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Review #26, by BellaCamille Take a Chance and Make it Big

13th January 2012:
Awww he was so cute and sweet (ish) when he was younger. Then the hormones hit...

Joking, kind of. At least he take after someone we looove so much! It's so funny to see!

Author's Response: They always start out sweet . . . Something usually goes wrong in those teen years.

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Review #27, by BellaCamille I Wanna Live a Life Like That, I Wanna be Just Like a King

12th January 2012:
So even though Aldan is such a jerk sometimes, he's also kind of charming (in an obnoxiously-charming way of course), and sweet (kinda), and also HILARE.

"I was born to be a Quidditch playing Sex God and I loved my life."


Author's Response: In my humble (some would say flawed) opinion, obnoxious/jerky guys are often the most attractive.

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Review #28, by FlexibleSnitch07 I Wanna Live a Life Like That, I Wanna be Just Like a King

23rd December 2011:
i love this story its amazing plz keep updating :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to have the next chapter up in a week or two!

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Review #29, by unicornsandwrackspurts Maybe It's Not My Weekend, But it's Gonna be My Year

13th December 2011:
I'm so so sooo glad you're continuing this! Polychromatic was one of my favorite fics I've read on this site; top three, definitely! I LOVE how happy-go-lucky the story was, and I still have high hopes that this one will turn out just as good. If you ever need any help with editing or anything, just feel free to ask :) I'm really good with that kind of thing. But thank you for sharing your stories!

Author's Response: Yup! I'm hoping to make it all the way through, even if it takes me a while. :) I don't think I'll ever feel as confident about it as I do about Polychromatic, but I'm hoping all y'all will enjoy it anyway. :)

I actually have an editor at the moment, but thank you so much for the offer!

I hope you keep reading and enjoying!

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Review #30, by Lfg Maybe It's Not My Weekend, But it's Gonna be My Year

1st December 2011:
loved both these stories so far! cant wait till the next update (:

Author's Response: Thank you! Should be up any day now. :)

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Review #31, by BellaCamille Back In Black

8th November 2011:
Even though this isn't one of your best chapters (no offense, really you know i mean the best) its a great canvas for Al. It kind of lays out his whole character, and it just gets better and better. I can't believe how much you've grown as a writer though! It's amazing, siriusly. (teehee)

Author's Response: Oh, please, I don't take offense to that sort of think! I know I have couple of crap chapters, but I'm okay with that because I know I have a couple of great ones, too.

Oh, Al. How much fun I'm going to have writing you.

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Review #32, by BellaCamille I'll Give a Little Bit of My Life For You (Ye - Wait! What?!)

8th November 2011:
“Lupin! What did Mummy and Daddy tell you about throwing food during dinner?” Sirius reprimanded, throwing Aldan a towel to wipe his face clean. He was fairly good-natured about it.

Finally, she sighed. “That I have to ask you first.”

Such good description of their family in those two lines. (:

Author's Response: Isn't it? :D

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Review #33, by BellaCamille There's A Ghost in This Room, I Think I'll Name It After All Of You

8th November 2011:
Anna! Sirius! Hogwarts! Dumbly-dore! ( that's how I say it in my head...) this ones got it all. It really is a great first chapter...

Also, I looked back over tonight after I messages you and realized I hadn't left a review for the story. I was shocked and upset. Therefor I promptly proceeded to leave a rambling review like the usual ones. Didn't cha miss me? (;

One more thing. I saw that in response to my ver first review on this story (which fueled this whole thing), you responded. I laughed out loud and the squealed like a little girl.

BEST QUOTE: " look where I am now. (; " aw!

Author's Response: It was such a heartwarming review and all I could think to do was sit there and smile, thinking about how far I've come from "never writing again" as I told myself.

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Review #34, by BellaCamille Maybe It's Not My Weekend, But it's Gonna be My Year

8th November 2011:
Love. Love. Love. But I'm guessing you knew that. (; she's so similar to Anna sometimes. But SO, SO different. Ahhh, families...

Author's Response: The sanest one in her family . . . Not that that's saying much! lol

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Review #35, by >OpenAtTheClose< I'm Good to go, and I'm Going Nowhere Fast

7th November 2011:
I'm upset to hear that you're ending the series, but I can understand why. I'm elated that you gave a shout out to Starkid, as they are the bomb, and don't worry, you're writing is always up to par. I hope you might come back to this series and continue it someday
Your Loyal Fan

Author's Response: I really hope you read on - I've already begun to write again! After a year's hiatus I'm back and, well, not better than ever, but back and good!!

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Review #36, by Phoenix_Rayne Back In Black

1st November 2011:
Just realized that Darren's son is THE Oliver Wood. XD Wow. Sometimes I'm dumber than Anna and Sirius combined. And maybe a little of James. And that's saying something.

Author's Response: Haha! Don't worry, you're not the first. :) Oh, don't compare yourselves to them . . . it's not that bad! Haha!

