I loved the story so much up until the pregnancy part. I'm really sorry and I know, I know, it's part of the story but personally I don't like stories like that. I loved this but the pregnancy was a complete turn off. Well good story anyway Report Review
I don't have much to say about this epic chapter... but I've always wondered why the Aurors just didn't check Sirius's wand and see that he hadn't cast those spells that allegedly killed all those people. Huh. Great job, as usual! :D Report Review
I'm nearly crying. James; I love him so much. He's an amazing character, and I really enjoyed how you've written him. I'm really sorry that this part of the story didn't go over to the AU portion, but I suppose I'd be a bit disappointed either way; I'm obsessed with things being true to the books. Anyway, this was a great chapter, as usual! Thanks, MagykNargle Report Review
I'd completely forgotten that this is an AU story! Jeez, that makes SO much more sense now! I was going to cry if it ended up with Anna and the kids dead. It would've been positively horrible. So, even though I still don't know how it IS going to end, I'm very much relieved and happy. This is a great plot, amazing writing, and overall very good. Thank you, MagykNargle Report Review
I dunno why exactly, but I LOVED this chapter. Even so, you broke my heart my having Anna turn Sirius's proposal down. Obviously, I know they wouldn't end up married, but it still hurt. I love this story so much! :D Thanks, MagykNargle Report Review
This chapter was brilliant, as per usual! I'm so sad I'm almost done reading, but I'll definitely go check out your other stories when I finish! Thanks, MagykNargle Report Review
Since I'm sleepy and my iPod battery is dying, I'll just leave a really short review so I can read another chapter before sleeping. I almost cried when Anna and Sirius said goodbye. And Stephen... Gah, it's been so many chapters since him that I nearly forgot. Anyways, great chapter as usual! Cheers! MagykNargle Report Review
You have come up with the most brilliant characters for this story! I LOVE Anna and Sirius's immaturity, James's... Jamesitude, and all the other boys' perverted sense of fun. It's just so entertaining to read! I'm having a GREAT time reading! And it's a hugely long story (yippee, another plus! Even if it will continue to keep me up all might again...)! Also, before I continue reading, I just want to point out that I'm in love with the name of this story. Polychromatic... It's just so creative! I'm young and occasionally faillish, so I had to look up the definition the first time, but now it's one of my favourite words! Oh, jeez. I use as many exclamation points as Anna, hahaha. Thanks, MagykNargle Report Review
This is very interesting! I've seen quite a few typos, but I love the writing style and the storyline. :) Great job; I'm off to continue reading! Report Review
Hi, um, why is everything 'frog' 'bunny rabbit' 'eyebrow'? I really don't get it. Could you explain? Report Review
Oh. My. Gosh. You are amazing. I almost never review, but that was so fantastic that I had to tell you so. I am so happy there is a sequel and this is probably my favourite Marauders fic. And they're my favourite. Keep writing cause you are amazing. Report Review
His last name was never mentioned. I checked Report Review
I just read the first 25 chapters in one sitting. It's addictive, and amazing! I love how crazy all the characters are, and I CANNOT wait for Anna and Sirius to get together. It will be just epic. Report Review
I swear that I am Annastasia! I have a larger chest, my real name is long and boring(Elizabeth), so I make people use my nickname(Biz), I'm friends with older guys, I have long unruly hair, an older brother, I am a chocoholic, I am always called immature, and I cannot be girly to save my life!!! The only major difference is that I am tall(5'9 US measurements). I absolutely love your story and admire your persistence while writing this, because I have yet to finish or even post a fanfic of my own!!! Report Review
You bascilly just changed history..LOL...not that I hate it..It's just so original! 10/10! You deserved it!Author's Response: I was pretty torn. On one hand, I wanted to stick to the books, but on the other hand, I couldn't let things happen the way they did. I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
lol! Set them on fire!! Honestly! Typical AnnaAuthor's Response: She's ridiculous, haha. Report Review
So far..I am soo impressed with you story. Buttt..I don't think one can be Qudditch Captain and Head Boy at the same time! ;)Author's Response: Thanks! Ah, well, there's always an exception to the rule, no? :) Report Review
This story was above all amazing. I don't believe I have ever read anything more hilarious, thrilling, mind bobbling, and touching. It was perfect and I enjoyed every word, syllable, and sentence. It made me cry, laugh, and hyperventate (from laughing so hard). It was absolutey heart warming and just absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read the next book! Which I am moving on to, just as soon as I finish posting this. You have an amazing gift for writing and it is astonishing. I love how you incorperated Darren and Damon into the story, which, above all, were my two favorite characters. Especially Darren. I loved Stephen as well, may I add. Anywho, just wanted to let you know how in love I am and was with this story and it has topped even famously published books that I have read. ~Lily Lou Author's Response: I just. Wow. I can't even. I wish I could convey how thankful I am that you feel this strongly and chose to share that with me. Honestly, I love this story and these characters more than anything. I basically grew up with them while I was writing this in high school, and that someone else feels that they were as great as I think they are, well, I just can't really explain how wonderful that feels for me. So there really is nothing I can say other than thank you so much! Report Review
Simply excellent work on your use of All Time Low quoting :D I'm a hude die-hard fan of theirs... Anyway, I love the story! i realise you probably wrote it years ago now, but better late than never, yeah? It is really good, and I was wondering if you could help me? I'm writing my own fanfic and I don't know how to get a banner! Please help!!!Author's Response: Ah, aren't they the greatest? Yes, many, many years ago. Haha. I was a Sophomore in high school when I started writing, I think, and now I'm a junior in college. Time FLIES. I'm sorry this is a bit late and I don't know if you've found someone by now, but if you go to the forums associated with this site, there is another site called the Dark Arts with lots of talented banner makers who would love to help! Report Review
Im a guy and i think its great!Author's Response: That's wonderful to hear! I hope you continue to enjoy it! Report Review
This shit is addicting ... thanks so much for making me stay up late when i have to rise and shine early tomorrow (like i'd ever rise and shine) anyways ... Anyways, seriously ... i love this =) I guess you already know, but i thought i'd tell you nevertheless.Author's Response: Oh, I remember the days when i used to stay up for hours on end reading and writing fanfiction. Now my nights are full of work and the highly coveted few hours of sleep. I miss it! Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to review! I always love to hear from my readers! Report Review
you absolute and complete legend. perfect quote (i'm a huge atl fan) and a very good story. love it! xoxoAuthor's Response: Ah, wow! Absolute and complete legend. I like that, haha. Report Review
I love your story a lot, and I just wanted to mention that I am also a HUGE fan of FOB and All Time Low! Thanks again for writing this story! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I only wish FOB was still touring . . . I'd love to see them again. Report Review
Anna's newly disclosed size reminds me of my own body :') Too large breasts, HIPS, presumably little waist? Anyway, I'm a way late reader, and I'm positively adoring every moment! love, brianneAuthor's Response: Late reader, or not, I appreciate you all! I hope you're enjoying! Report Review
It was amazing I read your story in 3 days and remember nothing about them other then reading. I cried and laughed so hard during this fanfic. I know j.k Rowling would approveAuthor's Response: I'm so happy to hear it! I love to hear that my story has emoted a response! Report Review
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