ok googled eduardo, and let me just say thank you very much for planting that image in my brain, whoa is that man beautiful!Author's Response: Haha, isn't he just wonderful? Report Review
This is one of the most hilarious stories i've read at hpff. You are such a funny author. good job!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Good job, but Sirius can't be 6'7 it's impossible. Okay, well Jist very very unlikely. The record is something like 6'7. Love it though, congrats on the Dobby, this is my 3rd time reading this.
8/10 for some grammar issues + the height thing.Author's Response: I agree, it is fairly improbable. I suppose I just have a lot of really tall friends. One's 6'4", one's 6'5", one's 6'3", and all the others are over six foot. So when I thought tall, I thought TALL.
Thanks! Wow! I can't believe you've read it six times . . . That makes me smile! Report Review
I laughed more during this chapter than I have in any other. Especially at this line in particular: "This put the Marauders in heaven, making it the first time, ever, that someone not attendng Hogwarts recieved a detention there."Author's Response: Yay! I aim to make my readers laugh, so it's good to know I'm doing it right! :) Report Review
Your story is brilliant! I'll admit that it is not my favourite Marauder fanfic, but that's just because I like the ones that are based in the future, but are talking about the past (if that makes sense). Either way, your story is definitely up there with the best of them. Keep doing what you are doing and trust me, you will go far ;) xAuthor's Response: Aww thanks! Yeah, I think I know what you're talking about - I like those to. Kinda formatted like How I Met Your Mother? (I love that show!) Report Review
i love that every song you have at the beginnings of your chapters are songs that i love. this is the first marauders era story that i've read, and so far, it's pretty good.Author's Response: Well, Marauders era is my favorite genre. I'm so happy mine was the first! I hope it opens you up to some great others! Report Review
so, i definitely thought one reference was that last bit, cause it reminded me of the sisterhood of the travelling pants, but apparently im completely wrong lol.
but anyway, this chapter is amazing, i love your writing :)
Author's Response: Nope, haha. There was a Pocahontas reference, a Super Troopers reference, and a third one can't I can remember for the life of me. :)
Thanks! It's one of my favorite chapters, I think. Report Review
I love this whole remus is a man-whore aspect. In most of the other fanfic stories remus is shy and conserved because he's afraid of his lycanthropy. I have to say that his sleeping around is pretty effing hilarious. KudosAuthor's Response: Haha thanks! I've also seen Remus as the nicest, most moral Marauder . . . Doesn't mean he doesn't have his own needs. Sleeping around is his way of getting close to people without actually getting close to them. :D Report Review
Sorry but is this the same nymphadora from the books? Aka nymphadora tonks who's mother is a Black and is technically Sirius' 2nd cousin?Author's Response: Well, this sort of unravels itself in the sequel, so I can't say much now. But for now, just keep the AU warning in mind.
But, for all intensive purposes, yes, her name is Nymphadora Amherst. Report Review
ONE OF THE BEST SONGS EVER!!! I love it!
Hahaha ". . .and Peter had his finger up his nose".
that was hilariousAuthor's Response: It's so bad ass, is it not? :)
Peter's a riot. They all are. Hehe Report Review
Aw I love all of them!!
Ooooh intrigue :)Author's Response: They're a great bunch, aren't they? :) Report Review
I like that Peter is actually being portrayed as a nice and funny guy. Usually Peter is a creep or isn't even in stories and I think it kind of ruins the story. So I'm happy this one isn't like that!!
Love how immature they are! I wish I had friends I could be completely retarded with!! Ha. I love my friends don't get me wrong, but they're too responsible and mature.. kinda blows sometimes he he :)Author's Response: Yeah, I mean, I could tell from the small bit of what we read in Book 5 that Peter wasn't quite on the level as the other Marauders, but he was their friends, and I don't believe he showed traitorous, murderous tendencies at age 11.
Ah, yes. It's important to have lots of friends - both ridiculous and non-ridiculous, for all times of life. No reason to leave your friends, but there's never anything wrong with making some new ones, too! :D Report Review
Okay, so I've read this story 7 times through because I love it OH SO MUCH!! It's bloody brilliant. Anna is my FAVORITE. Mostly because her personality is almost EXACTLY the same as mine which I find slightly creepy but also awesome as well.Author's Response: Wow! 7! (I don't know if you know, but 7 is a trend number throughout the story. It's my favorite number. :D)
Well, if you're like Anna you must have a lot of fun! :) Report Review
Hi! So far I like your story!