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Review #37, by gocnocturna Maybe It's Not My Weekend, But it's Gonna be My Year

30th October 2011:
I like where this is going so far, I loved the prequel, so I'm sure this will be just as fabulous. It's interesting to see Harry's Hogwarts years though the eyes of someone else in his year. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you do enjoy it! Yeah, it doesn't focus much on the things that Harry does, which I sort of like, because Harry is obviously not the typical Hogwarts student and you don't get to see much of the "dirty underbelly" (and by that I mean some of the more scandalous students and happenings) through Harry.

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Review #38, by Bellatrix_Lestrange369 Maybe It's Not My Weekend, But it's Gonna be My Year

28th October 2011:
Would it be a bit overdramatic to say that I love you?
Oh well, everyone needs a bit of drama
That felt good.
Was the dramaticness excepted?
Just as it should be.
And yes dramaticness is a word.

Author's Response: Woman. lol

I didn't expect the dramaticness but it is totally appreciated! :)

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Review #39, by Lillylover22 We Thought Those Days Would Never End

26th October 2011:
i really like lupins pov. it was more entertaining that aldans. and this chapter had better pace than the others. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: I think everyone will find that these chapters that I've been writing more recently will be a better read, and more similar to my old writing style. When I stoppped writing Versicolor for a while it was because I lost my inspiration, but the chapters are practically writing themselves again. :)

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Review #40, by Lillylover22 I'm Good to go, and I'm Going Nowhere Fast

26th October 2011:
the chapters just go so fast. thats my only problem. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: I've been writing longer ones recently. REALLY long ones. Hopefully you'll enjoy those more :)

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Review #41, by Lillylover22 Take a Chance and Make it Big

26th October 2011:
i dont really like lavender. she just annoys me. oh i love aldan though. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: She'll show up later too. I'm doing my own thing with her character, though. I found her entirely too . . . spastic in the books, and especially the movies.

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Review #42, by Lillylover22 Back In Black

26th October 2011:
oh wow alden sounds amazing. he is hilarious. i love it. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: Oh, just you wait . . . It get's better :)

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Review #43, by Lillylover22 I'll Give a Little Bit of My Life For You (Ye - Wait! What?!)

26th October 2011:
my favourite part of that chapter was the facts in the authors note. they were funny. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: It really shows you what a perfect, crazy family they make :D

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Review #44, by Lillylover22 There's A Ghost in This Room, I Think I'll Name It After All Of You

26th October 2011:
im so excited for this sequel. i love it. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: I'm so glad! :)

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Review #45, by k There's A Ghost in This Room, I Think I'll Name It After All Of You

23rd October 2011:
i havent started reading this yet but i wanted to know if i can read it without the prequel??

Author's Response: Yes, you definitely can. :)

The prequel is basically about Anna and Sirius (who are the parents of Al, Will and Lupin.) It's AU from the series but not startlingly so.

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Review #46, by BellaCamille It's My Feeling We'll Win in the End

10th October 2011:
Ooh, I love Remus! You're fabulous dear.

Author's Response: Thank you! My favorite part of the Remus chapter is the chapter image, haha!

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Review #47, by Alice Hunter We Thought Those Days Would Never End

22nd August 2011:
I have been following Polychromatic for a good few years now and i love your work, you are an inspiration to other writers like myself and i hope you can find it in yourself to finish what you started. I love your work and i hope you continue to write in the future.
Hope to read from you soon,

Author's Response: Oh! Thank you so much! I'm hoping that with my refound interest in writing and my wonderful beta whose helping me so much that I'll be able to finish this story and go out with a bang :)

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Review #48, by ms simone We Thought Those Days Would Never End

12th August 2011:
nice one.. update soon.

Author's Response: Putting the finishing touches on the next chapter now. :)

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Review #49, by BellaCamille We Thought Those Days Would Never End

12th August 2011:
Awww, you're so fantastic and this looks great.

I luv ya!

Author's Response: :D I know I've said it 1000 times already but thank you so much.

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Review #50, by Schiffty We Thought Those Days Would Never End

11th August 2011:
Wow. This inded a huge suprise. I think its awesome that you are starting back up this story! I really missed it. I love the whole lot of them. Anna is finally get married! I got a good kick out of that. I really like Lupin, which is a beastly name, and Al. Will is MIA but it seems he's always like that. Arghhh its been so, sooo, so long since I read Polychromatic!! I've almost forgotten all the charatchers and the plot, and you took it off! Or did it just glich or something? Because I reaaaly missed that story. It was a HPFF classic, your author's page promises to repost it, well thats how I took it.please do! 19194948795642.6/2.0

Author's Response: Will's coming up I promise :) he's got a chapter dedicated to him soon and its shaping up pretty well if I do say so myself. Polychromatic was hidden I had a few t.o.s. violations. I've been working on getting it back up for months now hopefully it'll any day now.

Thanks so much for hanging in and still reading after all this time!

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