? What happened to Ginny? I have so many questions...

The only criticism I have is that when Elizabeth rescued Harry, she seemed a little unaffected. You described what she was doing rather than how she was feeling. I would've thought she'd be a little bit more upset in a dramatic situation like that.

Even though I'm a Harry/Ginny shipper, I really like Elizabeth. But Ginny's not gone forever, is she? I mean, she will be a part of the story? I guess I'll just have to read and find out. I would've liked to know more about Elizabeth, though. I'm not too worried, however, as it's only the first chapter. :)

Now I'm off to read the next! :D

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I hope that in ur plan for the rest of this story Harry and Elizabeth are only Friends!
This is really good nd i hope you update soon.
xo

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Oh NO!!
NOt an evil cliffy!
This is a great story and this is my favourite chapter by far.
I wanna know whats gonna happen when ginny finds out about harry/elizabeth and the whole harry-is-a-death-eater thing.

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Grr.so close!!! When will Ginny find out about Harry!?!? I'm glad he finally let himself love Ginny even though his pathetic resistance towards it was fun to read XD!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I NEED to figure out this whole Harry-is-a-Death-Eater thing!!!

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I really liked Harry with Ginny. Just thought you should know.

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i love this story so far its great. i have never seen the bourne movies but it doesnt put me off in the slightest. i can't wait to find out what happens and if harry goes after elizabeth or not. and i want to see ginny find out about the dark mark. ooh its going to be good

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OMG!! I love it!! This is my favorite chapter by far!

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That was one of the most beautiful chapters I've ever read on this site. It was written very well. I'm happy Harry decided to allow himself to love Ginny. Keep up the good work!!

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You write well and I like the concept, keep going. Can't wait to read more.

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This is so beautiful. I love it. Harry belongs with Ginny.

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I love it. It's beautiful. Truly it is.

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it's so weird to picture Harry with a dark mark on his arm..haha, anyways, great chapter, again. can't wait for the next one! :)

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Nicely done!! I do hope Harry remembers. I do hope Ginny and Harry stay together.

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awesome cant wait 4 the nxt chapter

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what an awsome story... I absolutly LOVE it!!!

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Wow! I have to admit I was a little worried at first. But it's a good story. Have to tell you though, I read the summary for the second chapter and was drawn in. I can't wait to read more!!!

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I like it, update soon (please)

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Great story!

I'm a huge fan of the Bourne movies too, watched them all several times :P.

Keep updating!

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Oh darn no more Elizabeth!!! Darn I liked her!! Or will she show up again.

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I love it. I also love the Bourne movies, wicked!!! Can't wait to read more.

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Wow! This story is very good. You have the characters set up nicely and I can visualize all of this. Poor Harry! He is so confused right now. Please update soon!

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okay, so i was totally watching the bourne ultimatum last night and this story wandered through my mind and i was like, hey i should check that one story, maybe there will finally be an update. and there is! ^_^ isn't that cool? uhm, good chapter. not much to say. i liked it and i want to know what happens next. so update soon (:

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ooh.good chappie!! i'm getting extremely exicted to see what's in the next chappie!

Keep up the good work

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You better update soon or I will hunt you down. You've gotten me hooked.

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