I'm kinda sad her and Lily have already started off as enemies though!
It's interesting she's younger than the Marauders. I haven't read a Marauder fic with the main character a year younger. I like it!Author's Response: They may start off that way, but everything changes as they grow. :)
Anna being a year younger than him gives her her own story, I think. It gives her another life to live besides the one with the other main characters. Adds an interesting dynamic, I think.
The first time i read this chapter it didnt click that it was in a different p.o.v until james had said lilys name. Up
until anna came in the chapter i was a little confused. This time though i paid attention to the chapter imagesAuthor's Response: It's understandable. Up until then, it had been all Anna. But once you're aware that the POVs rotate, it's easier to tell. Also, as time goes on, you can sort of recognize the different characters style. Report Review
I love the music quotes in your story. This is amazing!Author's Response: Thanks. I love your penname! :D Report Review
I'm making it 100 reviews! (on this chapter)
This was really an amazing story. Truly one of the most original, inspiring ones I've read. Anna was so much her own character, completely separate from all the other Marauder era OCs out threre. And even the canon characters, were so original and fun and had all there own believable, cute little quirks.
If there is one word to describe this story, I'd say epic. And not epic like "oh my gosh, dude, EPIC.!" but more like, in it's length and how it was such a novel. Not just a little story that sons over a year and a few things happen and it's all good in the end. No, like an honest-to-god novel. The characters grow up with each other and the reader can grow up with them too. (I know, SUPER cheesy. I couldn't help myself.)
I mean, Anna alone was such a real- life girl, you made her come alive and she definitely created her own little world and sucked the reader right in.
I'm just love this story so much.Author's Response: Oh my gosh. I never would have believed I'd have 100 reviews on any chapter of any story. Until Poly, I don't even think I'd gotten 100 reviews on an entire story!
Oh my god, your words never cease to just make me swell up with pride. I'm honestly, so proud of my story, and to hear great things about it just makes happiness bubble up inside of me!
All I know is that I definitely grew with my characters, and I'm glad others can too.
You tie it up so well. And even though it's not cannon, it works so splendidly. (even though it's not a particularly splendid situation.) one more chapter!Author's Response: I tried to make it so that even though I was going an AU route (which is tricky, because it can alienate a lot of readers,) it was believable. If I've gotten even close to accomplishing that, then I've done right by the story. :) Report Review
This was so good from Sirius's POV. It made it sadder though. And just so awful the way itmall kind of starts to unravel. With James first, and then Peter, and then Sirius. Wah, its so sad.Author's Response: Sometimes I feel like things from Sirius' POV hold a lot more, emotionally, than, say the same thing from Anna's would. Same situation, just a different outlook on life, yeah? Report Review
oh wow, you weren't joking... he is the perfect sirius look alike!!! :O
great chapter!!! :)
10/10Author's Response: I just love to look at him - he looks so great. ;) Report Review
Hahahaha!! Me and my three friends made cupcakes once, and my friend was about to eat one so i shouted at her to not eat bob. She gave me and our other frind a weird look (as she had started to play along) in the end we concluded tht angie needed to read polychromatic.she never didAuthor's Response: Sometimes I wish my friends were fanfic dorks like me. lol. But I'm a closeted fanfic reader/writer so I just love to hear about when my readers read Poly with their friends. :) Report Review
Oh my god. Saddest thing ever. :(Author's Response: Sadness. :( Report Review
I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! it was the first story i ever read on hpff,and its definatly my favorite!!! I'm gonna log in later to favorite it. Specially since this is the story tht got me hooked on sirius/oc. And the whole marauder eraAuthor's Response: Aww! Well I'm so glad you read it and returned to it! Marauder Era's my favorite. Lily/James is more my style though, just because I can't see Sirius with anyone other than Anna now. :) Report Review
No! Okay, I totally knew it was coming obviously, but, still, it was rather depressing.snob sob. I feel the worst for Sirius I think. Also, I love, love, love, the Fun Facts. I forgot about them. Especially the James one. And Stephen.
Aw, I love boys. How could you not? Well, I can see how you wouldn't, obviously...Author's Response: Sadness . . . I wish it didn't have to happen. :(
Haha, well, I suppose I could see how someone wouldn't love boys but I know that I'm big fan. lol Report Review
No. This is where it all ends and gets awful and sad and depressing. :(
But yeah, it was still bloody fantastic.Author's Response: Typical Marauders. :D Report Review
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