Ah, her worst nightmare, a girlfriend! Can't wait to see how this plays out!
MNFAuthor's Response: I'm glad you've kept reading! Report Review
Another interesting chapter. I take it Anna is blind to the notion she's good looking? She certainly seems to attract them. Holiday weekend so off to read more.
MNFAuthor's Response: Sort of. She's very comfortable and confident in herself. That, coupled with her natural attractiveness tends to hook something in guys. Report Review
The story is moving along nicely. Love the characters. Can't wait to see where you take this.
MNFAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Yes, the VHS would have been available, but insanely expensive! Her family must be rich!
MNFAuthor's Response: We'll just have to take a little leeway with the time period then. Her family isn't rich, but they're well-off enough. At least, that's what I tried to convey. Report Review
This story is such an easy read! You characters and pacing are excellent! I'm in love with it already!
MNFAuthor's Response: Oh that's great! Thank you! Report Review
Great start! Can't wait to read more!
MNFAuthor's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the story! Report Review
I love the list that Sirius made about Anastasia. So cute.
Also the elevator part was hilarious!!
Another awesome chapter!!Author's Response: I know I should have used 'lift', since they're british and all, but lift isn't very hard to pronounce, and James would have sounded much less silly. :)
Thanks! Report Review
I really liked Darren's POV.
I really didn't like the character when you first introduced him and he started dating Anastasia.
But now I think I'm starting to like him.Author's Response: Haha, that's actually what happened to me. I brought him in to throw a little something into the mix, and I ended up liking him so much I gave him his own chapters and story line. :) Report Review
You cannot do this!
You cannot break them up! Please.Author's Response: . . . Sorry :/ Report Review
Wow! She eats like a dinosaur and SILL has such an amazing body!
Lucky.Author's Response: She runs, though. I suppose I don't mention it much but she's constantly moving stay in shape.
My roommates one of the girls that does nothing and eats everything and stays in perfect shape while I work out a few hours a day and eat healthy. Hate her, but I gotta love her haha Report Review
Aww... James and Lilly..
You finally mentioned Snape. I was starting to wonder why he hadn't come up yet.Author's Response: Yeah, it occurred to me pretty late in the game that Snape should be in there somewhere. I figured by their sixth year they were less interested in torturing him, especially after Lily chastised James in their fifth year. At least . . . That's what we're gonna say to pretend I didn't just forget. :) Report Review
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I am sooo in love with this right now! And you have a VERY good taste in music, my friend. Have you heard of never shout never? They are AMAZING! I love them but I quess my name says that:) I still haven't got around to creating an account yet though! 77 chapters? That is the second longest fan fiction I will ever have read and any good fanfictions on here? I have ran out of stuff to read!How do you say Xanthis? I have always been bad with names :/ 10/10 so far!Author's Response: Awww! Thanks, dear! I love my music, and my tastes have expanded even since I wrote this. I'm a pretty prolific listener.
If I'm being honest, I haven't read much fanfic lately; i barely write anymore. I'm sorry that I haven't got any good recommendations. :(
Xanthis is pronounced 'Zanthis.' (Don't feel bad, Greek names are pretty difficult.) Report Review
Oh my god! I LOVE THIS STORY! I really like how you put in memories of James (and Lily). I also like how you finally made the title of this story make sense. I'm totally going to read the sequals!
KEEP WRITING :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I was feeling nostalgic while writing, so I thought it was only appropriate. Report Review
I was sitting here, after this last chapter, with tears dripping down my face because it was over and the last few chapters were so sad! I truly admire you for being able to write James' and Lily's death scene - I'm writing a marauders era story, but I'm changing the ending because I just can't bring myself to write it. This is my first time reading this story, but it definitely won't be the last! Also, have you tried writing next gen? I think you'd be great at it! Love always, :)xxAuthor's Response: I did have parts of a next gen fic drafted (they were a continuation of Polychromatic and it's sequel, Versicolor) but they got deleted in a broken USB debacle a few years ago.
Since then, I haven't been writing as frequently. I don't think I'll ever get around to writing that far into this series, but I really enjoyed it at the time. Report Review
I truly admire you for being able to write James and Lily's death scene, I really do. I am in the process of writing a marauders fanfic, but I've changed the ending because I just can't bring myself to write it. Love always, xx :)Author's Response: Scenes like that aren't really my forte, but I tried my hand at it. I hope it wasn't completely horrid.
I always have trouble writing sad things, so I had to work up from things like James' Mum dying and such. Report Review
I love how Remus is a manwhore in your story because it just doesn't seem in his nature, but you portray it really well! Much love, :)xxAuthor's Response: I always felt like he couldn't be as perfect as everyone portrayed him to be. Someone that wise did a lot of stupid things when they were younger, definitely. :) Report Review
I'm pretty much writing this review solely because you had The Nightamre Before Christmas lyrics at the beginning of this chapter, which pretty much means I love you ;P I love this story btw :)xxAuthor's Response: Haha it's great, isn't it? I love that it's seasonally appropriate during Christmas AND Halloween. :)
Thanks! Report Review
I absolutely LOVE the character development and detail. Your interpretations of the characters are PERFECT. Your writing keeps me reading and pulled into the story. I am a big Marauders geek, so this is perfect. I usually am not huge on OC characters, but I absolutely love Anna. YOU ARE INCREDIBLE. I aspire to be as successful as you. (Please check out my fanfic and review) Keep writing!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I realized my strengths and weaknesses in writing and character development is definetely one of my better abilities.
I love the Marauders as well! :)
I'm on break this week, so I'll try to pop in and read/review your story! :) Report Review
Fourth time reading this story, still as good as the first time. Amazing. Talented writer :)Author's Response: Aww! Yay! Thank you! Report Review
whats up with the number 7? haha, just wondering if i missed something there but i like the chapter and overall story!Author's Response: In JKR's book the number 7 was a trend number. It's also my favorite number, so whenever I need a number, I usually pick or, or another number with the number 7 in it lol. Report Review
I have absolutely loved this story and cannot wait to start the sequel! Great job! :) Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the sequel just as much! Report Review
So, I just finished reading "Polychromatic" for the third time. Yes, the third. Every time that I am in the mood to read HP fanfics I somehow make my way back jto this one, because it is one of my all time favorites. I just wanted to tell you this and mention how much I absolutely love this story. I love the characters, the plot, and the way that I can't read this in a public place because there is no way that I can hold in my laughter. There have been times where I have literally had tears running down my face from the laughter. So, to finish, you are a fantastic writer, and I am no going to go read the sequel!Author's Response: Oh, gosh! Thank you! I say it a lot, but reviews like this are really what keeps me wanting to finish my stories when real life catches up to me! Thank you! :) Report Review
Totally agree with Sirius = Eduardo Verastegui.Author's Response: The only one who can capture Sirius' true beauty! Report Review
This chapier was Hilarious!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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